Reviews of Young Justice: Red-Eclipse by Knight_Hawke - Webnovel

LV 4

Miki_Marlo75

It lacks development the first chapters are basically temporary jump and dialogues one after the other and it is not understood if it is a character or another speaking the grammar needs work

LV 3

LukeMorningStar

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LV 2

Luiz_Alberto

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LV 11

_VOIDLESS_

The all thing is craped together that it is unreasonable hard to read make space I have read 3chps and it still looks ugly so please fix it. The all thing feels like you had a hangover well writing it make no sense for the first 2chps try fixing that too.