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Escreva uma avaliaçãoAnother rush story 😩😩. Whatever happen to the qi le guys and her assistant. I truly enjoyed reading this novel, but the fact it was rush and it left with question.
Revelar SpoilerThe enjoyment factor here is high, but so is the confusion factor !This starts as a transmigration into a novel - but it often forgets that, or rather the information gained from the novel is irrelevant. There are a billion threads that are never unravelled and a lot of subplots that are forgotten as the novel goes on.In general the interactions are great and the ML and FL are hilarious. Pity the novel just stops. basically the author was still wondering what to do on chapter 165 and then ended it on 166.so much promise though.
so...not a bad story. The MC is truly embodying the strong independent female lead role where she doesn't totally depend on the ML, but is still appreciative of his minor help here and there. However, there are some plot holes and the author seems to have been in a hurry in trying to finish the story. The whole issue with Qing Le being left in the club, her suspicions with the city area where her brother supposedly died, and etc. are just left in the wind...maybe the author lost their inspiration?
Revelar SpoilerJust like some of the other reviewers said, the story wasn’t finished and was ended abruptly so most of what was going on went unanswered🤷🏽♀️ It was ok tho. It had lots of potential if the author actually finished it correctly but since it wasn’t I don’t think it was worth the read.
I gave translation a three-star since I can understand what the characters are saying. It is just the flow of the story that messed me up. Story development is a two-star because of how fast-paced the story is and how they put in a lot of cliché tropes, but rush it and don't utilize it really well. Character design is a three-star since I do like how the main cast is portrayed, but I don't like how the antagonists are dumb and stupid and have low iq. Some of the supporting characters sometimes forget the fact that the mc has certain op abilities. Many of the antagonists don't ever change their actions they just keep doing the same stupid action even though it's pretty evident that the mc can escape or evade the obstacle. Updating stability. I have no idea since I read it when it finished translating, so I put it at a five-star. World background is a one-star since there are many holes in the story, and the ending is abrupt and rushed. Important side characters that belied the original owners' body of the story were left unfinished, and the ending in general was really unsatisfying.
My only complaint is that it ends up so quickly [img=faceslap]. This is definitely my most favourite story so far ❤️
this is the best story I have ever read .this story fully I read without any boring. 🤗👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
This is an amazing book. I loved reading it, it was one of the best I've read so far on webnovel
thank you for your very nice story.a story with a good ending.and thanks for free reading more power to you!
story is interesting but it ended suddenly without clearing a few points 4 e.g. Shi Ran's brother and Qi Li and issue of jade hunter club.
It is a great read! Very fast to finish since it was rushed to the ending. There are still potholes that the author can use to make a new arc but since it's a translation it will have to do for its ending. I like it because the male lead is sweeter and not 1D character. The FL has great awareness of her abilities and how to use it but then again she can still develop but overall the plot is great, the romance and comedy are good. it's not a perfect 5/5 but it may be a 3.8 at its best with great english translation. and it's complete
i find the ending a bit rushed but thinking again, it's just nice a length. glad i got to read this and complete it in 24 hours!!!!!
over all its nearing to 4 stars. it's not the best of the best but it will hook you out. There is a room for I provident and many plotlines that can be more expounded. However it's a good read and I like that the power Couple don't overpower each other. Though the villains Chara ter development usually is already a troupe some elements do want me to Kill them hahaha. Over all give it a try! you won't be sorry.
Author,can you please tell me the side story about their married life and cute babies.
Revelar SpoilerThere's some spelling mistakes here and there, but it was such a fun and sweet novel. I wish it was longer!
Nice story, sweet and romantic [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
An incredible story, I honestly expected much less from it than what it gave, because it felt so refreshing there wasn't the cliche troupe of miscommunication they went straight to the point never did they made me feel like what was happening was force or anything of that kind, it was such a great story and the characters were actually really interesting each of them, but the story is little short in my opinion, but I prefer it that way than having the same troupe be repeated to stretch the story.
Loved the flow of this novel and though it was really cute and funny, but like many others, I wish it could have tied up some more loose ends. Oh well, still an enjoyable read!
Another rush story 😩😩. Whatever happen to the qi le guys and her assistant. I truly enjoyed reading this novel, but the fact it was rush and it left with question.
Revelar SpoilerThe enjoyment factor here is high, but so is the confusion factor !This starts as a transmigration into a novel - but it often forgets that, or rather the information gained from the novel is irrelevant. There are a billion threads that are never unravelled and a lot of subplots that are forgotten as the novel goes on.In general the interactions are great and the ML and FL are hilarious. Pity the novel just stops. basically the author was still wondering what to do on chapter 165 and then ended it on 166.so much promise though.
so...not a bad story. The MC is truly embodying the strong independent female lead role where she doesn't totally depend on the ML, but is still appreciative of his minor help here and there. However, there are some plot holes and the author seems to have been in a hurry in trying to finish the story. The whole issue with Qing Le being left in the club, her suspicions with the city area where her brother supposedly died, and etc. are just left in the wind...maybe the author lost their inspiration?
Revelar SpoilerJust like some of the other reviewers said, the story wasn’t finished and was ended abruptly so most of what was going on went unanswered🤷🏽♀️ It was ok tho. It had lots of potential if the author actually finished it correctly but since it wasn’t I don’t think it was worth the read.
I gave translation a three-star since I can understand what the characters are saying. It is just the flow of the story that messed me up. Story development is a two-star because of how fast-paced the story is and how they put in a lot of cliché tropes, but rush it and don't utilize it really well. Character design is a three-star since I do like how the main cast is portrayed, but I don't like how the antagonists are dumb and stupid and have low iq. Some of the supporting characters sometimes forget the fact that the mc has certain op abilities. Many of the antagonists don't ever change their actions they just keep doing the same stupid action even though it's pretty evident that the mc can escape or evade the obstacle. Updating stability. I have no idea since I read it when it finished translating, so I put it at a five-star. World background is a one-star since there are many holes in the story, and the ending is abrupt and rushed. Important side characters that belied the original owners' body of the story were left unfinished, and the ending in general was really unsatisfying.
My only complaint is that it ends up so quickly [img=faceslap]. This is definitely my most favourite story so far ❤️
this is the best story I have ever read .this story fully I read without any boring. 🤗👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
This is an amazing book. I loved reading it, it was one of the best I've read so far on webnovel
thank you for your very nice story.a story with a good ending.and thanks for free reading more power to you!
story is interesting but it ended suddenly without clearing a few points 4 e.g. Shi Ran's brother and Qi Li and issue of jade hunter club.
It is a great read! Very fast to finish since it was rushed to the ending. There are still potholes that the author can use to make a new arc but since it's a translation it will have to do for its ending. I like it because the male lead is sweeter and not 1D character. The FL has great awareness of her abilities and how to use it but then again she can still develop but overall the plot is great, the romance and comedy are good. it's not a perfect 5/5 but it may be a 3.8 at its best with great english translation. and it's complete
i find the ending a bit rushed but thinking again, it's just nice a length. glad i got to read this and complete it in 24 hours!!!!!
over all its nearing to 4 stars. it's not the best of the best but it will hook you out. There is a room for I provident and many plotlines that can be more expounded. However it's a good read and I like that the power Couple don't overpower each other. Though the villains Chara ter development usually is already a troupe some elements do want me to Kill them hahaha. Over all give it a try! you won't be sorry.
Author,can you please tell me the side story about their married life and cute babies.
Revelar SpoilerThere's some spelling mistakes here and there, but it was such a fun and sweet novel. I wish it was longer!
Nice story, sweet and romantic [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
An incredible story, I honestly expected much less from it than what it gave, because it felt so refreshing there wasn't the cliche troupe of miscommunication they went straight to the point never did they made me feel like what was happening was force or anything of that kind, it was such a great story and the characters were actually really interesting each of them, but the story is little short in my opinion, but I prefer it that way than having the same troupe be repeated to stretch the story.
Loved the flow of this novel and though it was really cute and funny, but like many others, I wish it could have tied up some more loose ends. Oh well, still an enjoyable read!