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The plot was captivating, filled with unexpected twists and turns that kept me eagerly turning the pages until the very end. However, I must admit that I was disappointed to discover that the novel remains unfinished. As a devoted reader, I yearn to know what lies ahead for the characters I have grown to love. Your talent as a writer is undeniable, and it would be a shame if this story were left untold. I understand that life can be unpredictable and circumstances may prevent you from continuing your work on this novel. Nevertheless, I implore you not to abandon it entirely. Your readers are eagerly awaiting its completion, eager to embark on another adventure within the pages of your imagination. thank you
i love you writer you make my world colorful pls continue making more i am ready to read
Update please..Update please..Update please..Update please.. Update please.. Update please.. Update please.. Update please.. Update please.. 🥺🥺🥺🥺
greatly enjoy this book and hoping in my heart it never ends and/or there will always be more I say kudos to you and will continue to read and reread many times [img=update]
I love this author's stories they are 10 I fell in love mainly with the main characters they are a very cute couple in each arc.I love this author's stories they are 10 I fell in love mainly with the main characters they are a very cute couple in each arc.
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nem fogok angol véleményt írni ha valaki elakarja olvasni fordtisa le use translator hungary szoval ez egy nagyon jó regény fincsa romantikával de mondjuk én nem annyira szeretem a futát de hát ezen kivül tökéletes perfect
honestly I love it , potential plot and just really recommend this novel ; really lovely [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story is so good though the writing is a little bad it’s not like it’s unreadable it makes you want to reread it again [img=recommend]
1) The grammar is terrible. Let's take a look at the first paragraph of the second arс. "Lu Xie opened her eyes she was lying on a velvet king bed the room was dark only a little sunlight is seen on the slight crack of the curtain. She stood walked towards the window and opened the curtains." The author does not know what commas and dots are? 2) It's more like a matter of personal preferences, but your Girls' Love is more like M+F. In the 1st arc, MC is alpha, and calls herself "husband". In second arc, she lived all her life under disguise of guy.
so my previous review was hidden perhaps I mentioned a tab0o word 🤣. Anyways pretty good Yuri and the best part is It's TOP MC, pace is acceptable since it's QT. Some are generic world but still fun to read. I just noticed the arcs are improving in fast pace, straightforward plot and it won't let you down nor make you wait, it's surprisingly light and has lot of fluff well --just read it.
Cerita nya sangat bagus , saya berharap thor melanjutkan cerita nya dengan stabil biar tidak membuat pembaca penasaran dan lama menunggu. Semangat melanjutkan perjalanan menuju ke arah cahaya
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I think you could have double checked it and fixed the spelling mistakes but overall it was a very good book👌
Decent Quick Transmigration Yuri that will just feed you mouthful of dogfood from time to time, MC is TOP and kinda OP every person she transmigrated in are some boss level character, so expect all problem will be solved immediately.
well author, your writing has improved and the development are always exciting and I always look forward on the updates. wish more updates to come and good luck author~~!! I want it to have more worlds tehehehe
I like it~ I’ve been kinda addicted to world hopping theme lately and finding this made me happy. The story is light and no angst, exactly what I‘m looking for. The author’s writing quality inprove compare to the first novel. Anyway, it is worth the read. (Note: I hope the ARCS include apocalyptic world and entertainment world) KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHOR!!
Es una muy buena novela con buenos personajes y cada mundo al q va Lu Xia son interesantes y te enamoras de segunda protagonista sin importar cuanto cambien en cada mundo
The plot was captivating, filled with unexpected twists and turns that kept me eagerly turning the pages until the very end. However, I must admit that I was disappointed to discover that the novel remains unfinished. As a devoted reader, I yearn to know what lies ahead for the characters I have grown to love. Your talent as a writer is undeniable, and it would be a shame if this story were left untold. I understand that life can be unpredictable and circumstances may prevent you from continuing your work on this novel. Nevertheless, I implore you not to abandon it entirely. Your readers are eagerly awaiting its completion, eager to embark on another adventure within the pages of your imagination. thank you
i love you writer you make my world colorful pls continue making more i am ready to read
Update please..Update please..Update please..Update please.. Update please.. Update please.. Update please.. Update please.. Update please.. 🥺🥺🥺🥺
greatly enjoy this book and hoping in my heart it never ends and/or there will always be more I say kudos to you and will continue to read and reread many times [img=update]
I love this author's stories they are 10 I fell in love mainly with the main characters they are a very cute couple in each arc.I love this author's stories they are 10 I fell in love mainly with the main characters they are a very cute couple in each arc.
Nota 10 gostei muito da história obrigado pela história [img=coins][img=exp][img=fp]81818181818181891919191919199191919191919191991919191919191991919199191929919199292929
nem fogok angol véleményt írni ha valaki elakarja olvasni fordtisa le use translator hungary szoval ez egy nagyon jó regény fincsa romantikával de mondjuk én nem annyira szeretem a futát de hát ezen kivül tökéletes perfect
honestly I love it , potential plot and just really recommend this novel ; really lovely [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story is so good though the writing is a little bad it’s not like it’s unreadable it makes you want to reread it again [img=recommend]
1) The grammar is terrible. Let's take a look at the first paragraph of the second arс. "Lu Xie opened her eyes she was lying on a velvet king bed the room was dark only a little sunlight is seen on the slight crack of the curtain. She stood walked towards the window and opened the curtains." The author does not know what commas and dots are? 2) It's more like a matter of personal preferences, but your Girls' Love is more like M+F. In the 1st arc, MC is alpha, and calls herself "husband". In second arc, she lived all her life under disguise of guy.
so my previous review was hidden perhaps I mentioned a tab0o word 🤣. Anyways pretty good Yuri and the best part is It's TOP MC, pace is acceptable since it's QT. Some are generic world but still fun to read. I just noticed the arcs are improving in fast pace, straightforward plot and it won't let you down nor make you wait, it's surprisingly light and has lot of fluff well --just read it.
Cerita nya sangat bagus , saya berharap thor melanjutkan cerita nya dengan stabil biar tidak membuat pembaca penasaran dan lama menunggu. Semangat melanjutkan perjalanan menuju ke arah cahaya
Revelar Spoiler I think you could have double checked it and fixed the spelling mistakes but overall it was a very good book👌
Decent Quick Transmigration Yuri that will just feed you mouthful of dogfood from time to time, MC is TOP and kinda OP every person she transmigrated in are some boss level character, so expect all problem will be solved immediately.
well author, your writing has improved and the development are always exciting and I always look forward on the updates. wish more updates to come and good luck author~~!! I want it to have more worlds tehehehe
I like it~ I’ve been kinda addicted to world hopping theme lately and finding this made me happy. The story is light and no angst, exactly what I‘m looking for. The author’s writing quality inprove compare to the first novel. Anyway, it is worth the read. (Note: I hope the ARCS include apocalyptic world and entertainment world) KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHOR!!
Es una muy buena novela con buenos personajes y cada mundo al q va Lu Xia son interesantes y te enamoras de segunda protagonista sin importar cuanto cambien en cada mundo