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It's just started but I already love the concept. I'm a huge fan of Kingdom building novels and I love how he has to start from the ground up. There's definitely some stereotypes but thats bound to happen in any novel and the characters are pretty diverse. Please keep this novel going, I hope it gets regular updates and can't wait to see where it goes.
Tho the story has some errors in grammar, the story is still really good and hope the story continues with a higher rate of release
absolutely amazing, it has a bit of longer chapters and I enjoy that, it also jas grat plot development and also how the plot is described and in my opinion it has alot of potential
I am the Crimson Duke, and I declare that my heir shall be... You already know. The thing is, Makai is going to develop his territory into something that a tiny Crimson Duchy cannot match. So that title doesn't make sense. Right?
It's unfortunate, but I'm leaving this platform until they put a translator in their app. I've never been so furious with a website. I'm going to look for Anonymous to take down this application that doesn't even know what a translator is.
I am a russian speaker and it is difficult for me to read without a translator. It is not in the application, I would like to ask for access to the site or a translator in the application
put this novel on another site if you can because I don't understand English and I use the translator (the webnovel now asks for the app to read)
Definitely loving this so far. Especially since it has some real development unlike the stories where things happen too exaggerated keep it up
OK. I have to say you managed to hook me like a fish in your net. Good job. Do I really need 140 characters? What's the point of it? [img=faceslap]
I don't know why, but the more I think that I'm sure I've understood the true meaning of the path that everyone is chasing, but that somehow you end up back where you started to the point where you have to start all over again, you realize, after all, why do we read, why are you still reading me? Because? Have you ever asked yourself? What is the meaning of our existence in such a vast universe, but that we are limited to a planet as small and insignificant as planet earth... Sigh...
Although I have only read 10 chapters, they are quite long and, I have to say that the plot of this novel is very interesting. Unlike many other novels where the MC starts at 100 kilometers per hour, this novel follows a pleasant rhythm where it makes you immerse yourself in the world and realize what is happening and what has already happened. This last chapter, 10, was enjoyable enough to make me leave this review.
Ch. 3 so far: Good books so far and long chapters. Looking forward to it. Please upload more chapter.............[img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]
This is good with good world building and nice Mc but author should have made it more realistic I mean how he summon people outta nowhere the games like setting ruin it
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It's just started but I already love the concept. I'm a huge fan of Kingdom building novels and I love how he has to start from the ground up. There's definitely some stereotypes but thats bound to happen in any novel and the characters are pretty diverse. Please keep this novel going, I hope it gets regular updates and can't wait to see where it goes.
Tho the story has some errors in grammar, the story is still really good and hope the story continues with a higher rate of release
absolutely amazing, it has a bit of longer chapters and I enjoy that, it also jas grat plot development and also how the plot is described and in my opinion it has alot of potential
I am the Crimson Duke, and I declare that my heir shall be... You already know. The thing is, Makai is going to develop his territory into something that a tiny Crimson Duchy cannot match. So that title doesn't make sense. Right?
It's unfortunate, but I'm leaving this platform until they put a translator in their app. I've never been so furious with a website. I'm going to look for Anonymous to take down this application that doesn't even know what a translator is.
I am a russian speaker and it is difficult for me to read without a translator. It is not in the application, I would like to ask for access to the site or a translator in the application
put this novel on another site if you can because I don't understand English and I use the translator (the webnovel now asks for the app to read)
Definitely loving this so far. Especially since it has some real development unlike the stories where things happen too exaggerated keep it up
OK. I have to say you managed to hook me like a fish in your net. Good job. Do I really need 140 characters? What's the point of it? [img=faceslap]
I don't know why, but the more I think that I'm sure I've understood the true meaning of the path that everyone is chasing, but that somehow you end up back where you started to the point where you have to start all over again, you realize, after all, why do we read, why are you still reading me? Because? Have you ever asked yourself? What is the meaning of our existence in such a vast universe, but that we are limited to a planet as small and insignificant as planet earth... Sigh...
Although I have only read 10 chapters, they are quite long and, I have to say that the plot of this novel is very interesting. Unlike many other novels where the MC starts at 100 kilometers per hour, this novel follows a pleasant rhythm where it makes you immerse yourself in the world and realize what is happening and what has already happened. This last chapter, 10, was enjoyable enough to make me leave this review.
Ch. 3 so far: Good books so far and long chapters. Looking forward to it. Please upload more chapter.............[img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]img=coins]
This is good with good world building and nice Mc but author should have made it more realistic I mean how he summon people outta nowhere the games like setting ruin it