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- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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20 chapters in so far and I have to say I’m surprised this dosent have more traction. This is actually pretty well written so far and im looking foward to seeing it continue on a good path. I’d recommend you give it a try it has a decent pace for the goal of the main plot and things don’t seem to be stagnant. Examples being authors who write storys where so much happens in a few days. I will update my review when I read more to warn you of any danger lol. <3
This is a great story. Although it's still at the beginning, I can already see a lot of potential in it. Some qualities I've identified are: It has chapters every day, there are hardly any grammatical errors, the plot is well thought out and, best of all, the characters aren't stupid. I also have a couple of criticisms: the beginning of the story is too rushed and the lack of reaction from the church of that world when it finds out about someone who has revived and claims to have known God. (The two problems I mentioned could be solved with extra chapters focused on world-building). (I'd like to say that I'm enjoying the story and wish it success.)
Hi everybody the author here. I'm putting this here to tell everyone that reads to please leave feedback to my writing as I know new writer can have many flaws. Any criticism is appreciated and valued. if you wish to see a map of the local realm then just check the synopsis and look at the Pinterest link. this is also a shamless review but I think 5he story is very good and can goo many way :)
20 chapters in so far and I have to say I’m surprised this dosent have more traction. This is actually pretty well written so far and im looking foward to seeing it continue on a good path. I’d recommend you give it a try it has a decent pace for the goal of the main plot and things don’t seem to be stagnant. Examples being authors who write storys where so much happens in a few days. I will update my review when I read more to warn you of any danger lol. <3
This is a great story. Although it's still at the beginning, I can already see a lot of potential in it. Some qualities I've identified are: It has chapters every day, there are hardly any grammatical errors, the plot is well thought out and, best of all, the characters aren't stupid. I also have a couple of criticisms: the beginning of the story is too rushed and the lack of reaction from the church of that world when it finds out about someone who has revived and claims to have known God. (The two problems I mentioned could be solved with extra chapters focused on world-building). (I'd like to say that I'm enjoying the story and wish it success.)
Hi everybody the author here. I'm putting this here to tell everyone that reads to please leave feedback to my writing as I know new writer can have many flaws. Any criticism is appreciated and valued. if you wish to see a map of the local realm then just check the synopsis and look at the Pinterest link. this is also a shamless review but I think 5he story is very good and can goo many way :)