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pls upload more it's so good it's just it's so slow I need more can someone pls recommend something else like this with a lot of chapters
This is a really good read, really well though and planned out. It is a slow burn and alot like real life, so it is really new perspective and unique. If author can add bit more hummer into it that will be great because that goes really well with slow pace storys. Good luck.
everything just makes sense to me pretty good fan fic just wish it would update sooner
It takes Naruto and makes it reasonable through the eyes of a non protagonist. The world building is insane and expands hugely on the base material while still holding true to the source material. Yeah it's a slow burn and the MC isn't OP but that's what makes it so good. He has to work for everything, no dumb system helping him out, no instant talent or finding a hidden jutsu that he relies on the whole fic. It's an authentic, intelligent guy trying to make his way in a world where assasination is day to day. It's definitely one of the most well rounded and engaging stories on this site. It isn't a power fantasy and it isn't turn-your-brain-off fun, but if your looking for a good story I highly reccomend.
A score of 4.2 is wildly wrong. This fic is great, it’s just a very, very, *very* slow burn. However, it has amazing moments, characters, and world building. Every victory the mc makes truly feels earned. A lot of original characters are used to move the story, but it is done in a natural way. Some OG Naruto characters also show up at natural times keeping the story exciting, but also grounded. Very good stuff.
objectively this is a damn good novel and one of the best out there on the platform. form a damn good author. but for me personally this novel is bit too dark . but i get it , read it i enjoyed it and felt it. but the story is not for me . if you like dark and hevy theme them go for it
Writing 10/10 Pacing 8/10 World building 11/10 Interaction 10/10 No NPC characters Fleshed out characters 3 chapters a week but I will take it Perfect for me. The transformation MC got in these 300 chapters from Wimp to mature Chad for a transmigrator who lost most of his past memories is phenomenal. Starting 100 chapters were hard to read but I kept going and even skipped some detective chapters which didn't affect anything in story. And after Root attack I heard Boss music playing and yeah I was hooked. We met Iruma, Anko, Naruto, Sasuke, itachi , fugaku guy and hokage. Slow romance with Mikoto and Arisu was Chef kiss. I am liking it so far and will like it unless MC changes suddenly amd becomes psuchopath.
Actually, I thought I was about to drop this fanfic, but good thing I didn't. At the first 50-ish chapters of the fanfic, I felt that the MC was utterly too stupid being someone who got isekaid, but I thinks its just the standards set by all of the other fanfics I've read. Overall, the story has a very slow pace, but enjoyable to read. There are some typographical and grammatical errors in some chapters. Overall, I hope the author would continue writing this [img=recommend]
I’ve sat on this story for a while. Reading the reviews had given me mixed feelings and when I read this for the first time I couldn’t make it through 10 chapters. So I left it alone in my library for a while. All of my favorite stories are caught up so I figured I’d give it another shot. I’d like to express my gratitude to FictionOnlyReader. I loved your kuroko no basket story and everyone who reads HP fics enjoyed A magical Journey, so you can imagine my surprise when I had a very hard time trying to read this. Constantly I had to force myself to keep up with Takuma and his failures, wining, and slow progress. Constantly I had to force myself to not drop this book. Through 100+ chapters I had to watch a regular person get suddenly thrust into a very dangerous and no longer shounen world and somewhere along the way I understood. This story is a masterpiece. This story is a representation of a regular person forced into a very real version of Naruto. No bloodline(yet?), no super chakra(yet?), no clan(yet). Can the people reading this review honest to God tell me that you would fair any better? But that’s not the point. The point being this is an amazing take on the world of Naruto. We see the consequences of a real world here. When Takuma screws up he has serious consequences as you might have read or will read and they’ve had everlasting effects on how the story plays out. Yeah its hard to read, but in real life when something bad happens alot of people can’t watch and that’s what happened here. FictionOnlyReader has taken the Shounen World of Naruto and brought it to life. This is by far, with no comparison, the most realistic fanfiction of Naruto ever written…. AND ITS FUCKING AWESOME! The quality of the writing, the plot, the consequences, the world building, all of it is simply beautiful. To FictionOnlyReader: Watching your writing improve from kuroko No Basket to A Magical Journey was awesome, but seeing your writing from there to here is simply incredible. Keep up the hard work and hopefully someday I’ll get to see a world you’ve created by yourself.
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I would say it is a one of a kind fanfic. The character promotes growth in a very realistic setting. It might be difficult to start with a weak and pathetic looking mc but towards the end he becomes one of the best character developed person. Dont pass out on this gem due to lacking an OP Mc
I've been reading this book since it came out, so I never looked at the rating. Ignore all of these guys who have given it a bad score. Many of them clearly haven't read very far and don't know crap. Most of them dropped it in the first part of the first arc, saying, "Oh, Takuma is a beta and soooo weak." Takuma is just quiet and going through something any regular person would find traumatic. On the weak part, that's kind of the point, is it not? We are reading about Takuma, who has nothing and no prior skill with any ninja things, learning and developing. Takuma, once he gets his feet under him, never actually feels weak. This is a fantastic fanfic written by a fantastic author, and I highly recommend it.
I think this is one of the best Naruto fanfics I have read. I will preface this by saying it is slow and I mean SLOW. The mc gets promoted to chunin 300ish chapters in, he is chunin level well before this but as a benchmark of the speed of the story. This will cause some people to go feral because they are used to OP mc's after 10 chapters but in this story the mc starts out so bad because it's meant to be a realistic portrayal of if a random joe got dropped in Naruto. But because the mc starts so terribly with each victory he gets, all the progress and experiences feel like an actual win and feel real. You actually root for him instead of going "Oh of course he'll win duh". I will say the writing is rough at times with a few mistakes of words being misspelled or mixing up which character is being referred to but other than those it is easy to read, a lot better than most on this site. I would 100% recommend reading this fanfic most of the bad reviews are from the start of the book and as with everything it is better to read it and form your own opinion
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love it but the only flaw is its to slow 300+ chapther for him to become chuni. hope the auther dont mess up and go with the cliche of hasirama cell experment bull shit. i wonder how the shinobi world would be when so manu uchias are still alive when any random incident may awaken some monster.
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Author has totally left the story of Naruto and started his own novel in that same world where for more that 175+ chapters protagonist is just sufferings pain, inequality and traumas without even reaching the power level of chunin. Protagonist has fought 100+ matches in underground arena during these chapters and still considered a canon-folder. He also started selling drugs for extra cash even when he knew that he'll just become a pawn for mafia which was that first time I heard exist in Naruto but yes author added many of the extra things which aren't their in the actual series. I still wasn't able to figure out why would danzo sent 4 assasins after him but he did after which he was directed posted in frontline removing him from being the leader of narcotics department in police force. There's too much struggle and story is extremely extremely slow, depressing and just leaving many of the important characters while adding some other new characters of underground rings, drug dealers, other organisations which recruite genins, etc.
Just know that i think this is the best ff i ve read, dont listen to the haters pal
I just cant read this man. Im supposed to enjoy my time reading these books and fics but my mood is only getting worse by reading it because its just so pitiful. This is an extremely realistic take on a transmigration in Naruto. Yes, extreeeeeeeeeeemeeeeely. Read at your own discretion.
you wont find a fanfic as engaging and realistic as this everyone feels like there actually alive and its not just some crap written down on a page it doesnt feel like a fanfic but like its own story in the naruto world amazing work and im sad that ive caught up
I have started reading the reviews lately and goddamn there were some really bad ones for this book. These reviews are not doing justice to what an amazing fic this is. As someone who has finished this book I say people are saying it’s a bad fic because they don’t give it a chance. It’s not a typical overpowered mc rather a person who was given nothing, No kekke genkai, no talent and not even the memories of who he transmigrated into. He suffered in the start because he was still adjusting to his new life as a trainee child soldier. It’s very realistic approach. The world building is great, the interactions between characters are great and fun to read and the story development is the best. The reason I’m not giving this fic a 5 is because the updates are not as consistent as they once were. This fanfic is great give it a try and atleast try to read 100 chapters before arguing with me.
Best Naruto ff. Writing is Solid. what hooked me was when it root attacked mc on the same level or better than Naruto wind calamity. Pros:- Phenomenal character development Power scaling [MC as of now chaper 325 is the Strongest Chunin and maybe he got wood style] Side characters Slow Romance Mystery of the og body Relationships and emotional depiction Cons :- too much Slow paces in starting 100 chapters Extended Polic & Genin corp training arc
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Those readers of this site who only read 1 chapter and want to give an assessment as if they already know what the whole novel is like is sad. The only works that deserve such treatment are works with a harem. This is a very good work and extremely slow development. It takes you a while to catch up to her rhythm. The mc suffers so much that when he achieves something good you are happy for him. If you like the game Project Zomboid, then this ff will probably appeal to you.
The author has potential, but it seems like he was smoking something strong when he wrote this novel. Let's start with the fact that each chapter is the same story: The protagonist is distressed, he trains, He loses a fight, trains more, beats a weakling, and then loses again, repeating the cycle. Another fatal thing is that the author does not know how to describe sophisticated fights, they are all barbaric fights, This makes it seem like it's not a ninja world. Giving Naruto a dark background is not a bad idea, but it was done terribly wrong. I don't want to give spoilers, But there are some smoking issues that would not be allowed in the leaf village. And the slow pace of the novel... It's only good when the story is entertaining and has a point to go to.
pls upload more it's so good it's just it's so slow I need more can someone pls recommend something else like this with a lot of chapters
This is a really good read, really well though and planned out. It is a slow burn and alot like real life, so it is really new perspective and unique. If author can add bit more hummer into it that will be great because that goes really well with slow pace storys. Good luck.
everything just makes sense to me pretty good fan fic just wish it would update sooner
It takes Naruto and makes it reasonable through the eyes of a non protagonist. The world building is insane and expands hugely on the base material while still holding true to the source material. Yeah it's a slow burn and the MC isn't OP but that's what makes it so good. He has to work for everything, no dumb system helping him out, no instant talent or finding a hidden jutsu that he relies on the whole fic. It's an authentic, intelligent guy trying to make his way in a world where assasination is day to day. It's definitely one of the most well rounded and engaging stories on this site. It isn't a power fantasy and it isn't turn-your-brain-off fun, but if your looking for a good story I highly reccomend.
A score of 4.2 is wildly wrong. This fic is great, it’s just a very, very, *very* slow burn. However, it has amazing moments, characters, and world building. Every victory the mc makes truly feels earned. A lot of original characters are used to move the story, but it is done in a natural way. Some OG Naruto characters also show up at natural times keeping the story exciting, but also grounded. Very good stuff.
objectively this is a damn good novel and one of the best out there on the platform. form a damn good author. but for me personally this novel is bit too dark . but i get it , read it i enjoyed it and felt it. but the story is not for me . if you like dark and hevy theme them go for it
Writing 10/10 Pacing 8/10 World building 11/10 Interaction 10/10 No NPC characters Fleshed out characters 3 chapters a week but I will take it Perfect for me. The transformation MC got in these 300 chapters from Wimp to mature Chad for a transmigrator who lost most of his past memories is phenomenal. Starting 100 chapters were hard to read but I kept going and even skipped some detective chapters which didn't affect anything in story. And after Root attack I heard Boss music playing and yeah I was hooked. We met Iruma, Anko, Naruto, Sasuke, itachi , fugaku guy and hokage. Slow romance with Mikoto and Arisu was Chef kiss. I am liking it so far and will like it unless MC changes suddenly amd becomes psuchopath.
Actually, I thought I was about to drop this fanfic, but good thing I didn't. At the first 50-ish chapters of the fanfic, I felt that the MC was utterly too stupid being someone who got isekaid, but I thinks its just the standards set by all of the other fanfics I've read. Overall, the story has a very slow pace, but enjoyable to read. There are some typographical and grammatical errors in some chapters. Overall, I hope the author would continue writing this [img=recommend]
I’ve sat on this story for a while. Reading the reviews had given me mixed feelings and when I read this for the first time I couldn’t make it through 10 chapters. So I left it alone in my library for a while. All of my favorite stories are caught up so I figured I’d give it another shot. I’d like to express my gratitude to FictionOnlyReader. I loved your kuroko no basket story and everyone who reads HP fics enjoyed A magical Journey, so you can imagine my surprise when I had a very hard time trying to read this. Constantly I had to force myself to keep up with Takuma and his failures, wining, and slow progress. Constantly I had to force myself to not drop this book. Through 100+ chapters I had to watch a regular person get suddenly thrust into a very dangerous and no longer shounen world and somewhere along the way I understood. This story is a masterpiece. This story is a representation of a regular person forced into a very real version of Naruto. No bloodline(yet?), no super chakra(yet?), no clan(yet). Can the people reading this review honest to God tell me that you would fair any better? But that’s not the point. The point being this is an amazing take on the world of Naruto. We see the consequences of a real world here. When Takuma screws up he has serious consequences as you might have read or will read and they’ve had everlasting effects on how the story plays out. Yeah its hard to read, but in real life when something bad happens alot of people can’t watch and that’s what happened here. FictionOnlyReader has taken the Shounen World of Naruto and brought it to life. This is by far, with no comparison, the most realistic fanfiction of Naruto ever written…. AND ITS FUCKING AWESOME! The quality of the writing, the plot, the consequences, the world building, all of it is simply beautiful. To FictionOnlyReader: Watching your writing improve from kuroko No Basket to A Magical Journey was awesome, but seeing your writing from there to here is simply incredible. Keep up the hard work and hopefully someday I’ll get to see a world you’ve created by yourself.
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I would say it is a one of a kind fanfic. The character promotes growth in a very realistic setting. It might be difficult to start with a weak and pathetic looking mc but towards the end he becomes one of the best character developed person. Dont pass out on this gem due to lacking an OP Mc
I've been reading this book since it came out, so I never looked at the rating. Ignore all of these guys who have given it a bad score. Many of them clearly haven't read very far and don't know crap. Most of them dropped it in the first part of the first arc, saying, "Oh, Takuma is a beta and soooo weak." Takuma is just quiet and going through something any regular person would find traumatic. On the weak part, that's kind of the point, is it not? We are reading about Takuma, who has nothing and no prior skill with any ninja things, learning and developing. Takuma, once he gets his feet under him, never actually feels weak. This is a fantastic fanfic written by a fantastic author, and I highly recommend it.
I think this is one of the best Naruto fanfics I have read. I will preface this by saying it is slow and I mean SLOW. The mc gets promoted to chunin 300ish chapters in, he is chunin level well before this but as a benchmark of the speed of the story. This will cause some people to go feral because they are used to OP mc's after 10 chapters but in this story the mc starts out so bad because it's meant to be a realistic portrayal of if a random joe got dropped in Naruto. But because the mc starts so terribly with each victory he gets, all the progress and experiences feel like an actual win and feel real. You actually root for him instead of going "Oh of course he'll win duh". I will say the writing is rough at times with a few mistakes of words being misspelled or mixing up which character is being referred to but other than those it is easy to read, a lot better than most on this site. I would 100% recommend reading this fanfic most of the bad reviews are from the start of the book and as with everything it is better to read it and form your own opinion
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love it but the only flaw is its to slow 300+ chapther for him to become chuni. hope the auther dont mess up and go with the cliche of hasirama cell experment bull shit. i wonder how the shinobi world would be when so manu uchias are still alive when any random incident may awaken some monster.
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Author has totally left the story of Naruto and started his own novel in that same world where for more that 175+ chapters protagonist is just sufferings pain, inequality and traumas without even reaching the power level of chunin. Protagonist has fought 100+ matches in underground arena during these chapters and still considered a canon-folder. He also started selling drugs for extra cash even when he knew that he'll just become a pawn for mafia which was that first time I heard exist in Naruto but yes author added many of the extra things which aren't their in the actual series. I still wasn't able to figure out why would danzo sent 4 assasins after him but he did after which he was directed posted in frontline removing him from being the leader of narcotics department in police force. There's too much struggle and story is extremely extremely slow, depressing and just leaving many of the important characters while adding some other new characters of underground rings, drug dealers, other organisations which recruite genins, etc.
Just know that i think this is the best ff i ve read, dont listen to the haters pal
I just cant read this man. Im supposed to enjoy my time reading these books and fics but my mood is only getting worse by reading it because its just so pitiful. This is an extremely realistic take on a transmigration in Naruto. Yes, extreeeeeeeeeeemeeeeely. Read at your own discretion.
you wont find a fanfic as engaging and realistic as this everyone feels like there actually alive and its not just some crap written down on a page it doesnt feel like a fanfic but like its own story in the naruto world amazing work and im sad that ive caught up
I have started reading the reviews lately and goddamn there were some really bad ones for this book. These reviews are not doing justice to what an amazing fic this is. As someone who has finished this book I say people are saying it’s a bad fic because they don’t give it a chance. It’s not a typical overpowered mc rather a person who was given nothing, No kekke genkai, no talent and not even the memories of who he transmigrated into. He suffered in the start because he was still adjusting to his new life as a trainee child soldier. It’s very realistic approach. The world building is great, the interactions between characters are great and fun to read and the story development is the best. The reason I’m not giving this fic a 5 is because the updates are not as consistent as they once were. This fanfic is great give it a try and atleast try to read 100 chapters before arguing with me.
Best Naruto ff. Writing is Solid. what hooked me was when it root attacked mc on the same level or better than Naruto wind calamity. Pros:- Phenomenal character development Power scaling [MC as of now chaper 325 is the Strongest Chunin and maybe he got wood style] Side characters Slow Romance Mystery of the og body Relationships and emotional depiction Cons :- too much Slow paces in starting 100 chapters Extended Polic & Genin corp training arc
Revelar Spoiler Those readers of this site who only read 1 chapter and want to give an assessment as if they already know what the whole novel is like is sad. The only works that deserve such treatment are works with a harem. This is a very good work and extremely slow development. It takes you a while to catch up to her rhythm. The mc suffers so much that when he achieves something good you are happy for him. If you like the game Project Zomboid, then this ff will probably appeal to you.
The author has potential, but it seems like he was smoking something strong when he wrote this novel. Let's start with the fact that each chapter is the same story: The protagonist is distressed, he trains, He loses a fight, trains more, beats a weakling, and then loses again, repeating the cycle. Another fatal thing is that the author does not know how to describe sophisticated fights, they are all barbaric fights, This makes it seem like it's not a ninja world. Giving Naruto a dark background is not a bad idea, but it was done terribly wrong. I don't want to give spoilers, But there are some smoking issues that would not be allowed in the leaf village. And the slow pace of the novel... It's only good when the story is entertaining and has a point to go to.