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Very good story. Interesting development of the world. The pace of storytelling is like i prefer, whithout rushing and with enough details. Please, keep up the good work.
This is a really good AU of Martin's Planetos. It is well-written, the development is interesting, and the characters are like-able. The MC is a chill dude, which makes the story nice to read. He isn't some edgy murder hobo, thankfully, and the harem idea is well-executed - especially if one looks at it from the perspective of someone who has no idea of the morals of the late 19th century and onwards.
Is good but as always you dont finish the novel for god shake When will you finish one of you novels all of them are pretty good but you don’t finish them I had read them a few times when I don’t have anything to read and always leave me on wanting more of the novel
It’s not written like a story skips between people so much that the main character does not even feel like he’s important
Read till ch 180. A solid fic, Pity that the last chapter was uploaded 11 months ago. IDK if the story finishes or author just dropped but I ain't gonna read coz I don't like ending a story I started reading lol. GREAT WORK!
I did not even read it I just think it’s stupid to write a story and say the first fourteen chapters are basically filler nothing interesting and it dosent pick up until 40 to 80 that’s crazy
can someone tell the name of the fanfic where mc and Daenerys both are reincarnated and mc is a master of weapon ? the story takes place before the story of game of thrones.
Love this! Please keep updating. No new chap in a while, is it abandoned? I heard you gon finish ur other stories first. how long that gon take?
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Yeah, pretending to be an author. Such a mess in just first few chapters, that you understand how much shame this novelists have nowadays. Lots of stupid woman running amok all over westeros, cause an idiot can't decide on his hormonal stupidness
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Interesting concept and pretty entertaining so far. I can understand the criticisms it gets for it is not perfect, but I appreciate it for what it is, nonetheless. Thank you to the Author for making this pleasant story and hopefully more readers that thinks similarly finds this gem.
Me gusta la forma en la que escribe este autor tanto a sus personajes originales como a los no originales , tienen un desarrollo coherente a mi entender , el mundo se siente vivo , lo único de lo que me puedo quejar seria de los tiempos de actualización pero teniendo tres historias a la vez lo entiendo
Ótima historia ..................................................................................................................................................
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Well look, by the way I found this novel again, I give it 1 star, due to a misleading label. .............................................................
Es una muy buena historia , los caracteres de los personajes están muy bien escritos y tienen profundidad , algo complicado de seguir si no has leído los libros pero con el tiempo te acostumbra , también , la magnitud de la cantidad de personajes puede ser complicado pero igual te acostumbras.
for those who want to know: story development 2 the rest 4 the beginnin of the story is quite boring and there are many oc characters. after about 20 to 30 chapters the story gets better and is quite enjoyable. From chapter 130 onwards the story development is taking a turn for the worse. The mc overcomes his main antagonists off without a struggle. The blackfires were established as a bigger enemy with the backing of the golden company. They were brought down by some assasin and then they were just integrated with the mc. Viserys had the potential to be this character in the family of the mc, that would betray him and give the mc problems by being jealous, … But then he just said, that his canon behaviour was just an act and he is fully ok with being cucked by the mc. In the end the mc gets all the women, that the author wants him to have and the story is being developed in such a way, that the mc has no problems. Overall that makes the story boring in the later stages and unsatisfying
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Good story. All characters have very deep storys and wonderful picturization. I hade an excellent time reading it and I hope it won't be dropped [img=update]
So confusing, you can write it off as normal, but again it's your choice. I didn't enjoy it even though I tried my best. You wanted to create something extraordinary but now it is totally a mess , I wish the writing style of this novel was normal. I'm giving it 2 stars because I feel like I wasted my time here
I don't understand why are authors putting a tag which does not relates to mc why i understand that there is yuri elements in it but mc is a male right so no yuri tag should be used.Tags are there to summarize mc's character and about the world not others.If you put yuri tag then you have to add Bi in your summary as MC's Women are Bi .Just my opinion
well just here to give the rightfully deserved rate of this story. tbh I have nothing to say because everything is perfec: world building, characters development, plot, grammar...in short don't waste time reading reviews and directly go to read the story
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This novel is just so underrated. The changing perspective is awesome, you just can't get bored following a single person. The first person's point of view is addicting. Lastly, this author is one of those hidden gems out there.
Perhaps for someone this story will be interesting, well, for me this story does not look interesting, I was able to read 45 chapters by force.
Very good story, but I would like more frequent updates. And I would also like more interactions between the main character and other secondary characters.
Hey, before I read any further I'd like to know if Eragon ends up being the king or just traveling around supporting Viesery or someone else.
The name of the protagonist and the other characters is confusing, added to the poor quality of the writing, the story is too confusing, which gives headaches when trying to understand and order it. It may not be consistent with the social environment, but it would be preferable for the protagonist to be called Bob, Max, Alex, Carlos, Manuel, Miguel, Pepito... Also, the point of view (POV) changes in this story are another reason why it's confusing, they're poorly done. You could dedicate an entire chapter to the POV of the other characters, but don't combine 2 or more POV in a single chapter. Finally, it is not known exactly at what moment a character is speaking or thinking, nor at what moment the characters start or end the dialogue.
all the relationships between the characters seem strained and clumsy......................................................................................................................
Very much a lemons and harem novel, but I still enjoy the plot and the overall story.
what can I say the story is awesome and each individual character's has depth in it, the world building was so on point that you can feel the author passion resonate in each chapter it is a most read for serious Game of thrones fan
Very good story. Interesting development of the world. The pace of storytelling is like i prefer, whithout rushing and with enough details. Please, keep up the good work.
This is a really good AU of Martin's Planetos. It is well-written, the development is interesting, and the characters are like-able. The MC is a chill dude, which makes the story nice to read. He isn't some edgy murder hobo, thankfully, and the harem idea is well-executed - especially if one looks at it from the perspective of someone who has no idea of the morals of the late 19th century and onwards.
Is good but as always you dont finish the novel for god shake When will you finish one of you novels all of them are pretty good but you don’t finish them I had read them a few times when I don’t have anything to read and always leave me on wanting more of the novel
It’s not written like a story skips between people so much that the main character does not even feel like he’s important
Read till ch 180. A solid fic, Pity that the last chapter was uploaded 11 months ago. IDK if the story finishes or author just dropped but I ain't gonna read coz I don't like ending a story I started reading lol. GREAT WORK!
I did not even read it I just think it’s stupid to write a story and say the first fourteen chapters are basically filler nothing interesting and it dosent pick up until 40 to 80 that’s crazy
can someone tell the name of the fanfic where mc and Daenerys both are reincarnated and mc is a master of weapon ? the story takes place before the story of game of thrones.
Love this! Please keep updating. No new chap in a while, is it abandoned? I heard you gon finish ur other stories first. how long that gon take?
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Yeah, pretending to be an author. Such a mess in just first few chapters, that you understand how much shame this novelists have nowadays. Lots of stupid woman running amok all over westeros, cause an idiot can't decide on his hormonal stupidness
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Interesting concept and pretty entertaining so far. I can understand the criticisms it gets for it is not perfect, but I appreciate it for what it is, nonetheless. Thank you to the Author for making this pleasant story and hopefully more readers that thinks similarly finds this gem.
Me gusta la forma en la que escribe este autor tanto a sus personajes originales como a los no originales , tienen un desarrollo coherente a mi entender , el mundo se siente vivo , lo único de lo que me puedo quejar seria de los tiempos de actualización pero teniendo tres historias a la vez lo entiendo
Ótima historia ..................................................................................................................................................
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Well look, by the way I found this novel again, I give it 1 star, due to a misleading label. .............................................................
Es una muy buena historia , los caracteres de los personajes están muy bien escritos y tienen profundidad , algo complicado de seguir si no has leído los libros pero con el tiempo te acostumbra , también , la magnitud de la cantidad de personajes puede ser complicado pero igual te acostumbras.
for those who want to know: story development 2 the rest 4 the beginnin of the story is quite boring and there are many oc characters. after about 20 to 30 chapters the story gets better and is quite enjoyable. From chapter 130 onwards the story development is taking a turn for the worse. The mc overcomes his main antagonists off without a struggle. The blackfires were established as a bigger enemy with the backing of the golden company. They were brought down by some assasin and then they were just integrated with the mc. Viserys had the potential to be this character in the family of the mc, that would betray him and give the mc problems by being jealous, … But then he just said, that his canon behaviour was just an act and he is fully ok with being cucked by the mc. In the end the mc gets all the women, that the author wants him to have and the story is being developed in such a way, that the mc has no problems. Overall that makes the story boring in the later stages and unsatisfying
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Good story. All characters have very deep storys and wonderful picturization. I hade an excellent time reading it and I hope it won't be dropped [img=update]
So confusing, you can write it off as normal, but again it's your choice. I didn't enjoy it even though I tried my best. You wanted to create something extraordinary but now it is totally a mess , I wish the writing style of this novel was normal. I'm giving it 2 stars because I feel like I wasted my time here
I don't understand why are authors putting a tag which does not relates to mc why i understand that there is yuri elements in it but mc is a male right so no yuri tag should be used.Tags are there to summarize mc's character and about the world not others.If you put yuri tag then you have to add Bi in your summary as MC's Women are Bi .Just my opinion
well just here to give the rightfully deserved rate of this story. tbh I have nothing to say because everything is perfec: world building, characters development, plot, grammar...in short don't waste time reading reviews and directly go to read the story
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This novel is just so underrated. The changing perspective is awesome, you just can't get bored following a single person. The first person's point of view is addicting. Lastly, this author is one of those hidden gems out there.
Perhaps for someone this story will be interesting, well, for me this story does not look interesting, I was able to read 45 chapters by force.
Very good story, but I would like more frequent updates. And I would also like more interactions between the main character and other secondary characters.
Hey, before I read any further I'd like to know if Eragon ends up being the king or just traveling around supporting Viesery or someone else.
The name of the protagonist and the other characters is confusing, added to the poor quality of the writing, the story is too confusing, which gives headaches when trying to understand and order it. It may not be consistent with the social environment, but it would be preferable for the protagonist to be called Bob, Max, Alex, Carlos, Manuel, Miguel, Pepito... Also, the point of view (POV) changes in this story are another reason why it's confusing, they're poorly done. You could dedicate an entire chapter to the POV of the other characters, but don't combine 2 or more POV in a single chapter. Finally, it is not known exactly at what moment a character is speaking or thinking, nor at what moment the characters start or end the dialogue.
all the relationships between the characters seem strained and clumsy......................................................................................................................
Very much a lemons and harem novel, but I still enjoy the plot and the overall story.
what can I say the story is awesome and each individual character's has depth in it, the world building was so on point that you can feel the author passion resonate in each chapter it is a most read for serious Game of thrones fan