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Mcidiot........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The liberties taken adjusting konoha to fit the MC's path just seems forced. The MC is boring and lacks substance. he has no allegiances, no real hatred or love for anything. everything seems slightly hostile to him at all times. He just wants to survive he says and seems to use that as an excuse to be weak since it's the easy way out. eyes closed, being pulled in the only direction he knows, plot. I suspect when his power increases the only things that will change is he'll be more manipulative and openly aggressive. overall the story is decent outside of the MC.
I quite like it. +The mc isn't a goody two shoes or an emotional wreck like most of the mcs on this trash novel site. +The powers are good. +Don't know if it's the translation, but the writing is not annoying like it is in most chinese novels (No 'jade skin' type of repetitive descriptions). +No harem. +No romance (atm at least and not even potential fl, so that's nice). -The pace is a bit too fast I think. -The characters are a tiny bit dumb/rash sometimes. Not the mc, but the side peeps. -Needs more chapters. ?The description is empty, which is a bit stupid on the author's/translator's part.
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Frickin amazing. I have a soft spot for novels like these so I may be biased but it's well written with OP Uchiha. What's not to like? Even the system is fun. 5/5 for me.
Not sure if the story is a translation or if the author have just read to many Chinese web novels. But the style of writing is definitely the story's biggest weakness along with using the wrong gender and dialog being reeeeeally stiff.
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قصة عن شخصية اوتشيها يتيم ليس له علاقة مع احد (لم يكن له الوقت)ويهتم بمصلتحه يشترك في الاكاتسكي لديه نظام نمو سريع وتستمتع فيها وقدرته op A story aboutوتiha's character, an orphan who has nothing to do with Someone (who hasn't had the time)and cares about his interests shares the akatsky has a fast growing system and enjoys it and its op ability
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Perfeito, e a konan é incrível e maravilhosa, par romântico! Mostra mais os seu status e ele a recolher dos akatsuki, kisame a farm de Chakra! Kkkkkkkkkkk
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oh my god oh my god look evil mc WoW 😲😳😳 Nobody would expect such a gem to be found on webnovel. A person value cannot be understand by other as that person should know who they are and how their personality are. Fantastic novel, reading this, it give me shiver 🥶 🥶 on how happy 🤣 🤣 😂 i am that i am crying right now oh my gawd..... 😭 Inspirational novel we need this type of novel more on this platform no no no not only this platform but whole network sites This is not enough, we should make an QR code of this websites and make an tattoo to our whole face for outsider to easy access on this masterpiece. continue writing this author I believe with it's climax I'll also climax Ora Ora Ora ora
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don't waste time. Usually or almost every Author have great idea in the beginning but not on the long run to keep it interesting
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Does anyone know the original name of the novel? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Mcidiot........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The liberties taken adjusting konoha to fit the MC's path just seems forced. The MC is boring and lacks substance. he has no allegiances, no real hatred or love for anything. everything seems slightly hostile to him at all times. He just wants to survive he says and seems to use that as an excuse to be weak since it's the easy way out. eyes closed, being pulled in the only direction he knows, plot. I suspect when his power increases the only things that will change is he'll be more manipulative and openly aggressive. overall the story is decent outside of the MC.
I quite like it. +The mc isn't a goody two shoes or an emotional wreck like most of the mcs on this trash novel site. +The powers are good. +Don't know if it's the translation, but the writing is not annoying like it is in most chinese novels (No 'jade skin' type of repetitive descriptions). +No harem. +No romance (atm at least and not even potential fl, so that's nice). -The pace is a bit too fast I think. -The characters are a tiny bit dumb/rash sometimes. Not the mc, but the side peeps. -Needs more chapters. ?The description is empty, which is a bit stupid on the author's/translator's part.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Does anyone know the original name of the novel? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Frickin amazing. I have a soft spot for novels like these so I may be biased but it's well written with OP Uchiha. What's not to like? Even the system is fun. 5/5 for me.
Not sure if the story is a translation or if the author have just read to many Chinese web novels. But the style of writing is definitely the story's biggest weakness along with using the wrong gender and dialog being reeeeeally stiff.
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Yeahh this is Maleficent! I love evil mc [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Good!Good!Good!Good!Good!Good! Good!Good!Good!Good!Good!Good! Good!Good!Good!Good!Good!Good! Good!Good!Good!Good!Good!Good! Good!Good!Good!Good!Good!Good! Good!Good!Good!Good!Good!Good! Good!
Perfect 5 star review No siree you don't .........................................................................,...................
Does anyone know the original name of the novel? Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
قصة عن شخصية اوتشيها يتيم ليس له علاقة مع احد (لم يكن له الوقت)ويهتم بمصلتحه يشترك في الاكاتسكي لديه نظام نمو سريع وتستمتع فيها وقدرته op A story aboutوتiha's character, an orphan who has nothing to do with Someone (who hasn't had the time)and cares about his interests shares the akatsky has a fast growing system and enjoys it and its op ability
Revelar Spoiler Perfeito, e a konan é incrível e maravilhosa, par romântico! Mostra mais os seu status e ele a recolher dos akatsuki, kisame a farm de Chakra! Kkkkkkkkkkk
I like the this fanfiction :::::::::::::::::::::::::::: : ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::ggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
oh my god oh my god look evil mc WoW 😲😳😳 Nobody would expect such a gem to be found on webnovel. A person value cannot be understand by other as that person should know who they are and how their personality are. Fantastic novel, reading this, it give me shiver 🥶 🥶 on how happy 🤣 🤣 😂 i am that i am crying right now oh my gawd..... 😭 Inspirational novel we need this type of novel more on this platform no no no not only this platform but whole network sites This is not enough, we should make an QR code of this websites and make an tattoo to our whole face for outsider to easy access on this masterpiece. continue writing this author I believe with it's climax I'll also climax Ora Ora Ora ora
More more more more more more more more more more more more more. Ok do didnxianxjsndbsoxksxniXiaodksnxlamzosnxkwnxiwnduxndixncnndiwndianxiamzismzimaozmskzmskz zkzn
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Good ….’.’.’.’.’xmxxmnxmxmxmxmxmxmxmxmxmxmmxmxmxmxmmxmxmxmxmxmxmxmmxmxmxmxmxmxmxmxmmxmxmxmxmxmxmxmxmmxmcmcmcmcmcmcmcmmcmcmcmcmcmcmcmcmcmcmc
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don't waste time. Usually or almost every Author have great idea in the beginning but not on the long run to keep it interesting