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A promising start, good vocabulary and writing style. The story development is slow but good, nice character design, a dark start with the traumas and all that but very interesting. keep it up, I'm rooting for you.
Literally on the level of the likes of Shadow Slave, Lord of Mysteries and alike. Fully fledged out grammar, vocabulary and storyline. I've only currently read one chapter as I would like to binge read after more have come out. This has so much potential. You can not quite and that's a demand.
it's really good. I couldn't find much errors and the plot is intriguing. I find some of the things relatable so it just makes it better. It's a good book and I'm already adding it to my library.😌
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Very Promising, love the synopis, the characters well detailed..no mistakes. Well done author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
unique writing style. I think it is first person writing, I love books like this and the MC trying to find his purpose also wants me to know his purpose so any I'll wait for more from you
plot is clear, good story , i like the slow pace of the novel, only thing i dont like is thst there arent alot of chapters, i have to read it again in a month when it has more,overall ,good fun read
love the book! dont drop it, it seems promising !! good writing quality, didnt notice any hard to understand sentences, captivating chapters,for an original work it is quite the fresh air ! keep it up!
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Only obvious to rate my work with 5 stars ! I just write to improve my writing skills and have some fun! If it goes well,so be it, if not, well, it is what it is ! Hope you enjoy the novel !
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A promising start, good vocabulary and writing style. The story development is slow but good, nice character design, a dark start with the traumas and all that but very interesting. keep it up, I'm rooting for you.
Literally on the level of the likes of Shadow Slave, Lord of Mysteries and alike. Fully fledged out grammar, vocabulary and storyline. I've only currently read one chapter as I would like to binge read after more have come out. This has so much potential. You can not quite and that's a demand.
it's really good. I couldn't find much errors and the plot is intriguing. I find some of the things relatable so it just makes it better. It's a good book and I'm already adding it to my library.😌
Nice title with a very good story line [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] keep writing dear [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Very Promising, love the synopis, the characters well detailed..no mistakes. Well done author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
unique writing style. I think it is first person writing, I love books like this and the MC trying to find his purpose also wants me to know his purpose so any I'll wait for more from you
plot is clear, good story , i like the slow pace of the novel, only thing i dont like is thst there arent alot of chapters, i have to read it again in a month when it has more,overall ,good fun read
love the book! dont drop it, it seems promising !! good writing quality, didnt notice any hard to understand sentences, captivating chapters,for an original work it is quite the fresh air ! keep it up!
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Here's a 5-star fortune review for a good start on tha book. May the stars shine brightest and guide your pp...encil to become the mightiest!
Only obvious to rate my work with 5 stars ! I just write to improve my writing skills and have some fun! If it goes well,so be it, if not, well, it is what it is ! Hope you enjoy the novel !