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I read upto ch 83 & it for some reason started getting inconsistent wih what the author wrote previously about the MC so I am gonna drop. But it was a good read till world hopping part.Imean if the author ended it at one world thr story would have been perfect,But that is just my opinion...................................................................................end of rant
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Mai doesn't have a mind of her own except everything the mc does is right and I will do every he says.
The story is not bad at first, although the relationship is unrealistically written, it happens that you confess your love to girls after half a year, and they have almost 1 meeting. I'm on chapter 20 right now. And I burn often. fake relationship. The author deliberately reduces the importance of MK, elevating his girlfriend. Seriously? He plowed, did something, developed skills, pumped, and she? Here are 25 characteristics from the start in each. That's all his abilities. Now she is better at martial arts than he is. What happened next? At first she is so dependent, helpless, and now she instantly has ambitions and she commands. Let's immediately make MK a cuckold, make him weaker than her, and then generally a minor character!
A Treasure Novel .. .Go AUTHOR-SAN I Support You. ..Good Work In Background And Nice Heroine [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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amazing novel; absolute perfection. I am curious about why so many people hate harem though? like evey chapter had people celebrating that there's no harem; what's up with that?
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this is a good fanfiction..and i like the storyline..👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👾👍🏻👾👍🏻👾👍🏻👾👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
The story is not bad, the only thing I did not like is that the story has only one love you should have given it a single world since it does not fit with the multverse and less when the visited worlds are harem type
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Read this if u want to eat a lot of dog food. Like i have read thousands of novels but all of those cant even compare when it comes to eating dog food
you just don't know how refreshing it's to see a non harem FF author , thanks . . . . . [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I love it, hopefully and don't abandon it :) and one question, what will be the next world?Will there be more talk about the past life of the Mc? Although it doesn't matter much but I'm quite curious
I like the story but I find it hard to believe that a guy who travels in the multiverse won't have a harem if he was from one world would only be cool but as there are several worlds and several waifus and the mc only having one is weird, so I'm going to drop it the story just didn't get me
Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel?
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no harem get an insta 5 stars .................................................. ........................................................... .
Great fanfiction has potential don't give up on it 👍Great fanfiction has potential don't give up on it 👍Great fanfiction has potential don't give up on it 👍
I love this fanfic, it's very entertaining although it was a bit fast with the relationship of the Mc and Mai but it's still good enough for me
It seems promising, and even if the relationship between the main character and Mai develops quickly, it is still better than most stories out there. My life in the Multiverse is a fairly generic title, As a result, most readers don't bother to check or click the fic, so I would advise changing it to something more interesting.
Hope you would not abandonate the fan fic.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Gooooooooooooooooóoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooøooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Author, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Thank you, really, really. Do you know how much I suffered from web novelIt was hard to find a good novel All the novels have turned into collecting harems like Pokémon. I've been putting my hope on old novels without women. But they all stopped, and I lost hope. It was hard. But while I was browsing the site and I entered the novel Do you know how happy I was I thought it would be a novel Women in a modern world But when I saw the sign of no women I jumped out of happiness So please, author, don't drop it. It's true that I don't have any strengths to support you with. But I can support you morally. I hope you don't drop it because the novels are in complete decline. And you're the jewel in this swamp.
This is very good. I like the romance of MC and Mai. I hope the author continues to be motivated to continue this work, because many authors are often dropped on this platform. I will put my stone in this book every day, so please continue. Your books are good to entertain my monotonous life.
I‘m enjoying the story so far, I’d like to see how you make the transition from world to world. I’m also a big fan of Arifureta so I’m quite excited.
La piensas continuar.?.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I read upto ch 83 & it for some reason started getting inconsistent wih what the author wrote previously about the MC so I am gonna drop. But it was a good read till world hopping part.Imean if the author ended it at one world thr story would have been perfect,But that is just my opinion...................................................................................end of rant
Revelar Spoiler Mai doesn't have a mind of her own except everything the mc does is right and I will do every he says.
The story is not bad at first, although the relationship is unrealistically written, it happens that you confess your love to girls after half a year, and they have almost 1 meeting. I'm on chapter 20 right now. And I burn often. fake relationship. The author deliberately reduces the importance of MK, elevating his girlfriend. Seriously? He plowed, did something, developed skills, pumped, and she? Here are 25 characteristics from the start in each. That's all his abilities. Now she is better at martial arts than he is. What happened next? At first she is so dependent, helpless, and now she instantly has ambitions and she commands. Let's immediately make MK a cuckold, make him weaker than her, and then generally a minor character!
A Treasure Novel .. .Go AUTHOR-SAN I Support You. ..Good Work In Background And Nice Heroine [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Wohooooooo.... I like this....... 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻
amazing novel; absolute perfection. I am curious about why so many people hate harem though? like evey chapter had people celebrating that there's no harem; what's up with that?
No harem is an insta 5 star for me [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
this is a good fanfiction..and i like the storyline..👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👾👍🏻👾👍🏻👾👍🏻👾👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏾👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
The story is not bad, the only thing I did not like is that the story has only one love you should have given it a single world since it does not fit with the multverse and less when the visited worlds are harem type
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Read this if u want to eat a lot of dog food. Like i have read thousands of novels but all of those cant even compare when it comes to eating dog food
you just don't know how refreshing it's to see a non harem FF author , thanks . . . . . [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I love it, hopefully and don't abandon it :) and one question, what will be the next world?Will there be more talk about the past life of the Mc? Although it doesn't matter much but I'm quite curious
I like the story but I find it hard to believe that a guy who travels in the multiverse won't have a harem if he was from one world would only be cool but as there are several worlds and several waifus and the mc only having one is weird, so I'm going to drop it the story just didn't get me
Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel?
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no harem get an insta 5 stars .................................................. ........................................................... .
Great fanfiction has potential don't give up on it 👍Great fanfiction has potential don't give up on it 👍Great fanfiction has potential don't give up on it 👍
I love this fanfic, it's very entertaining although it was a bit fast with the relationship of the Mc and Mai but it's still good enough for me
It seems promising, and even if the relationship between the main character and Mai develops quickly, it is still better than most stories out there. My life in the Multiverse is a fairly generic title, As a result, most readers don't bother to check or click the fic, so I would advise changing it to something more interesting.
Hope you would not abandonate the fan fic.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Gooooooooooooooooóoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooøooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Author, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Thank you, really, really. Do you know how much I suffered from web novelIt was hard to find a good novel All the novels have turned into collecting harems like Pokémon. I've been putting my hope on old novels without women. But they all stopped, and I lost hope. It was hard. But while I was browsing the site and I entered the novel Do you know how happy I was I thought it would be a novel Women in a modern world But when I saw the sign of no women I jumped out of happiness So please, author, don't drop it. It's true that I don't have any strengths to support you with. But I can support you morally. I hope you don't drop it because the novels are in complete decline. And you're the jewel in this swamp.
This is very good. I like the romance of MC and Mai. I hope the author continues to be motivated to continue this work, because many authors are often dropped on this platform. I will put my stone in this book every day, so please continue. Your books are good to entertain my monotonous life.
I‘m enjoying the story so far, I’d like to see how you make the transition from world to world. I’m also a big fan of Arifureta so I’m quite excited.
La piensas continuar.?.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................