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Mhh story us same as original story but fast and some differents with some mc he is like xaio yab but only different is mc has system and he accepts more woman
Hasta ahora me parece excelente, comparado con otros fanfic que he leído, en especial por el hecho de que no se opone el mc de este fic al mc canon, y aún así sigue la historia original, me parece excelente en general, tal vez un poco lento en algunas áreas, como el romance de nuestro mc del fic Does anyone know if Medusa will stay with Xiao Ming or follow the canon and stay with Xiao Yan? I'm in chapter 220
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I love this Fanfic, just based on the fact that it’s based off of BTTH and how Well the author has written out this novel, I’m always waiting for the new chapters to come out, so much so that I stopped reading just so I could stockpile lots of chapters together and read them all at once.
Fantastic fan-fic, the only downside is the relationship between mc and medusa, i mean i'm okay with the relationship but there is not much progress between the two even though mc recognized her as his wife, but i don't feel the same feeling as the relationship between mc and xiao yi xian.
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I literally forced myself to read on and on. Its boring. There's no suspense. No actual conflict for the protagonist. It seems as though every character wants to boot lick him. The way we also see him behave and appear to other people is corny, and unbefitting, considering he's more spoiled than the offspring of a billionaire. And he's a bit weird. He labeled a 4-6 year old kid that he is a pervert, and you might rebuttal, claiming that Xiao Yan is a reincarnate. But the protagonist already knew why Xiao Yan sneaked in Xun Er room or whatever. It was to help her body with circulating Dou Qi or her dou bones or whatever. Anyways, I just take this as the protagonist wanting to possibly date Xun er in the future, which is weirder. As he wouldve have perverted intentions for a woman that's very much mentally younger than him at the time. The way the characters act towards him is funny. Especially the women. They will have stiff smiles or whatever, but that would be out of place. When you consider that Ya Fei and the Princess of the Jia Empire with their years of experience, to face some sort of negative reaction at least once in their career. Tl Dr: Protagonist is a spoiled brat and weird. Side characters are buns. The story is wish fulfillment.
Honestly, it was good until author killed Yao lao. After that incident, the author is just dragging the plot. It's literally boring. Same old helping MC's buddies to increase there cultivation then increasing MC's cultivation so that he won't be left to far behind. It feels like system is there to help MC's wives rather than helping him. Not to mention, author is not even utilizing the system properly. So, it 3 star form me...
In vain I decided to read. After the destruction of the original protagonist, everything became dull and boring. I still don't understand what was the point of Yao Chen's death, shouldn't I push the plot because of Xiao Yang? After all, he is constantly evolving, and without him, the MC can go back and forth, slowly, and no one else can take the title of genius from him.
is a nice fanfic interesting and most of all the translation is very very good
I would like to say, I absolutely DEVOURED this story. I like the pace and story line of this. Especially very fond and impressed with the character development of the main character and the spotlight on certain secondary characters (in the original).
WQ: 4.5 stars US: 4 stars SD: 4.3 stars CD: 4.8 stars WB: 4.9 stars Overall: 4.5 stars
Well I really like it cause this fic doesn't revolve around the original mc and pace is also perfect neither fast nor slow and translation is also very good so full recommended read it And yeah I've a question I've been meaning to ask did you take permission from the author to translate his work or just started it without permission after all you're technically earning money from his work so was just curious
The best BTTH fanfic novel in my opinion at the moment, with a system that makes me jealous, presenting the power that everyone really wants. The development of the story and character strength is currently very good, with mc who is not interested in hunting pokemon while mc let the pokemon come alone which makes the story not boring. Best for the author!! Thank You.
I like this novel very much.💕💕💕It's story and development are nice and mc is kind of op and super talented even much more than the original.But I would have liked even more if he got Gu yun'er at the start.💖💖💖And I hope the author will include all the female characters mentioned in the female characters list to the Harem.🙏🙏🙏🥺🥺🥺If not I would appreciate if you include the Harem members list to the intro so as not to get our hopes up with the female list.🙏🙏🙏And thank you very much author for updating regularly we all appreciate your hard work 👍👍👍😊😊😊
Although now I no longer like Cultivation novels, this fic has come to entertain and like me, the development of the story is very good, the MC and how he knows how to take advantage of his system without being an idiot. And although I only read the Manhua, I have come to enjoy this story, I recommend it
Let me say first that the translation and update speed is excellent and the world building is exactly the same as the original so no complaints there. Just the writing and the mc leaves alit to be desired, just let me state my opinions here. The authors writing style is incredibly boring to the point i have to give myself a pat on the back if i dont fall asleep after 3 chapters. The author can go on and on about about certain trivia or explanations of a certain event to the point of filling one or even multipe chapters with walls of text that can be skipped without actualy missing anything. So far ive read 47 chapters and i couldve skipped atleast 40 of them without missing anything as theyre just uslees info dumps or pointless and boringly repetitive events. The second point is that the mc is dull, i have no other way to describe him. He seems to be the perfect “good boy” from a chinese point of view. Meaning he has very little to no sense of self at all. Just a emotionless drone that exists to achieve a certain thing that is expected of him. Outside of certain things a chinese boy is ment to do, like being polite, filial, respect your elders etc the mc has no other traits or personality or goal whatsoever. The only thing the mc is passionate about is bootlicking his family and even tough his family just wants to use him and even tough hes a reincarnation with no parents or family ties he has the words family slave pretty much carved into hos forehead. After 47 chapters the mc has shown no other goal outside of getting more resources for the family. While ive read that this story is a slow start and it gets better i just cant stand those mcs with no emotion goal or even a basic sense of self outside of fulfilling the responsibilities of a boy from chinese culture
First of all what I liked the most in this fanfic is Mc is neither too op nor weak yet smart but not arrogant, unlike certain someone😂 Now for the main point, will it be a harem or not? [ Answer ] That's all, and I gave power stones too so, please at least reply ok
everything is all good but just wanna know why his golden finger that refresg every week is not used often? he constantly travel for months without using it.
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the quality is good and story development progresses so far shows the potential it have.
stop reading at chapter 394 in mtl. I'm gonna wait. review just to remind myself I stop at 394 haha
Two women is already a bit much, but tolerable. To you, harem lovers, my condolences. I recommend you try to touch some grass and get at least one girl😏
Revelar Spoiler
This history basically took the original and made it better, the character can look slow and overgenerous at times, but that is only because he thinks things through and plans for the future of himself and his family. The only negative point is if you are here for the typical murderhobo bone all females xianxia Chinese protagonist you will not find it here.
Mhh story us same as original story but fast and some differents with some mc he is like xaio yab but only different is mc has system and he accepts more woman
Hasta ahora me parece excelente, comparado con otros fanfic que he leído, en especial por el hecho de que no se opone el mc de este fic al mc canon, y aún así sigue la historia original, me parece excelente en general, tal vez un poco lento en algunas áreas, como el romance de nuestro mc del fic Does anyone know if Medusa will stay with Xiao Ming or follow the canon and stay with Xiao Yan? I'm in chapter 220
Revelar Spoiler I love this Fanfic, just based on the fact that it’s based off of BTTH and how Well the author has written out this novel, I’m always waiting for the new chapters to come out, so much so that I stopped reading just so I could stockpile lots of chapters together and read them all at once.
Fantastic fan-fic, the only downside is the relationship between mc and medusa, i mean i'm okay with the relationship but there is not much progress between the two even though mc recognized her as his wife, but i don't feel the same feeling as the relationship between mc and xiao yi xian.
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I literally forced myself to read on and on. Its boring. There's no suspense. No actual conflict for the protagonist. It seems as though every character wants to boot lick him. The way we also see him behave and appear to other people is corny, and unbefitting, considering he's more spoiled than the offspring of a billionaire. And he's a bit weird. He labeled a 4-6 year old kid that he is a pervert, and you might rebuttal, claiming that Xiao Yan is a reincarnate. But the protagonist already knew why Xiao Yan sneaked in Xun Er room or whatever. It was to help her body with circulating Dou Qi or her dou bones or whatever. Anyways, I just take this as the protagonist wanting to possibly date Xun er in the future, which is weirder. As he wouldve have perverted intentions for a woman that's very much mentally younger than him at the time. The way the characters act towards him is funny. Especially the women. They will have stiff smiles or whatever, but that would be out of place. When you consider that Ya Fei and the Princess of the Jia Empire with their years of experience, to face some sort of negative reaction at least once in their career. Tl Dr: Protagonist is a spoiled brat and weird. Side characters are buns. The story is wish fulfillment.
Honestly, it was good until author killed Yao lao. After that incident, the author is just dragging the plot. It's literally boring. Same old helping MC's buddies to increase there cultivation then increasing MC's cultivation so that he won't be left to far behind. It feels like system is there to help MC's wives rather than helping him. Not to mention, author is not even utilizing the system properly. So, it 3 star form me...
In vain I decided to read. After the destruction of the original protagonist, everything became dull and boring. I still don't understand what was the point of Yao Chen's death, shouldn't I push the plot because of Xiao Yang? After all, he is constantly evolving, and without him, the MC can go back and forth, slowly, and no one else can take the title of genius from him.
is a nice fanfic interesting and most of all the translation is very very good
I would like to say, I absolutely DEVOURED this story. I like the pace and story line of this. Especially very fond and impressed with the character development of the main character and the spotlight on certain secondary characters (in the original).
WQ: 4.5 stars US: 4 stars SD: 4.3 stars CD: 4.8 stars WB: 4.9 stars Overall: 4.5 stars
Well I really like it cause this fic doesn't revolve around the original mc and pace is also perfect neither fast nor slow and translation is also very good so full recommended read it And yeah I've a question I've been meaning to ask did you take permission from the author to translate his work or just started it without permission after all you're technically earning money from his work so was just curious
The best BTTH fanfic novel in my opinion at the moment, with a system that makes me jealous, presenting the power that everyone really wants. The development of the story and character strength is currently very good, with mc who is not interested in hunting pokemon while mc let the pokemon come alone which makes the story not boring. Best for the author!! Thank You.
I like this novel very much.💕💕💕It's story and development are nice and mc is kind of op and super talented even much more than the original.But I would have liked even more if he got Gu yun'er at the start.💖💖💖And I hope the author will include all the female characters mentioned in the female characters list to the Harem.🙏🙏🙏🥺🥺🥺If not I would appreciate if you include the Harem members list to the intro so as not to get our hopes up with the female list.🙏🙏🙏And thank you very much author for updating regularly we all appreciate your hard work 👍👍👍😊😊😊
Although now I no longer like Cultivation novels, this fic has come to entertain and like me, the development of the story is very good, the MC and how he knows how to take advantage of his system without being an idiot. And although I only read the Manhua, I have come to enjoy this story, I recommend it
Let me say first that the translation and update speed is excellent and the world building is exactly the same as the original so no complaints there. Just the writing and the mc leaves alit to be desired, just let me state my opinions here. The authors writing style is incredibly boring to the point i have to give myself a pat on the back if i dont fall asleep after 3 chapters. The author can go on and on about about certain trivia or explanations of a certain event to the point of filling one or even multipe chapters with walls of text that can be skipped without actualy missing anything. So far ive read 47 chapters and i couldve skipped atleast 40 of them without missing anything as theyre just uslees info dumps or pointless and boringly repetitive events. The second point is that the mc is dull, i have no other way to describe him. He seems to be the perfect “good boy” from a chinese point of view. Meaning he has very little to no sense of self at all. Just a emotionless drone that exists to achieve a certain thing that is expected of him. Outside of certain things a chinese boy is ment to do, like being polite, filial, respect your elders etc the mc has no other traits or personality or goal whatsoever. The only thing the mc is passionate about is bootlicking his family and even tough his family just wants to use him and even tough hes a reincarnation with no parents or family ties he has the words family slave pretty much carved into hos forehead. After 47 chapters the mc has shown no other goal outside of getting more resources for the family. While ive read that this story is a slow start and it gets better i just cant stand those mcs with no emotion goal or even a basic sense of self outside of fulfilling the responsibilities of a boy from chinese culture
First of all what I liked the most in this fanfic is Mc is neither too op nor weak yet smart but not arrogant, unlike certain someone😂 Now for the main point, will it be a harem or not? [ Answer ] That's all, and I gave power stones too so, please at least reply ok
everything is all good but just wanna know why his golden finger that refresg every week is not used often? he constantly travel for months without using it.
Revelar Spoiler the quality is good and story development progresses so far shows the potential it have.
stop reading at chapter 394 in mtl. I'm gonna wait. review just to remind myself I stop at 394 haha
Two women is already a bit much, but tolerable. To you, harem lovers, my condolences. I recommend you try to touch some grass and get at least one girl😏
Revelar Spoiler
This history basically took the original and made it better, the character can look slow and overgenerous at times, but that is only because he thinks things through and plans for the future of himself and his family. The only negative point is if you are here for the typical murderhobo bone all females xianxia Chinese protagonist you will not find it here.