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Okay. The story is decent. If you like OP but not instantly then this is for you. There are genderbending like Ann who is Ace and Lucy who is Luffy. The writing quality is decent. Not too bad. Some grammatical errors or misspellings here and there but better than a huge amount of FFS in webnovel. 4 stars The stability of Updates is also decent. Not too bad. 4 stars Story Development is meh. It's not that bad... but it's not good either—fast pace. I think somewhere between chapters 5 and 10 the MC and Ann will already be in love with each other and will have a baby in the next few chapters after they have ***. 3 stars Character Design is between decent and meh. I don't have much to say about Luke. He's a bit of a wimp but not? Idk. 3 stars World Background? It's One Piece. AU but still. 4 stars
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i was a bit iffy about the Gender bender but don't really care anyway but what i can't take it the MC . I get that he has to grow but he is 19 years old and behaves like an absolute wimp half of the time and like someone that is mentally handicapped the other time. The type of system the MC has is also not that good of a choice if you want to go the route of character progression and growth, because most of the power comes externally. So the only thing the MC does is play, growing the list of Harem members and being weak on a physical and personal level.
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The fanfic has no clear path for the MC - By that I mean everything around the MC. From the harem - like Makino who is so much older than the others and already has a happy and contented life up to now- up to the devil fruit that gives him many powers without any effort that look like a cheap copy of Kaido - or the system that just gives the mc a one of the best weapons without having a real reason , Of course, this weapon already has a lot of power and the MC can use it to the fullest without training - Then there is this matter with children. not even 20 chapters but having a child is neither well thought out nor logical. The basic idea of creating a crew with Ann/Ace is good, but everything else about it is poorly thought out.
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A quite rare One Piece fanfiction.. I love it!!! 😍😍😍😍 It's interesting to see how MC (Luke) try to be strong and finish all his quest.. I don't mind with harem, but please don't make it to many girls/women.. And please don't make any genderbender anymore.. Luffy/Lucy and Ace/Ann is enough.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author sama 😁😁👍👍😍😍
Honestly i don't usually write reviews because I find it tedious but I wanted to write this to say keep up the good work author don't drop................
love the story so far. the character progression is just slow enough to be engaging without being boring, hope to read more of this
There are enough beautiful girls in the main story anyway, why do you keep changing the gender of the main characters?......................................................
the story is good .......,.....................................................................................................................
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked ) Seriously though, it's very good.
The story is quite interesting, the way how the author handle the System in different approach is refreshing maybe because I don't read much fanfic beside One Piece. The flaw of this story is it rather slow pace (Despite having 13 chapters the story is still in an introduction phase) and the lack of world building.
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At first I'm only here just to support my friend Alice, but her story actually really fun to read. The story felt more like a Slice of Life Ecchi series with a story telling. Worth reading but it still depends on your taste.
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this is a 5 star worthy FF. It doesn'T have that much chapters released yet but I can say this has one of the greatest FF I have read so far. Power stone worthy as well. I dont have much power stone but I am willing to give it to this FF. I do not need spoilers or anything but please dont stop this work of art..
I came for copper and found gold. . . I hope author not going to drop this fanfic. . . . . Bruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharacters
Dear Author, don't encourage people to do drugs because they want buggy's nose thrown at them. your helpful reader.
what I say is it had potential and I see myself in the MC because I have been addict in gatcha keep up. –_________________________________–
this fanfic is very interesting I hope it is not abandoned since it is very entertaining I don't know what else to write haha..................
1st chapter read only (and the only one released), but so far so good. author, what's the update schedule if there is one?..................................
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Okay. The story is decent. If you like OP but not instantly then this is for you. There are genderbending like Ann who is Ace and Lucy who is Luffy. The writing quality is decent. Not too bad. Some grammatical errors or misspellings here and there but better than a huge amount of FFS in webnovel. 4 stars The stability of Updates is also decent. Not too bad. 4 stars Story Development is meh. It's not that bad... but it's not good either—fast pace. I think somewhere between chapters 5 and 10 the MC and Ann will already be in love with each other and will have a baby in the next few chapters after they have ***. 3 stars Character Design is between decent and meh. I don't have much to say about Luke. He's a bit of a wimp but not? Idk. 3 stars World Background? It's One Piece. AU but still. 4 stars
Revelar Spoiler i was a bit iffy about the Gender bender but don't really care anyway but what i can't take it the MC . I get that he has to grow but he is 19 years old and behaves like an absolute wimp half of the time and like someone that is mentally handicapped the other time. The type of system the MC has is also not that good of a choice if you want to go the route of character progression and growth, because most of the power comes externally. So the only thing the MC does is play, growing the list of Harem members and being weak on a physical and personal level.
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The fanfic has no clear path for the MC - By that I mean everything around the MC. From the harem - like Makino who is so much older than the others and already has a happy and contented life up to now- up to the devil fruit that gives him many powers without any effort that look like a cheap copy of Kaido - or the system that just gives the mc a one of the best weapons without having a real reason , Of course, this weapon already has a lot of power and the MC can use it to the fullest without training - Then there is this matter with children. not even 20 chapters but having a child is neither well thought out nor logical. The basic idea of creating a crew with Ann/Ace is good, but everything else about it is poorly thought out.
Revelar Spoiler A quite rare One Piece fanfiction.. I love it!!! 😍😍😍😍 It's interesting to see how MC (Luke) try to be strong and finish all his quest.. I don't mind with harem, but please don't make it to many girls/women.. And please don't make any genderbender anymore.. Luffy/Lucy and Ace/Ann is enough.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author sama 😁😁👍👍😍😍
Honestly i don't usually write reviews because I find it tedious but I wanted to write this to say keep up the good work author don't drop................
love the story so far. the character progression is just slow enough to be engaging without being boring, hope to read more of this
There are enough beautiful girls in the main story anyway, why do you keep changing the gender of the main characters?......................................................
the story is good .......,.....................................................................................................................
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked ) Seriously though, it's very good.
The story is quite interesting, the way how the author handle the System in different approach is refreshing maybe because I don't read much fanfic beside One Piece. The flaw of this story is it rather slow pace (Despite having 13 chapters the story is still in an introduction phase) and the lack of world building.
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At first I'm only here just to support my friend Alice, but her story actually really fun to read. The story felt more like a Slice of Life Ecchi series with a story telling. Worth reading but it still depends on your taste.
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this is a 5 star worthy FF. It doesn'T have that much chapters released yet but I can say this has one of the greatest FF I have read so far. Power stone worthy as well. I dont have much power stone but I am willing to give it to this FF. I do not need spoilers or anything but please dont stop this work of art..
I came for copper and found gold. . . I hope author not going to drop this fanfic. . . . . Bruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharacters
Dear Author, don't encourage people to do drugs because they want buggy's nose thrown at them. your helpful reader.
what I say is it had potential and I see myself in the MC because I have been addict in gatcha keep up. –_________________________________–
this fanfic is very interesting I hope it is not abandoned since it is very entertaining I don't know what else to write haha..................
1st chapter read only (and the only one released), but so far so good. author, what's the update schedule if there is one?..................................
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