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Gary sue story where MC clicks to get anything, All gotten from a system. No sort of development or hassle for mc at all. Why write a novel with such a detailed and complex setting and have the mc being inept in conversation alongside dumbing the entire universe into easy mode.
This could be an interesting world-building story but chapters are too short, updates are inconsistent, and so much smut. There is no world building, no POVs, story barely developing with 100ch, MC gains new powers all the time when he did not even expand over his previous powers so it is hard to remember and inverse. Overall, i would not recommend this.
Great story, has great potential. Really enjoyed the way the mc is developing. There were places where I felt improvement could have been made, but hopefully those areas would be covered in the future as the plot progresses
First of all, I'm not a big fan of fiction with a system because usually the MC gets too strong very quickly, but I think it's relatively okay so far. The grammar is very good and I also think it's great (without spoiling) which country he has lordship over, since it's not often that this area is chosen in other fiction.
Great story just wish there were more chapters and updates. Lol No one really does fics with the iron island's so to have a great story around the iron island's and the sea/fleet is just great.
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
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I'll be honest: the premise of this fanfic is good, but the overall story is bad. It almost feels like an AI wrote the entire thing. I wouldn't mind if the AI was good, but as I read, it uses so many unnecessary words that make me wonder if there was any human touch at all. Every word is predictable, and there is too much unnecessary detail. Sometimes, the author (or the AI) repeats themselves, which is frustrating. And now, they want us to pay to read AI-written work.
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Rating distribution — 3,3,2,4,3 I mainly disliked the story for naivety and softness of MC. He isn't suitable for GOT as his mindset and personality is too kind. And from experience I know the story will change itself to accomodate the MC not the other way around. So you can safely say it won't give the GOT vibe.
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Looking forwards to the rest. Mc has interesting perks that while powerful don't instantly place him over everyone else. I hope the story keeps the original emphasis of exploration and trade rather than him becoming a lord or even king...
По моему мнению, история построена достаточно интересно. Хотя чит не даёт герою мгновенно много силы, в перспективе, невероятно могущественным сделает его. Думаю эта система рассчитана на стратегию. Будет интересно узнать дальнейшую историю его приключений.
I think the story has potential, it has some problems like the MC without much development, the system is also a bit Op for those who have a lot of access to resources like the MC himself, the idea of summoning these NPCs didn't really please me because they end up being able to have a lot of importance for the story in the future I know that the alternative would be to invoke characters from other franchises with technology and it was similar to Vikings but this comes with its own problems anyway the story is good the MC's objective is still unknown besides the evolution of power, the romantic situation has a certain potential, having some options that match the MC's current lifestyle, which would be Yara Greyjoy, Dancei Mormont and perhaps Val, the wild princess, each of them can bring interesting developments to the story and conflicts and dramas necessary for the development of the story, unfortunately the The MC's age makes him move away from the main female characters with perhaps some still being possible but he would still be at least 4 to 8 years older which is in my opinion quite acceptable as it is practically a medieval style story with men marrying women half his age or older even though that almost doesn't happen in the GOT show with the books showing a little more of that with Daenerys herself and Lisa Tully.
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It's like author have no idea how medieval world works. My review may be "wrong" because I only managed to read ten chapters
Hi I like your work and character development And power balance I hope you will continue to publish new chapters 👍 ..............................................................................
Great Story. Despite many of the reviews as of now (chapter 27) there is no harem sharing or any NTR on the MC. However the mc cucks one character whom is impotent.
i think the novel is good for now and maybe it will only need time and more chapter to get betteri dont mind the harem in ancient times having a harem was very ordinary i hope the novel will have more chapter
I gave it my all because of the amount of negative comments saying practically nothing, I'm not going to read it because many of the goals of this fic caught me, I don't know if they're all about the protagonist or just about other people... double discovery? If it's a casual encounter, that's fine... but the fear of being the heroine of the story takes away any desire to try, and I want this fic to appear in the review of everyone who made so many negative comments but said nothing at the same time.
Gary sue story where MC clicks to get anything, All gotten from a system. No sort of development or hassle for mc at all. Why write a novel with such a detailed and complex setting and have the mc being inept in conversation alongside dumbing the entire universe into easy mode.
This could be an interesting world-building story but chapters are too short, updates are inconsistent, and so much smut. There is no world building, no POVs, story barely developing with 100ch, MC gains new powers all the time when he did not even expand over his previous powers so it is hard to remember and inverse. Overall, i would not recommend this.
Great story, has great potential. Really enjoyed the way the mc is developing. There were places where I felt improvement could have been made, but hopefully those areas would be covered in the future as the plot progresses
First of all, I'm not a big fan of fiction with a system because usually the MC gets too strong very quickly, but I think it's relatively okay so far. The grammar is very good and I also think it's great (without spoiling) which country he has lordship over, since it's not often that this area is chosen in other fiction.
Great story just wish there were more chapters and updates. Lol No one really does fics with the iron island's so to have a great story around the iron island's and the sea/fleet is just great.
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
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I'll be honest: the premise of this fanfic is good, but the overall story is bad. It almost feels like an AI wrote the entire thing. I wouldn't mind if the AI was good, but as I read, it uses so many unnecessary words that make me wonder if there was any human touch at all. Every word is predictable, and there is too much unnecessary detail. Sometimes, the author (or the AI) repeats themselves, which is frustrating. And now, they want us to pay to read AI-written work.
Базар жоқ-бірақ ғұлама корова свинопас ................................................................................
Rating distribution — 3,3,2,4,3 I mainly disliked the story for naivety and softness of MC. He isn't suitable for GOT as his mindset and personality is too kind. And from experience I know the story will change itself to accomodate the MC not the other way around. So you can safely say it won't give the GOT vibe.
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Me encantó la novela. Espero que continúes con la novela y la actualices rápido. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Story development is good. I enjoy reading. I hope it continues to be updated. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
Looking forwards to the rest. Mc has interesting perks that while powerful don't instantly place him over everyone else. I hope the story keeps the original emphasis of exploration and trade rather than him becoming a lord or even king...
По моему мнению, история построена достаточно интересно. Хотя чит не даёт герою мгновенно много силы, в перспективе, невероятно могущественным сделает его. Думаю эта система рассчитана на стратегию. Будет интересно узнать дальнейшую историю его приключений.
I think the story has potential, it has some problems like the MC without much development, the system is also a bit Op for those who have a lot of access to resources like the MC himself, the idea of summoning these NPCs didn't really please me because they end up being able to have a lot of importance for the story in the future I know that the alternative would be to invoke characters from other franchises with technology and it was similar to Vikings but this comes with its own problems anyway the story is good the MC's objective is still unknown besides the evolution of power, the romantic situation has a certain potential, having some options that match the MC's current lifestyle, which would be Yara Greyjoy, Dancei Mormont and perhaps Val, the wild princess, each of them can bring interesting developments to the story and conflicts and dramas necessary for the development of the story, unfortunately the The MC's age makes him move away from the main female characters with perhaps some still being possible but he would still be at least 4 to 8 years older which is in my opinion quite acceptable as it is practically a medieval style story with men marrying women half his age or older even though that almost doesn't happen in the GOT show with the books showing a little more of that with Daenerys herself and Lisa Tully.
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It's like author have no idea how medieval world works. My review may be "wrong" because I only managed to read ten chapters
Hi I like your work and character development And power balance I hope you will continue to publish new chapters 👍 ..............................................................................
Great Story. Despite many of the reviews as of now (chapter 27) there is no harem sharing or any NTR on the MC. However the mc cucks one character whom is impotent.
i think the novel is good for now and maybe it will only need time and more chapter to get betteri dont mind the harem in ancient times having a harem was very ordinary i hope the novel will have more chapter
I gave it my all because of the amount of negative comments saying practically nothing, I'm not going to read it because many of the goals of this fic caught me, I don't know if they're all about the protagonist or just about other people... double discovery? If it's a casual encounter, that's fine... but the fear of being the heroine of the story takes away any desire to try, and I want this fic to appear in the review of everyone who made so many negative comments but said nothing at the same time.