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Author,keep putting out more chapters!!!! [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Oh, my This is so good, You should post more chapters. And you should do something about those pronouns.
everything is t stars excepting writing, which I have a 4. this is because male and female pronouns are scuffed up. not too badly that you can't decipher it in 2 seconds, but still a minor annoyance. Everything else writing wise is great. all other categories are great. FL is great too.
story is very nice but it could have more chapters ...............................,,........................................................
I am only in the beggining of the story but it is nice, the author keep mistaking he/she his/her but otherwise the grammar is good
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where can i find more of these it is difficult to find them so should i search a specific tag or keyword because i randomly found it and want more
Author,keep putting out more chapters!!!! [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Not bad but,Update author[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Oh, my This is so good, You should post more chapters. And you should do something about those pronouns.
everything is t stars excepting writing, which I have a 4. this is because male and female pronouns are scuffed up. not too badly that you can't decipher it in 2 seconds, but still a minor annoyance. Everything else writing wise is great. all other categories are great. FL is great too.
story is very nice but it could have more chapters ...............................,,........................................................
I am only in the beggining of the story but it is nice, the author keep mistaking he/she his/her but otherwise the grammar is good
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where can i find more of these it is difficult to find them so should i search a specific tag or keyword because i randomly found it and want more