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a lot of people gave this fanfic a low rating for no reason, and that's very unfair, because I loved it (Google tradutor)jdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdj
I liked it, but then it got to the Game of Thrones universe, and I don't like GOT fanfics.
Honestly, it's good, well written, somehow original with origin story and planned developments, but it is the MC that doesn't cut it for me, as well as the long expositions. I, personally, don't really like manipulative MC, so yeah, I am out, good luck author
Go to ONE PIECE AND GO GET The Baku Baku no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to eat anything. The eaten items can then be merged into and manifested from the user's body or be combined to create something else. It was eaten by Wapol AND THE The Gasha Gasha no Mi The Gasha Gasha no Mi is a non-canon Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to telekinetically disassemble objects and reassemble them into whatever they please, making them an Assimilation Human (合体人間 Gattai Ningen?, FUNimation: "Combinable Human"). It was eaten by Douglas Now 1
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Hello author, I like your style of writing but when will you MC start developing his own self without relying on simple logic that got him killed. I mean, according to MC, following logic got him killed so why would he spent so much time saying isekai is illogical.
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exceptionally well written So far one of the best Fan fics ................................................................................................
The story moves at a decent pace, it's got characters old and new, technically he does go into au territory but not much to have any major effect. My only gripe is with the author not being able to be consistent. He does got with a bit of asoiaf sprinkled within but he just couldn't go deep enough , there are too many differences for him to sort through. Plus while he does good work, I would've liked it better if he went over the lore more and chosen roads not travelled before
Revelar Spoiler
I like it 👍 ..........................................................................................................................................
like the idea- nasuverse magecraft has so much potential when one start to abuse the lore or starts trying to theorize about it. the mc is nice to- crafty but not overpowered yet[img=recommend]
exceptionally well written, very intriguing, pulls you right in and this is only 12 chapters, you can only guess the rest ....................................
I've read so much, but these are the ones like your story that catch my attention the most, you write well with the character having a different, deeper personality, it's been a while since I found something cool like this, and from what I've seen, it always goes keep it up and improve, apparently you really like writing like that, thanks for the fun, keep it up bro. \O/
It is a fanfic that has potential, the prologue is very long and this can end up alienating fans from fanfics, I recommend waiting to release more chapters before starting to read this fanfic because it seems to be the type that has a slow story. That's not bad, but for this type of fanfic it's better to accumulate a few chapters before starting to read.
So far one of the best Fan fics I have read I can only recommend it great read :)...........................................................
So what do we have here... a cold, calcultong mc faced with a quite precarious situation forced to make a deal with the 'devil' lest he's fate is sealed welp beggars can't be choosers
An amazing fic from our trusted goldfinger. I can't wait for more chapters to read how this story will develop. Thank you for another amazing story!
Can't say much when the author has presented a very nice fic. Still waiting for the MHA fic though. ......................
Ah another multicerse story heres my shamless first review of all time , deliver more chapters or else , 3chapters and already at five stars you can beat this
Don't worry guys about the upload schedule the author is midas touched so he has to change the keyboard every now and then. Truly a self-sacrificing genius
Why will you come back to write this story? because I like it a lot and I can't wait to see the rest of the story...............................
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a lot of people gave this fanfic a low rating for no reason, and that's very unfair, because I loved it (Google tradutor)jdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdj
I liked it, but then it got to the Game of Thrones universe, and I don't like GOT fanfics.
Honestly, it's good, well written, somehow original with origin story and planned developments, but it is the MC that doesn't cut it for me, as well as the long expositions. I, personally, don't really like manipulative MC, so yeah, I am out, good luck author
Go to ONE PIECE AND GO GET The Baku Baku no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to eat anything. The eaten items can then be merged into and manifested from the user's body or be combined to create something else. It was eaten by Wapol AND THE The Gasha Gasha no Mi The Gasha Gasha no Mi is a non-canon Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to telekinetically disassemble objects and reassemble them into whatever they please, making them an Assimilation Human (合体人間 Gattai Ningen?, FUNimation: "Combinable Human"). It was eaten by Douglas Now 1
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Hello author, I like your style of writing but when will you MC start developing his own self without relying on simple logic that got him killed. I mean, according to MC, following logic got him killed so why would he spent so much time saying isekai is illogical.
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exceptionally well written So far one of the best Fan fics ................................................................................................
The story moves at a decent pace, it's got characters old and new, technically he does go into au territory but not much to have any major effect. My only gripe is with the author not being able to be consistent. He does got with a bit of asoiaf sprinkled within but he just couldn't go deep enough , there are too many differences for him to sort through. Plus while he does good work, I would've liked it better if he went over the lore more and chosen roads not travelled before
Revelar Spoiler I like it 👍 ..........................................................................................................................................
like the idea- nasuverse magecraft has so much potential when one start to abuse the lore or starts trying to theorize about it. the mc is nice to- crafty but not overpowered yet[img=recommend]
exceptionally well written, very intriguing, pulls you right in and this is only 12 chapters, you can only guess the rest ....................................
I've read so much, but these are the ones like your story that catch my attention the most, you write well with the character having a different, deeper personality, it's been a while since I found something cool like this, and from what I've seen, it always goes keep it up and improve, apparently you really like writing like that, thanks for the fun, keep it up bro. \O/
It is a fanfic that has potential, the prologue is very long and this can end up alienating fans from fanfics, I recommend waiting to release more chapters before starting to read this fanfic because it seems to be the type that has a slow story. That's not bad, but for this type of fanfic it's better to accumulate a few chapters before starting to read.
So far one of the best Fan fics I have read I can only recommend it great read :)...........................................................
So what do we have here... a cold, calcultong mc faced with a quite precarious situation forced to make a deal with the 'devil' lest he's fate is sealed welp beggars can't be choosers
An amazing fic from our trusted goldfinger. I can't wait for more chapters to read how this story will develop. Thank you for another amazing story!
Can't say much when the author has presented a very nice fic. Still waiting for the MHA fic though. ......................
Ah another multicerse story heres my shamless first review of all time , deliver more chapters or else , 3chapters and already at five stars you can beat this
Don't worry guys about the upload schedule the author is midas touched so he has to change the keyboard every now and then. Truly a self-sacrificing genius
Why will you come back to write this story? because I like it a lot and I can't wait to see the rest of the story...............................