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I really like this novel a lot. Though I wonder if this novel is dropped. Hopefully not because I want to read more of this wonderful novel that you have made.
I'm really liking this story and it's a shame the author is only focusing on his other novel
this is by far one of my favorite novels I know you are working on oracle but I really hope you come back to this one soon any info on that would be much appreciated
la obra literaria está muy bien desarrollada y es excelente para leer, te atrapa y no podés dejar de leerlo.
nice novel. .good pacing, writing and everything. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
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Great and detailed novel with plenty of potential. Just wish Ark would commit to a stable updating plan for the story!
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I started to have intrest in it and even had a lot of fun reading it. I just hope that author is alright as the book is not being updated. I really hope that author doesn't drop it. Now, I can find very few harem stories in which harem is there only as secondary and main is action, mystery and thrill.
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At chapter 50 there is an unannounced time skip/mistake ,seems like a mistake. But it makes it hard to read if it was a time skip with no explanation of how they got to said point. Then please elaborate how and why they chose to settle in such places
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If you can get past the first volume, the novel is really good. The first volume kinda drags, but it’s necessary for worldbuilding purposes.
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Great story so far. a little bit weird idea on the magic and very gross in the first couple chapters. I was literally eating when I first read this and I regret it
I'm not sure how this book is not in the top 20 rankings. while its is a bit slow at times the pacing comes with purpose seems not to be there to just drag the story out but to simply not overwhelm the reader with a info dump. the world design can be a bit confusing at first but it is slowly and nicely coming together at this point. the other also does a good job of constantly reminding you what characters look like so you're not forgetting. I also appreciate that the main character is not a wimp and is logical in approach. overall this story and world have really great potential and I highly reccomend it.
Simply amazing. Every aspect of this novel is excellent. By far one of the best novels in this app.
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Another amazing novel from the author of Oracle Paths. Great world building, solid character development, good pacing and not a lot of useless filler, what more could you ask for? Update stability is about all this author is missing to make him the top 3 authors of webnovel in my opinion. He has recently returned so we can cross our fingers and hope it's for good this time! Thanks for the quality books Ark!
excelente trama y, muy buen desarrollo de la historia.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'll try to be as honest and as objective as possible and I'll follow webnovel's style to do so The writing quality is top notch, but having enough experience writing his other novel I wouldn't expect something different from ark. There is maybe one or two errors but overall the writing style is solid The story development is.... I would like to think the rhythm and progress of the novel is adequate, it's not fast nor is it slow. The design of the characters is good even when a side character appears you can feel how deep they are, and not just plain and simple they have a flavor with each one The updates appear at least once every 24 hrs so you can read a chapter every day without problems If I want to talk about the world background I will need to wait a few more tomes, we have pieces of information here and there but not an info dump and while sometimes ark adds some geography to the world I would love to see more
I really like this novel a lot. Though I wonder if this novel is dropped. Hopefully not because I want to read more of this wonderful novel that you have made.
I'm really liking this story and it's a shame the author is only focusing on his other novel
this is by far one of my favorite novels I know you are working on oracle but I really hope you come back to this one soon any info on that would be much appreciated
la obra literaria está muy bien desarrollada y es excelente para leer, te atrapa y no podés dejar de leerlo.
nice novel. .good pacing, writing and everything. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
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Great and detailed novel with plenty of potential. Just wish Ark would commit to a stable updating plan for the story!
Where did author go no updates ? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I started to have intrest in it and even had a lot of fun reading it. I just hope that author is alright as the book is not being updated. I really hope that author doesn't drop it. Now, I can find very few harem stories in which harem is there only as secondary and main is action, mystery and thrill.
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At chapter 50 there is an unannounced time skip/mistake ,seems like a mistake. But it makes it hard to read if it was a time skip with no explanation of how they got to said point. Then please elaborate how and why they chose to settle in such places
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If you can get past the first volume, the novel is really good. The first volume kinda drags, but it’s necessary for worldbuilding purposes.
....................... .... ................. . ................................................ .. .. . ................................................ .. ........... .. .................................. . ................................................ .. ............
Great story so far. a little bit weird idea on the magic and very gross in the first couple chapters. I was literally eating when I first read this and I regret it
I'm not sure how this book is not in the top 20 rankings. while its is a bit slow at times the pacing comes with purpose seems not to be there to just drag the story out but to simply not overwhelm the reader with a info dump. the world design can be a bit confusing at first but it is slowly and nicely coming together at this point. the other also does a good job of constantly reminding you what characters look like so you're not forgetting. I also appreciate that the main character is not a wimp and is logical in approach. overall this story and world have really great potential and I highly reccomend it.
Simply amazing. Every aspect of this novel is excellent. By far one of the best novels in this app.
![img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins]хорошее произведение жаль только редко главы выходят
Another amazing novel from the author of Oracle Paths. Great world building, solid character development, good pacing and not a lot of useless filler, what more could you ask for? Update stability is about all this author is missing to make him the top 3 authors of webnovel in my opinion. He has recently returned so we can cross our fingers and hope it's for good this time! Thanks for the quality books Ark!
excelente trama y, muy buen desarrollo de la historia.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'll try to be as honest and as objective as possible and I'll follow webnovel's style to do so The writing quality is top notch, but having enough experience writing his other novel I wouldn't expect something different from ark. There is maybe one or two errors but overall the writing style is solid The story development is.... I would like to think the rhythm and progress of the novel is adequate, it's not fast nor is it slow. The design of the characters is good even when a side character appears you can feel how deep they are, and not just plain and simple they have a flavor with each one The updates appear at least once every 24 hrs so you can read a chapter every day without problems If I want to talk about the world background I will need to wait a few more tomes, we have pieces of information here and there but not an info dump and while sometimes ark adds some geography to the world I would love to see more