Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem

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Kirito_Kirigaya_3995

I have just finished reading this novel and I am confident to say that this is one of the best novels I have read. The story plot and development are amazing and the world background is explained in a good way making the us read it without being confused and giving us a understanding of the plot and the story . But the only drawback is that are some mistakes in the grammar and some time some words are repeating or some letters are not there in the words but if we overlook that then this novel is fantastic 😍😍😍... I hope the author fixes this problem and thank you for your hard work in providing us this wonderful novel. All the best and I am looking forward to new and exciting chapters released in the future 😊😊😊 All Hail "The Monarch of Heaven's Fortune" " Jun Tianyun"

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vbbzeus

I really liked the novel, atleast until the newest chapter where there is ntr, normally I would give this 5 stars but the ntr ruined everything

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Hahadavis

WARNING! NTR! THIS STORY CONTAINS NTR,MIGHT POSSIBLY CONTAIN WORSE STUFF SINCE THE AUTHOR IS WILLING TO PUT NTR IN IT.

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Blue_Robin

Alright now let me start with this. I really like this novel. It has flaws, don't get me wrong, but I can look past them. Let me just get the flaws out of the way. The writing quality can be poor at times, though it usually maintains a consistent mediocrity. If I remember correctly the author is not a native english speaker, however tries his best with the aid of Grammarly. This means it's readable, but mistakes will be noticeable. The second flaw is the romance. This is a harem. Neglect play seems to be a fetish of the mc's and boy does he not care if everyone knows it. Jokes aside, the mc does acquire a lot of women, and from what I have read in the synopsis there are even more to be acquired. He obviously doesn't have the time to deal with them all, and will likely consistently ignore a group of them who simply aren't near him. He also isn't super clear about his intentions to love multiple people with anyone but this one heroine who also double's as current best girl. Final flaw is a matter of personal preference, and not something that is necessarily a problem. In fact it hasn't even happened yet. Dimension jumping. For the love of gosh, please dont send him to different universes, he has enough stuff to worry about already. Its fine as is please don't. Anyways, two flaws and personal plea aside, the rest of the story is good. The action is fast and doesn't drag on. The main character is smart while not making inexplicable decisions, the heroines are (mostly) memorable and have their own personalities and thoughts. The system, while sentient, doesn't abuse it's sentience to make the mc do as it wishes. There's also a bit of cringe, but not enough to cause second hand embarrassment. The comedy is also pretty good. It also doesn't hide the seggs from you for 100+ chaps. All in all, besides the romance and writing, everything else is solid. 3/5 Keep it up lad!

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JRCaste

Tis was good... if only Author/MC wasn't much of a cuck, imagine needing an answer as to why he out it up and him replying that it was only a little bit. NTR is NTR. End of discussion. Such a shame

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KingParadox

Ntr trash............................. ................................ ........... ....................................................

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Eduardox013

It must feel great to ruin your own work with NTR..

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please_be_gentle_

I never gave an NTR novel more than one star but your first 2 arcs of the novel got me hooked before the third arc ruined it for me so 2 stars are the highest I can give an NTR novel and I don't mind you writing an NTR novel but plz set a tag beforehand.

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hellen_sendan

virgin make an harem +ntr

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Merlin58

there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------there is ntr in the story---------

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Efthee

Sigh, this is definitely a chinese novel, one in which if you turn off your logic, you will enjoy. Ungrateful mc The system isn't really explained properly. Sentinel System, who is kinda tsundere... the personality of mc changes quite a lot.

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sol_94

the ntr just ruined it. I mean the was trash but u could pass ur time with it but ntr just ruined everything.

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Josushockwave200

Esto es lo que no me gustó de esta lectuta: soft ntr, con esto me refiero a que una heroína es dejada en ropa interior y manoseada. El mismo protagonista observó todo el proceso para que según el, su chica se volviera más fuerte. Otro caso es el mencionado antes con una chica del capítulo 160~. La cual tuvo prácticamente de todo excepto penetracion con el antagonista. Amaneció desnuda junto a él y el protagonista lo orquesta todo. También tuvo relaciones con la mamá de una de sus chicas pero dijo que prefería a su marido y que no quería al protagonista. Es prácticamente un cuck auto infligido sin razón lógica más allá de que es si fetiche. También tiene un giro de guión donde tiene que abandonar un mundo y regresará 50 años después ya cuando las chicas estén muertas, de entre ellas las que mencioné antes.

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Campione_p

It is always better to check the reviews of the novels before reading, I was about to read this that has ntr, saved by the community, just don't read this unless you like that? 🤢

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Danni11

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raptorfalcon

Sorry, I could not get past chapter 8. It's OK to give the MC some challenges, but this author threw too much drama at him. Then we get other characters that suddenly seem to get stronger as well and the prospect of multiple girls done for the sake of milking points. The cheat, so far has a grand title...but everything seems to be a random thing and you know how plot armor loves those...

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tuba_san

The author's writing has improved a lot from the past. Also the plot changed from the original novel, so even if you were a fan of that you should read this one. This is a present for the author.

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shyfix291

don't drop author.....keep going[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

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Pedro_Sousa

Great novel, who just gets better with time, with the author becoming more used to writing. Definitely a must read.

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Melshan

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