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RaccoonLeague

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1yr
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Tyusan

Muito bom, mas tem espaço para melhoras. ...... ...... ....... ....... ..... ....... ...... ...... ....... ....... ....... ........ ...... ...... ...... ......

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SaidElMane

hi i like your fanfiction but the problem is the harm it too much i hope one day you write a story with out it and also i hope you can write a fanfic about this devil fruit Brrrr Brrrr no Mi (Shiver-Shiver Fruit) 🥶 🔹 Type: Paramecia 🔹 Theme: Shivering & Vibrations 🔹 Starting Power (Weak Stage): The user can make themselves or others shiver uncontrollably—it’s like a really bad case of the chills. ❄️ They can slightly vibrate objects, making them rattle a little. People just think they have poor temperature control and get cold easily. How It Evolves Into a Universe-Breaking Nightmare Phase 1: Vibration Manipulation 🌀 ✅ Can now control their own shivers, making their body vibrate at high speeds. ✅ Can shake weapons so fast they slice through metal like butter. ✅ Can cause small tremors by touching the ground. Phase 2: Resonance Control 💀 ✅ Can match frequencies to break objects—glass, walls, weapons… even bones. ✅ Can make enemies shake uncontrollably, disrupting their movements. ✅ Can create "resonance waves" that travel through the air like shockwaves. Phase 3: Planetary Quakes 🌍💥 💀 Awakening: The World's Death Rattle 💀 ✔️ Can cause tectonic shifts just by touching the ground. ✔️ Can vibrate objects at a molecular level, making them disintegrate. ✔️ Can make an entire island tremble, causing buildings to collapse. ✔️ A single punch now releases city-wide shockwaves. Final Form: "Universal Breakdown" ☠️💥 🔺 The user enters a permanent vibrating state, making them untouchable (attacks phase through them). 🔺 Can shake atoms apart, causing objects to dissolve into energy. 🔺 Can create "Infinite Vibration Waves"—once they start, they never stop expanding. 🔺 Can literally shake a planet apart, causing it to self-destruct into dust. Ultimate Attack: "The Final Shiver" 💥🚀 ✅ The user touches the planet’s core and shivers once. ✅ The entire planet vibrates itself to death, breaking into a trillion pieces. ✅ The shockwave travels faster than light, destroying everything within 100 light-years. Why It’s the Most Ridiculous Power Ever? ✔️ It starts as just "being cold and shivering," but ends with planetary annihilation. ✔️ No fire, no lasers—just VIBRATING THE UNIVERSE INTO OBLIVION. ✔️ Enemies will think it's a joke… until their bones explode. ✔️ Even reality itself can't survive the final vibrations.

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Ikaris265

Hey there, fellow writers and readers! I’m currently working on my fantasy novel, Bellator: Rising, and I’d love to get some honest, constructive feedback from the Webnovel community. It’s a story about a rebellious prince named Niklaus, who’s trying to navigate a world full of ancient prophecies, political intrigue, and, of course, a sarcastic, talking sword (because why not?). The world is powered by mana that coexists with air, and I’ve put a lot of effort into creating a (in my opinion) a somewhat unique magic system that feels grounded in reality, with a mix of humor, adventure, and deeper themes about leadership and morality. I’m really hoping to improve my writing, especially in terms of pacing, character development, and world-building, and I know the best way to do that is through real feedback from people who love the genre. So if you’re into complex characters, witty banter, and a mix of light-hearted fun and serious storytelling, I’d be super grateful if you gave it a read and shared your thoughts! Every bit of feedback helps, whether it’s big or small. Thanks in advance, and I’m excited to hear what you think!

14d
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NPSC2377

I really like your novel writing. Therefore, I would like to request permission from you, the owner of the novel, to translate this work into the language of my country.

15d
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Sajad_Jabbar

Will the mc continue to use firearms(guns)? It seems annoying for me (:

25d
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John_5906

What an incredible story! I’m truly captivated by how all the elements weave together so seamlessly. However, I would love to see you expand on the concept of Haki. Its significance in the One Piece universe cannot be overstated—it's a powerful force that adds depth to the battles and character development. Exploring different forms of Haki and showcasing how characters unlock and master these abilities would enhance the storyline and create even more thrilling moments for readers. I can’t wait to see how this journey unfolds!

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Joaoterminus3110

Chapter 138 Review: The protagonist challengingly confronts Whitebeard for no apparent reason. Furthermore, the narrative unnecessarily diminishes other characters to make the protagonist seem powerful

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1mth
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4thBlackGoblin

the writing quality on this story is above average. However, thee is little further I can say as I haven't reached far. the main reason being the biggest flaw of this story. this story has something I like to call, candy-strore mentality. It's like how if a kid was even allowed to take anything they want in a candy store. they'd take basically everything. oversaturating themselves without considering the long term benefits and cons. This manifest in this story with the main-character having two devil fruits. One is unique and interesting while the other is just there for a cool factor, it's absolutely unnecessary. and if you think that's mouthful already, he also has a system. one where he could just buy whatever. One of the most common and annoying systems I've seen in fanfic. And no, that's not all, he could also summon whoever in the world he wants, so he could have the best crew from the get go. So all I can say is it starts off too much like a child trying to fulfill their one piece fantasies, although it has potential, if the author realised and removed everything else I mentioned, I'd be great.

1mth
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MD_MOHSIN_HR

Nice good best, but some time misinterpreted Nice good best, but some time misinterpreted Nice good best, but some time misinterpreted Nice good best, but some time misinterpreted

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Al_Ryan_Magcanta

Amazing!!![img=recommend] Amazing!!![img=recommend] Amazing!!![img=recommend] Amazing!!![img=recommend] Amazing!!![img=recommend] Amazing!!![img=recommend] Amazing!!![img=recommend]

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2mth
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Jaden_Debrie_3312

I love this fan-fiction with all of my otaku heart. [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Loving it]

2mth
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Kill3rKing

Deberías haber hecho la transformación de las frutas al reves ya que según las otras frutas zoan míticas la mejor transformación es la de hombre bestia Pero todo está bien

2mth
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Matox_9895

A good novel. I've read up to chapter 90 and I like where the story is going. Unfortunately it's not for me. The writing style is too descriptive for me. What the author writes is too redundant. If you don't mind this, then give it a chance.

3mth
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Daoistp02AIn

muy 👍 sigue así esta increíble pero creo que se debe mejorar en el tiempo de publicación

3mth
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Nerd_Guy

i love this fic and author i have an idea could you make an MC with a custom fruit called the gun gun no mi

3mth
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raaidh_nizar

at first I ignored this fic but after I started reading this I'm hooked to this book.

5mth
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MarkRuss

I thought Luffy's proposal was really cool op KEEP DOING GREAT KEEP DOING GREAT KEEP DOING GREAT KEEP DOING GREAT KEEP DOING GREAT KEEP DOING GREAT

5mth
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Feyron

Yah......... lumayan untuk menghabiskan waktu luang[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

6mth
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ReaderLove

This fanfic either has fake rating or the author is deleting negative reviews. Cause this fanfic does not deserve the current rating, plus it has one of the most unlikeable Mc. Mc is a hella dumb and has zero survival awareness. Doesn't give a shit about consequences and seem extremely selfish. If author delete this comment, I know for sure author is deleting comments. Also, the author also tries to make Mc seem like he doesn't give a shit about females yet has him summon all females. The author changes Shirahoshi age to 18 even though she isn't. If you are gonna have harem be blatant instead of wussing out.

6mth
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Jinhe
LV 3 Badge

Muy bueno lo recomiendo de inicio a fin cada vez la historia se vuelve mas interesante y según yo esta bien escrita sigo esperando los capitulos todos los dias

7mth
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StrafesharderAlt

I dont usually review but this is to good- ---------------------------------------------------- The only fanfic that uploads at a regular schedule, ❤️ Has good development,❤️ Harem- all I need to say, "GOOD" Scenes The author is also great! Replies to comments and overall cool guy❤️

7mth
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Psan
LV 6 Badge

Well... I thought raccoooon was a translator, so, my review is this... The novel is amazing and i really enjoyed it A HUGE LOT. Specially Shirahoshi being so OP and explosions fangirl. Go meet neptune so that shirahoshi can jump at mc already

7mth
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HobessXD

It seemed really good the characters are pretty good and funny. The crew is good and he talks about how he add them for their potential. Then he puts a dog in the crew a normal dog it has no potential it's a normal dog. I gave this high a high rating because it is really good from what I've read but for some reason I don't like the dog it felt like he liked the dog more then zoro and the dog gets more conversation time then some actually important characters. Still give it a read I'm sure you'll like it.

7mth
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Umar_Ali_5366

[img=coins][img=coins]This is the best one piece fic out there [img=coins][img=coins]

7mth
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Raptor2244

Imo writing quality is really good, characters are funny and the story is streamlined. If I have one big issue it's that haki kinda seems to be an afterthought though that's becoming less, maybe it was just to balance power so idk. Just seems kinda dumb for the Mc to do that, knowing that haki is THE supreme power of the one piece world. Devil fruits are awesome, six styles are awesome, martial arts are awesome but all of it can be trashed by a grandmaster of haki. Wonder if the author can explore haki more? Perhaps come up with new ways of using it? Im imagining sensing emotions or seer abilities(not like future sight but more like Force visions) or maybe a 4th haki like the one in that mihawk is a woman novel, though that got complicated quickly. Anyways all around good story. Patron tiers need to be updates tho, went to go look at 20$ a month for 20 chapters ahead and only saw 10. It's 50$ for 20 chap ahead which is maximum rn.

7mth
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pEmKayS
LV 11 Badge

Surprisingly a really good story. Although at first I had complaints about the radical change in the appearance of the main character and receiving unknown powers automatically. In addition, I am not a fan of the hero being reborn into an adult body; I prefer that the hero experiences the full spectrum of rebirth and integration into the world from birth. But I quickly got used to it all, and the story is really good. I recommend reading it!

7mth
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MeLucawolf

I’m so happy this is on WebNovel if been getting kicked out of fanfic app so many times that I just left the app and i still miss a lot of stories I’m so happy that this is also on here😁😆

8mth
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James_Carlson_5574

La historia en mi opinión es buena y entretenida, no lo abandones, buen trabajo. --------------------------------------------------------------

8mth
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ZeroESM

It's a good novel, I like it a lot. The bad thing is that I have to wait for the next chapter to come out (just kidding) .oooooooooooooooooooooooooooóoooooooooooo

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9mth
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skoll04
LV 13 Badge

fantastic fic. while the first chapter makes it seems like this will be a fic where the mc will just be handed power without effort, the rest of it disproves it. still op mc, but he didn't randomly get powers.

9mth
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RaccoonLeague

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1yr
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Tyusan

Muito bom, mas tem espaço para melhoras. ...... ...... ....... ....... ..... ....... ...... ...... ....... ....... ....... ........ ...... ...... ...... ......

2d
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SaidElMane

hi i like your fanfiction but the problem is the harm it too much i hope one day you write a story with out it and also i hope you can write a fanfic about this devil fruit Brrrr Brrrr no Mi (Shiver-Shiver Fruit) 🥶 🔹 Type: Paramecia 🔹 Theme: Shivering & Vibrations 🔹 Starting Power (Weak Stage): The user can make themselves or others shiver uncontrollably—it’s like a really bad case of the chills. ❄️ They can slightly vibrate objects, making them rattle a little. People just think they have poor temperature control and get cold easily. How It Evolves Into a Universe-Breaking Nightmare Phase 1: Vibration Manipulation 🌀 ✅ Can now control their own shivers, making their body vibrate at high speeds. ✅ Can shake weapons so fast they slice through metal like butter. ✅ Can cause small tremors by touching the ground. Phase 2: Resonance Control 💀 ✅ Can match frequencies to break objects—glass, walls, weapons… even bones. ✅ Can make enemies shake uncontrollably, disrupting their movements. ✅ Can create "resonance waves" that travel through the air like shockwaves. Phase 3: Planetary Quakes 🌍💥 💀 Awakening: The World's Death Rattle 💀 ✔️ Can cause tectonic shifts just by touching the ground. ✔️ Can vibrate objects at a molecular level, making them disintegrate. ✔️ Can make an entire island tremble, causing buildings to collapse. ✔️ A single punch now releases city-wide shockwaves. Final Form: "Universal Breakdown" ☠️💥 🔺 The user enters a permanent vibrating state, making them untouchable (attacks phase through them). 🔺 Can shake atoms apart, causing objects to dissolve into energy. 🔺 Can create "Infinite Vibration Waves"—once they start, they never stop expanding. 🔺 Can literally shake a planet apart, causing it to self-destruct into dust. Ultimate Attack: "The Final Shiver" 💥🚀 ✅ The user touches the planet’s core and shivers once. ✅ The entire planet vibrates itself to death, breaking into a trillion pieces. ✅ The shockwave travels faster than light, destroying everything within 100 light-years. Why It’s the Most Ridiculous Power Ever? ✔️ It starts as just "being cold and shivering," but ends with planetary annihilation. ✔️ No fire, no lasers—just VIBRATING THE UNIVERSE INTO OBLIVION. ✔️ Enemies will think it's a joke… until their bones explode. ✔️ Even reality itself can't survive the final vibrations.

5d
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Ikaris265

Hey there, fellow writers and readers! I’m currently working on my fantasy novel, Bellator: Rising, and I’d love to get some honest, constructive feedback from the Webnovel community. It’s a story about a rebellious prince named Niklaus, who’s trying to navigate a world full of ancient prophecies, political intrigue, and, of course, a sarcastic, talking sword (because why not?). The world is powered by mana that coexists with air, and I’ve put a lot of effort into creating a (in my opinion) a somewhat unique magic system that feels grounded in reality, with a mix of humor, adventure, and deeper themes about leadership and morality. I’m really hoping to improve my writing, especially in terms of pacing, character development, and world-building, and I know the best way to do that is through real feedback from people who love the genre. So if you’re into complex characters, witty banter, and a mix of light-hearted fun and serious storytelling, I’d be super grateful if you gave it a read and shared your thoughts! Every bit of feedback helps, whether it’s big or small. Thanks in advance, and I’m excited to hear what you think!

14d
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NPSC2377

I really like your novel writing. Therefore, I would like to request permission from you, the owner of the novel, to translate this work into the language of my country.

15d
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Sajad_Jabbar

Will the mc continue to use firearms(guns)? It seems annoying for me (:

25d
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John_5906

What an incredible story! I’m truly captivated by how all the elements weave together so seamlessly. However, I would love to see you expand on the concept of Haki. Its significance in the One Piece universe cannot be overstated—it's a powerful force that adds depth to the battles and character development. Exploring different forms of Haki and showcasing how characters unlock and master these abilities would enhance the storyline and create even more thrilling moments for readers. I can’t wait to see how this journey unfolds!

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28d
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Joaoterminus3110

Chapter 138 Review: The protagonist challengingly confronts Whitebeard for no apparent reason. Furthermore, the narrative unnecessarily diminishes other characters to make the protagonist seem powerful

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1mth
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4thBlackGoblin

the writing quality on this story is above average. However, thee is little further I can say as I haven't reached far. the main reason being the biggest flaw of this story. this story has something I like to call, candy-strore mentality. It's like how if a kid was even allowed to take anything they want in a candy store. they'd take basically everything. oversaturating themselves without considering the long term benefits and cons. This manifest in this story with the main-character having two devil fruits. One is unique and interesting while the other is just there for a cool factor, it's absolutely unnecessary. and if you think that's mouthful already, he also has a system. one where he could just buy whatever. One of the most common and annoying systems I've seen in fanfic. And no, that's not all, he could also summon whoever in the world he wants, so he could have the best crew from the get go. So all I can say is it starts off too much like a child trying to fulfill their one piece fantasies, although it has potential, if the author realised and removed everything else I mentioned, I'd be great.

1mth
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MD_MOHSIN_HR

Nice good best, but some time misinterpreted Nice good best, but some time misinterpreted Nice good best, but some time misinterpreted Nice good best, but some time misinterpreted

2mth
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Al_Ryan_Magcanta

Amazing!!![img=recommend] Amazing!!![img=recommend] Amazing!!![img=recommend] Amazing!!![img=recommend] Amazing!!![img=recommend] Amazing!!![img=recommend] Amazing!!![img=recommend]

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2mth
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Jaden_Debrie_3312

I love this fan-fiction with all of my otaku heart. [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Loving it]

2mth
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Kill3rKing

Deberías haber hecho la transformación de las frutas al reves ya que según las otras frutas zoan míticas la mejor transformación es la de hombre bestia Pero todo está bien

2mth
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Matox_9895

A good novel. I've read up to chapter 90 and I like where the story is going. Unfortunately it's not for me. The writing style is too descriptive for me. What the author writes is too redundant. If you don't mind this, then give it a chance.

3mth
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Daoistp02AIn

muy 👍 sigue así esta increíble pero creo que se debe mejorar en el tiempo de publicación

3mth
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Nerd_Guy

i love this fic and author i have an idea could you make an MC with a custom fruit called the gun gun no mi

3mth
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raaidh_nizar

at first I ignored this fic but after I started reading this I'm hooked to this book.

5mth
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MarkRuss

I thought Luffy's proposal was really cool op KEEP DOING GREAT KEEP DOING GREAT KEEP DOING GREAT KEEP DOING GREAT KEEP DOING GREAT KEEP DOING GREAT

5mth
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Feyron

Yah......... lumayan untuk menghabiskan waktu luang[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

6mth
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ReaderLove

This fanfic either has fake rating or the author is deleting negative reviews. Cause this fanfic does not deserve the current rating, plus it has one of the most unlikeable Mc. Mc is a hella dumb and has zero survival awareness. Doesn't give a shit about consequences and seem extremely selfish. If author delete this comment, I know for sure author is deleting comments. Also, the author also tries to make Mc seem like he doesn't give a shit about females yet has him summon all females. The author changes Shirahoshi age to 18 even though she isn't. If you are gonna have harem be blatant instead of wussing out.

6mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Jinhe
LV 3 Badge

Muy bueno lo recomiendo de inicio a fin cada vez la historia se vuelve mas interesante y según yo esta bien escrita sigo esperando los capitulos todos los dias

7mth
Ver 0 Respostas
StrafesharderAlt

I dont usually review but this is to good- ---------------------------------------------------- The only fanfic that uploads at a regular schedule, ❤️ Has good development,❤️ Harem- all I need to say, "GOOD" Scenes The author is also great! Replies to comments and overall cool guy❤️

7mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Psan
LV 6 Badge

Well... I thought raccoooon was a translator, so, my review is this... The novel is amazing and i really enjoyed it A HUGE LOT. Specially Shirahoshi being so OP and explosions fangirl. Go meet neptune so that shirahoshi can jump at mc already

7mth
Ver 3 Respostas
HobessXD

It seemed really good the characters are pretty good and funny. The crew is good and he talks about how he add them for their potential. Then he puts a dog in the crew a normal dog it has no potential it's a normal dog. I gave this high a high rating because it is really good from what I've read but for some reason I don't like the dog it felt like he liked the dog more then zoro and the dog gets more conversation time then some actually important characters. Still give it a read I'm sure you'll like it.

7mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Umar_Ali_5366

[img=coins][img=coins]This is the best one piece fic out there [img=coins][img=coins]

7mth
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Raptor2244

Imo writing quality is really good, characters are funny and the story is streamlined. If I have one big issue it's that haki kinda seems to be an afterthought though that's becoming less, maybe it was just to balance power so idk. Just seems kinda dumb for the Mc to do that, knowing that haki is THE supreme power of the one piece world. Devil fruits are awesome, six styles are awesome, martial arts are awesome but all of it can be trashed by a grandmaster of haki. Wonder if the author can explore haki more? Perhaps come up with new ways of using it? Im imagining sensing emotions or seer abilities(not like future sight but more like Force visions) or maybe a 4th haki like the one in that mihawk is a woman novel, though that got complicated quickly. Anyways all around good story. Patron tiers need to be updates tho, went to go look at 20$ a month for 20 chapters ahead and only saw 10. It's 50$ for 20 chap ahead which is maximum rn.

7mth
Ver 2 Respostas
pEmKayS
LV 11 Badge

Surprisingly a really good story. Although at first I had complaints about the radical change in the appearance of the main character and receiving unknown powers automatically. In addition, I am not a fan of the hero being reborn into an adult body; I prefer that the hero experiences the full spectrum of rebirth and integration into the world from birth. But I quickly got used to it all, and the story is really good. I recommend reading it!

7mth
Ver 0 Respostas
MeLucawolf

I’m so happy this is on WebNovel if been getting kicked out of fanfic app so many times that I just left the app and i still miss a lot of stories I’m so happy that this is also on here😁😆

8mth
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James_Carlson_5574

La historia en mi opinión es buena y entretenida, no lo abandones, buen trabajo. --------------------------------------------------------------

8mth
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ZeroESM

It's a good novel, I like it a lot. The bad thing is that I have to wait for the next chapter to come out (just kidding) .oooooooooooooooooooooooooooóoooooooooooo

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9mth
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skoll04
LV 13 Badge

fantastic fic. while the first chapter makes it seems like this will be a fic where the mc will just be handed power without effort, the rest of it disproves it. still op mc, but he didn't randomly get powers.

9mth
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