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I just read 10 chapter and it well crafted story. But, it felt weird, when you skip the time. From eigh years biy to mature seventeen on one chapter. But its okay, i still enjoyed thia nivel si far.
[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]Fantasy, i dindt really like fantasy, but ut seem kinda interesting with the line. Varis and Yun, especially. Just read 3 chapter and well, i will give this book a change.
Nice book, but the update was slow. Olease hurry up, one chapter/day was to slow. But I just read five chapter for now. Let see if you manage to add 100 chpater, then i will buy all your chapter.
Nice written, it sliw pace and kind of zero to hero journey. If you wish to read a story that has elve, human, and so called manutang, a human with animal tail and ears, this is good for you. But the updtae was to slow, ine chaoter/day with long chaoter. Perhaos 1400 words/ chaoter, it cost me 7-11 gold. Author should diffided this chapter into small one, instead make long one. But iveral is good
So far so god. It remind me of Full Metal Alchemist, that Yun and Varis, but the author catchme on suprise with twist, now it felt like Harry Potter, combine with Final Fantasy World. Love it! Butvthe update was so slow.
Nice book author, i am impressed with your writing and creativity.. I hope you keep writing and don't get tired. above all, everything about the books is notable, starting from the characters down to the plot. Five stars to you!
Hello everyone, welcome to my first English novel! This is my first Fantasy project on Webnovel and I hope it would spreading happiness to everyone who reads it. Although English is not my mother tongue, I tried my best to write this novel. I hope you will be pleased with this novel. Please kindly leave a comment and support me with feedback. It matters to me, for my writing skill and style as a writer in the future. Without future redo, enjoy, and happy reading all. :) (Started on 12 Oct 2022)
I nice write up, clean grammer but a pity, its not my type of novel. This reads like a fairytale write up just like those princesses, princes, beauty and beast, Rapunzel, and all that.... seems great but I can't seem to visualize the philosopher stone and all those great anime scenes
Seemed their journey will be amazing. I will add to library now[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm sorry, I completely revised this novel. If you are interested in reading, pay attention to the (new) sentence in the chapter title, a sign that chapter has been revised. Happy reading.
I just read 10 chapter and it well crafted story. But, it felt weird, when you skip the time. From eigh years biy to mature seventeen on one chapter. But its okay, i still enjoyed thia nivel si far.
[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]Fantasy, i dindt really like fantasy, but ut seem kinda interesting with the line. Varis and Yun, especially. Just read 3 chapter and well, i will give this book a change.
Nice book, but the update was slow. Olease hurry up, one chapter/day was to slow. But I just read five chapter for now. Let see if you manage to add 100 chpater, then i will buy all your chapter.
Nice written, it sliw pace and kind of zero to hero journey. If you wish to read a story that has elve, human, and so called manutang, a human with animal tail and ears, this is good for you. But the updtae was to slow, ine chaoter/day with long chaoter. Perhaos 1400 words/ chaoter, it cost me 7-11 gold. Author should diffided this chapter into small one, instead make long one. But iveral is good
So far so god. It remind me of Full Metal Alchemist, that Yun and Varis, but the author catchme on suprise with twist, now it felt like Harry Potter, combine with Final Fantasy World. Love it! Butvthe update was so slow.
Nice book author, i am impressed with your writing and creativity.. I hope you keep writing and don't get tired. above all, everything about the books is notable, starting from the characters down to the plot. Five stars to you!
Hello everyone, welcome to my first English novel! This is my first Fantasy project on Webnovel and I hope it would spreading happiness to everyone who reads it. Although English is not my mother tongue, I tried my best to write this novel. I hope you will be pleased with this novel. Please kindly leave a comment and support me with feedback. It matters to me, for my writing skill and style as a writer in the future. Without future redo, enjoy, and happy reading all. :) (Started on 12 Oct 2022)
I nice write up, clean grammer but a pity, its not my type of novel. This reads like a fairytale write up just like those princesses, princes, beauty and beast, Rapunzel, and all that.... seems great but I can't seem to visualize the philosopher stone and all those great anime scenes
Seemed their journey will be amazing. I will add to library now[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm sorry, I completely revised this novel. If you are interested in reading, pay attention to the (new) sentence in the chapter title, a sign that chapter has been revised. Happy reading.