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in all honesty this reminds me of a novel on this app called I am a scarecrow and the Demon Lord of Terror which if you're the same author then that's okay but if you're not then this is just a retelling of it since the only difference is is the name of the characters which the main character of the novel I was talking was called Flanders who gets power from his system by feeding off fear the bigger the fear the more he can upgrade his skills
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the whole gamer system as a Saiyan self-insert based off some dragon Ball z video game is cool and I would very much love to read a well written story with this premise. But the author ruins it in some very specific ways first the most obvious he turns this into a Chinese cultivation novel where Kai is not called Kai it's called chi and training is called cultivation. I have no idea why anyone would do this it's very very cringe it makes it reeks like a bad Chinese cultivation novel. the second bad thing about the story is he makes the main character start out overpowered as he's already strong enough to contend with cell and the androids in chapter 2 oh and he doesn't call them Androids he calls him cyborgs. which I guess is technically correct but it feels off because in the English dubbed they called them Androids. the last thing I want to say here is the grammar is just all over the place and it can be very hard to understand at times what he's trying to say or what's going on.
in all honesty this reminds me of a novel on this app called I am a scarecrow and the Demon Lord of Terror which if you're the same author then that's okay but if you're not then this is just a retelling of it since the only difference is is the name of the characters which the main character of the novel I was talking was called Flanders who gets power from his system by feeding off fear the bigger the fear the more he can upgrade his skills
Revelar Spoiler the whole gamer system as a Saiyan self-insert based off some dragon Ball z video game is cool and I would very much love to read a well written story with this premise. But the author ruins it in some very specific ways first the most obvious he turns this into a Chinese cultivation novel where Kai is not called Kai it's called chi and training is called cultivation. I have no idea why anyone would do this it's very very cringe it makes it reeks like a bad Chinese cultivation novel. the second bad thing about the story is he makes the main character start out overpowered as he's already strong enough to contend with cell and the androids in chapter 2 oh and he doesn't call them Androids he calls him cyborgs. which I guess is technically correct but it feels off because in the English dubbed they called them Androids. the last thing I want to say here is the grammar is just all over the place and it can be very hard to understand at times what he's trying to say or what's going on.
wow, it's actually interesting, imma read the mtl now