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The story and the characters are actually really interesting. I would actually recommend this.
Talking about good novels, I have doubt that there is one that suits my taste, but after coming across this one, wowwwwww. It really got me thinking of when the next chapter will be uploaded. Pls this Nobel is highly recommended...
The main story itself is very intriguing. It's like a roller coaster of emotional action suspense and exictment. I had to take time to read through the sentences carefully to fully get a grasp of the story and it's worth it
Everyone leave what you are doing come and read this amazing story oh my goodness
Hello author, I really like your author, can I ask for your permission to use it for the purpose of re-reading with other translations and non-profits, if you don't like it, you can, I thank you What a lucky day~
Revelar Spoiler
I should have reviewed this like...seven days ago. This story is amazeballs. Tip: Just power read through the first and second chapter, the story portrayed through those chapters is convoluted. I'll try not to spoil but the title was kinda confusing until I reached like chapter six or seven (that was where it was getting gooooodddd). I'm not a fan of Female protagonists, so I was chary to read this one...but the more I read the more I got sucked in. Thank you author, you've made my day.
i thought this was a good story. I would definitely recommend for anyone to read this story. Definitely not a waste of time. iiioooooooò
Read all the way til Chapter 10, I would suggest putting the first two in the Auxiliary so it would not make readers confused. Also, I understand she's intersex but the he/she confused me a bit. Overall I can see it's for a selected audience who may enjoy reading the character designs where the MC lusts over anyone's hot and that she appears to be sexualising many things. An interesting read for sure.All the best author!
This is the first time I'm Reading this kind of novel and turns out I like it, I'm so impressed and can't wait to read more. Thumbs up to the author and happy reading to all
The story seems really intriguing and fun. I've read a lot of transmigration stories and so far this one seems to be better than the rest. keep up the good work author
This is a fascinating story❤ The story and the characters are well made, and the author has put a lot of effort into it, I read a few chapters, and it's great. Author I am rooting for you
It's a great romantic book with a little bit of comedy. It's fun to read and anyone will enjoy it. That characters are designed very well, Great work
Nice plot, interesting synopsis and world-building... cannot wait for more chapters! Good work author [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=update]
Reading the blurb alone is enticing. I like the way you added some of the conversation between her and her system. It's obvious this book is going to make one roll on the floor laughing.🤓
Hello and an honest review from me. Actually this is my first time reading a character that has a intersex character and moreover it's the MC herself. The story was okay and I wish you all da best, author👍🏻
If I didn't have my chapter to write I would've been reading this story like a drug addict, the author did a great job, I hope the author keeps up the good work.
The story and the characters are well made, and the author has put a lot of effort into it, I read a few chapters, and it's great. Author I am rooting for you
When l first started to read it made me a little confuse as l couldn't understand were is the main story or what the author wants to say without showing us the main story..... But resfing the third chapter where the main story started it really make me interested..... Its a nice story that will star hook u up time to time.... Keep going author but l suggest u to start ur story from the start as reader wants to read the story in the first but if it starts confused them at first they will not read it.....
I love reading this book, love the synopsis, [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
You should use the auxiliary chapter for prologue and delicacies. And start the story in the first chapter to make it look nice and tidy. This is quite a roller-coaster read for me. Not a LGBT fan. However, I still read it until chapter 5. Even though I have no experience in such concepts and stories, but I think it's not bad and is fine for reading. Well, it's actually pretty good.
The change implies adjustments: without correspondence. And how to adjust the heart that feels: the distance. This novel spreads its wings in flowery verses. To states of passion, emotion, hope. Walking through each chapter is experience.
I love reading such a story. I read few chapters and I am already hooked. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍
The synopsis is great. Also, the plot and characters are interesting. I read first few chapters and I am looking forward to read more chapters. Great work author 👍
Reading this story was great read. Enjoying every page of and chapters of it. Very inspiring characters with nice scene. Simple and clear grammar. I will recommend everyone to read it.
The different wolds trope was a pretty interesting idea, I can definitely see that going somewhere. Of course, the humor in the writing is always a plus as well, from what I've read I have enjoyed much of it.
Yandere vibes all throughout whewsss. Definitely not my cup of tea but it's nice. At first, I didn't understand what the prologue and the intro chap meant but after reading a couple of chapters it started to make sense. A small suggestion though, you don't have to put chapter 1 or chapter on your title because it makes your chapter titles too long which lowers the engagement for readers. Then again, everyone has their own style and there's probably a reason why you do it. Keep up the great work though, this book is really nice, added to my library ^0^
The overall story is very interesting and fun to read, but you should give a reason for the girl to love him. Anyway, I will be rooting for you. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like that you are going through the path of a yandere which gives the story an interesting vibe. But you did not describe the female character or give sufficient reasons why she loves him. I also like the way you tried to describe how magnetic she is but you need you need to try and intrigue the readers.
So....Am a new author here and i promise this novel won't fail you, it might not be the best out there, might not deserve 5 stars rating but when it comes to entertainment, you've got it! Try this out guys and appreciate through comments, reviews, vote (if unlocked), comments, AND DID I SAY COMMENTS? Things to expect: W1-To win a god’s heart = Ancient pet × god W2- Once upon a tail= Farmer × Mermaid W3- An otaku’s fairytale= Otaku × Sealed Magician W4- The way to a man’s heart= Chef love~ W5- Love beat= Hip-pop love~ W6- What’s wrong with Mr. John? = Office love~ W7- The fangs of love= Vampire love W8- Icy love= Ice skater × Ice spirit And many more~ T/N: There are 25 worlds in total ENJOY~
Never mind my review. This review is for posting character pictures: Starting up we have: Dina and Zero-one.
The story and the characters are actually really interesting. I would actually recommend this.
Talking about good novels, I have doubt that there is one that suits my taste, but after coming across this one, wowwwwww. It really got me thinking of when the next chapter will be uploaded. Pls this Nobel is highly recommended...
The main story itself is very intriguing. It's like a roller coaster of emotional action suspense and exictment. I had to take time to read through the sentences carefully to fully get a grasp of the story and it's worth it
Everyone leave what you are doing come and read this amazing story oh my goodness
Hello author, I really like your author, can I ask for your permission to use it for the purpose of re-reading with other translations and non-profits, if you don't like it, you can, I thank you What a lucky day~
Revelar Spoiler I should have reviewed this like...seven days ago. This story is amazeballs. Tip: Just power read through the first and second chapter, the story portrayed through those chapters is convoluted. I'll try not to spoil but the title was kinda confusing until I reached like chapter six or seven (that was where it was getting gooooodddd). I'm not a fan of Female protagonists, so I was chary to read this one...but the more I read the more I got sucked in. Thank you author, you've made my day.
i thought this was a good story. I would definitely recommend for anyone to read this story. Definitely not a waste of time. iiioooooooò
Read all the way til Chapter 10, I would suggest putting the first two in the Auxiliary so it would not make readers confused. Also, I understand she's intersex but the he/she confused me a bit. Overall I can see it's for a selected audience who may enjoy reading the character designs where the MC lusts over anyone's hot and that she appears to be sexualising many things. An interesting read for sure.All the best author!
This is the first time I'm Reading this kind of novel and turns out I like it, I'm so impressed and can't wait to read more. Thumbs up to the author and happy reading to all
The story seems really intriguing and fun. I've read a lot of transmigration stories and so far this one seems to be better than the rest. keep up the good work author
This is a fascinating story❤ The story and the characters are well made, and the author has put a lot of effort into it, I read a few chapters, and it's great. Author I am rooting for you
It's a great romantic book with a little bit of comedy. It's fun to read and anyone will enjoy it. That characters are designed very well, Great work
Nice plot, interesting synopsis and world-building... cannot wait for more chapters! Good work author [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=update]
Reading the blurb alone is enticing. I like the way you added some of the conversation between her and her system. It's obvious this book is going to make one roll on the floor laughing.🤓
Hello and an honest review from me. Actually this is my first time reading a character that has a intersex character and moreover it's the MC herself. The story was okay and I wish you all da best, author👍🏻
If I didn't have my chapter to write I would've been reading this story like a drug addict, the author did a great job, I hope the author keeps up the good work.
The story and the characters are well made, and the author has put a lot of effort into it, I read a few chapters, and it's great. Author I am rooting for you
When l first started to read it made me a little confuse as l couldn't understand were is the main story or what the author wants to say without showing us the main story..... But resfing the third chapter where the main story started it really make me interested..... Its a nice story that will star hook u up time to time.... Keep going author but l suggest u to start ur story from the start as reader wants to read the story in the first but if it starts confused them at first they will not read it.....
I love reading this book, love the synopsis, [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
You should use the auxiliary chapter for prologue and delicacies. And start the story in the first chapter to make it look nice and tidy. This is quite a roller-coaster read for me. Not a LGBT fan. However, I still read it until chapter 5. Even though I have no experience in such concepts and stories, but I think it's not bad and is fine for reading. Well, it's actually pretty good.
The change implies adjustments: without correspondence. And how to adjust the heart that feels: the distance. This novel spreads its wings in flowery verses. To states of passion, emotion, hope. Walking through each chapter is experience.
I love reading such a story. I read few chapters and I am already hooked. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍
The synopsis is great. Also, the plot and characters are interesting. I read first few chapters and I am looking forward to read more chapters. Great work author 👍
Reading this story was great read. Enjoying every page of and chapters of it. Very inspiring characters with nice scene. Simple and clear grammar. I will recommend everyone to read it.
The different wolds trope was a pretty interesting idea, I can definitely see that going somewhere. Of course, the humor in the writing is always a plus as well, from what I've read I have enjoyed much of it.
Yandere vibes all throughout whewsss. Definitely not my cup of tea but it's nice. At first, I didn't understand what the prologue and the intro chap meant but after reading a couple of chapters it started to make sense. A small suggestion though, you don't have to put chapter 1 or chapter on your title because it makes your chapter titles too long which lowers the engagement for readers. Then again, everyone has their own style and there's probably a reason why you do it. Keep up the great work though, this book is really nice, added to my library ^0^
The overall story is very interesting and fun to read, but you should give a reason for the girl to love him. Anyway, I will be rooting for you. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like that you are going through the path of a yandere which gives the story an interesting vibe. But you did not describe the female character or give sufficient reasons why she loves him. I also like the way you tried to describe how magnetic she is but you need you need to try and intrigue the readers.
So....Am a new author here and i promise this novel won't fail you, it might not be the best out there, might not deserve 5 stars rating but when it comes to entertainment, you've got it! Try this out guys and appreciate through comments, reviews, vote (if unlocked), comments, AND DID I SAY COMMENTS? Things to expect: W1-To win a god’s heart = Ancient pet × god W2- Once upon a tail= Farmer × Mermaid W3- An otaku’s fairytale= Otaku × Sealed Magician W4- The way to a man’s heart= Chef love~ W5- Love beat= Hip-pop love~ W6- What’s wrong with Mr. John? = Office love~ W7- The fangs of love= Vampire love W8- Icy love= Ice skater × Ice spirit And many more~ T/N: There are 25 worlds in total ENJOY~
Never mind my review. This review is for posting character pictures: Starting up we have: Dina and Zero-one.