I Awakened As A Writer!

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Nyxxie_Auclair

I just finished reading the first season, it's a very good novel. I did not find any grammar flaws. Almost all areas of this work are excellent. Will definitely recommend this book. It has a unique plot, which as a writer I love. The author did a very good job. The only thing I found a little uncomfortable during reading was that, the author does a lot of telling instead of showing. Other than that this novel is really good.

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funkiller_562

Although, I think that the synopsis can be worked on, I have to say that the book is interesting☺️✨. The character design needs work. I couldn't really differences in the way they react and distinctive states of mind. The story development was good and the writing quality is better than many books I've read. That said, some use of grammar can be worked on. You seem to have a truckload of good ideas but can seem to execute it and make the audience feel the emotions of the MC. It feels like a comic book, we see most of the stuff that's happening and that's it, no indepth analysis whatsoever. Overall, I feel the synopsis needs the most work. Try to add hooks and concepts that deviates it from other cliché system novels.

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Lawrence_Oshim

I'm loving this style of writing, it's sort of new and Intriguing even though the MC's name is hard for me to grab every thing is amazing, now let's see what goes on with the literature system

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Unknown_AR

Its a great story, there is a set understanding and seem to have a solid set of rules. Also if you like action in every word, then this is a great book for you!

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NyxReveuse

Wow... The idea of the novel is pretty unique and to be honest, I would love to have a system like that! The MC is quite interesting to watch and observe and the writing style is straightforward and clear which makes it easier to understand~ I can't wait to see where this goes! Great Job Author >.< [img=recommend][img=update]

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CetusWritings

Hello Dear Readers! It's the author if you haven't guessed it but thanks for reading the entire first season of the series and for the new ones you should definitely check it out! All my ideas are unique and I try to keep it that way and it's full of fantasy, adventure and systems so try it out if you haven't and I hope this series will continue to grow and it's already near 100 collections so that's pretty cool as well, thanks again for reading!

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FoodReviewSnake

Author asked me to give his novel a review. So I dont like genre like this so i will give 4 stars.

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XcrapttS

Am not good at reviews haha but new concept and a real character with emotions nice. Especially since your a writer you def got it in the bag