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This is pretty good actually, a combination of various fighting anime/manga. The harem goes with only slight teasings, not degenerates. Fighting styles that sort of makes sense( bystander pov, I'm not really a fighter). Logical power system and opponents, to people who complain that he's a fool or too carefree hmm isnt Baki like that as well? This isnt a psychological drama or fic with cunningness like Light Yagami, he just doesnt want to be under anyone, likes to have a good fight and protects his friend,loved ones, etc. If you want to read cunning Mc's that will do whatever it takes to reach his goal then just read Holy_Joker's fanfics
I'm currently in chapter 34 and I'm really enjoying the story, but I'm afraid that in the future the mc will turn into a giant bodybuilder full of muscles like the characters in Kengan, can anyone tell me if the mc will actually become a giant full of muscles? (translate)
Okay great the korea arc was awfull glazing the hell out of them and no chance they are even kengan level the glaze was unreal annoyed the shit out of me
Man, this is so emotional, I can't stop worrying about Yuji! I am at the 155 chapter of Kengan Ashura arc now, and I am worrying about how everything will go in next chapters. As for the reason why I'm so worried is that Yuji have fractured a couple parts of his body, especially he can't move normally his arm. And, I'm just thinking how he is gonna fight with his teacher Kahoh Agito who is his prime, If we watch out to Yuji's wounds and bruises. I will just read it despite my own thoughts about him losing Kanoh.
"Path to Strength" is kinda cool, I would like to thank the author for creating such an excellent piece of work. And, also, the fact that Yuji Shinakawa always solves the problems using his fists is encouraging to love martial arts. I am also a practitioner of muai-thai, and that gives me a sense of relief seeing him as a martial artist.
I’ll be honest the start of this fic wasn’t the best it was readable but the Mc’s personality was quite questionable. However, when it got to the Kengan Annhialiation tournament arc that was when I fully started bussing 50 gallons of nut to this fic, the amount of ecstasy I felt was heavenly and I have to thank you for that Author. 😘
Lil bro deleted my last review cause he doesn’t want people to know this is basically Pokémon 💀, basically just cherry picking the good reviews and deleting the bad reviews. everyone in this fanfic follows everything the mc wants, they don’t think for themselves, characters asssasination is common here, all of them basically becomes ”OC” that follows the whim of the mc.
Basically Pokémon no one has a mind of their own basically going along with everything the mc says, complete character assasination everyone of everyone in this fanfics. nothing make sense cause everyone bends to the will of mc, no consequences have ever befall the mc.
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Just wanted to let you know that the Baki Hanma vs Kengen Ashura anime is out just Incase you consider including it in the novel, I take it you're an open minded guy....
Giving this review for 2 reasons. It’s generally a solid fic, and to counteract any bad reviews caused by people getting pissy after getting banned from the discord.
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I liked the the tournament act but as soon as the next arc started I hated it how could all the fighting he has gone through still made him not be able to kill Choi and get the kidnapped people I hated it , it would have been better if he destroyed all of them except a few with some difficulty but still beat them then find the kidnapped people do some other stuff , then start the Baki arc where the true evil lies.
not my cup of tea. The sudden scene changes of past, future, present was executed horribly. MC is basically your usual Shounen Bully destroyer 2000. The dialogues are below average, borderline annoying.
The idea is so good but the execution makes me sleepy, even the fighting parts are boring...
Yoh Author why'd you stop updating man 🥲,,,, don't do us dirty come on please 🙏🏾
Impeccable writing as always great Author please keep writing more and keep up the good work. THANK YOU VERY MUCH
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This one was actually a masterpiece at first i failed to understand the power level but as i read its actually easy to know anyway this fanfic was great it shows others characters progress on their life like osanai and shiki and a few others most fanfic i've seen focus too much on the mc and forgot most other character that was there on mc side first specially since this one was a crossover of many (anime world) im gona wait for the next update im also looking forward between the fight of ohma and yuji its also great i want to eee ohma vs baki i know baki would win but seeing how strong ohma was xxx rn im sure the author add some strength to ohma than the original the romance was great although slow so 5 star this fanfic was simply what people called "MASTERPIECE"
Truthfully I hate Tokyo Revenger, but you mister author hook me with your story even when there is Tokyo Revenger element in it .Very good 👍. I just hope this story can continue . Author you are the best.
¿Y la policía? Supuestamente el protagonista vive en el año 2005, en Japón. Sin embargo, no hay policías que detengan las peleas callejeras o intentos de asesinato, no hay cárcel o denuncias por agresión o intento de asesinato. Es un fanfic, pero esto es demasiado ilógico. Es decir, no es un fanfic anime con magia rota o un tema apocalíptico.
Before you guys say anything, keep in mind that this review is from the latest chapter (154) no spoilers ahead. Great stability, frankly, the amount of words and the fast the author updates is amazing. Clearly a loved work where that the author writes constantly. So if you're in for just entertainment give it a read.If you're here for the best grammar... well, better pass this up.First of all, it seems that author has forgotten most of his English classes, so while it's in English, and it doesn't seem like a translation, the quality is kiddish at best, childish at worst.Still, readable, better than half the novels out there.The design of the OCs is peculiar, normally I would give 5 stars just because the amount and care put into the OCs however... They are all expys. Yeeees, it's true that with how it's written it makes sense, which is the only reason it doesn't go lower. There's no originality at all. The story unfolds... bad. No seriously, it's bad. It's basically bleach but worse. Let's not talk about the horrible first 25 chapters that make no sense,just like KHR, let's ignore all this time skipping pov change foolishness for a second.Ignoring all that let's focus on the MC, he never loses. Not really, his plot armor is immense.He lost twice but for plot reasons but I didn't feel the agony or the crushing defeat, just a ' meh'... The MC is an absolute idiot, he holds back, gets nose broken and then wins. And that repeats through the whole novel.Also he awakens a system that let's him "evolve" when he's about to lose and suddenly wins. With no suspense at all. Romance side ... eh, meh, it's not bad. Slow burn. But not bad.
Sinceramente el primer fanfic que leo y le pongo 5 estrellas me encanta lo único malo es que para mi tiene pocos capítulos quiero mas !!! XD
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this is my first review although im not that kind of guy that professional reader who always nitpick on the story ( not to be rude to the professional reader out there) your story really great even though im little bit slow at the time i hope you keep doing what you doing bro [img=recommend]
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Overall, it's pretty good, but I feel like with all the work put in the little extra effort to use a free tool. Such as Grammarly. To touch up the minor mistakes would make the reading smoother. As I said, overall, pretty good so far. Although I read all of it in about 2 days.
La historia se le nota el amor al arte,tanto el cambio mental del capítulo 30 por parte de el mc en el distrito como su actual temperamento calculador aunque no frio. Amo esta historia aunque tuvo algunas armaduras de trama en su mayoría se fundamento,amo esta historia y lo que aparenta. Merece estar como una novela.
This has been a very entertaining story. As you might expect, lots of battles, and those fights are well-written. My one complaint would be a few name-drops from crossovers that ended up being just that. I don't mind the direction things are going but when you introduce a character or hint that an anime is included... You know? I want to see it. Or it's just name-dropping. I guess I would also have preferred if the Tokyo Revengers crossover could've been less in the background. We actually got to see that world, but I honestly can't say if I remember the mc and most of the characters ever speak to each other. In this case I would say the focus on fighting was out of balance with exploring one of your crossover worlds. These are my thoughts. I'm happy to be following this now.
First of all, I agree that this FF has a start that I myself agree is mediocre, but I am happy to say that in the following chapters I can adapt well and improve the story. I urge you to give it a chance until at least the end of the Tokyo Revengers arc, as it is from there that I can work more freely without having to deal with the problems that are the strange time travel and the teenager with a psychopathic disorder.
This is pretty good actually, a combination of various fighting anime/manga. The harem goes with only slight teasings, not degenerates. Fighting styles that sort of makes sense( bystander pov, I'm not really a fighter). Logical power system and opponents, to people who complain that he's a fool or too carefree hmm isnt Baki like that as well? This isnt a psychological drama or fic with cunningness like Light Yagami, he just doesnt want to be under anyone, likes to have a good fight and protects his friend,loved ones, etc. If you want to read cunning Mc's that will do whatever it takes to reach his goal then just read Holy_Joker's fanfics
I'm currently in chapter 34 and I'm really enjoying the story, but I'm afraid that in the future the mc will turn into a giant bodybuilder full of muscles like the characters in Kengan, can anyone tell me if the mc will actually become a giant full of muscles? (translate)
Okay great the korea arc was awfull glazing the hell out of them and no chance they are even kengan level the glaze was unreal annoyed the shit out of me
Man, this is so emotional, I can't stop worrying about Yuji! I am at the 155 chapter of Kengan Ashura arc now, and I am worrying about how everything will go in next chapters. As for the reason why I'm so worried is that Yuji have fractured a couple parts of his body, especially he can't move normally his arm. And, I'm just thinking how he is gonna fight with his teacher Kahoh Agito who is his prime, If we watch out to Yuji's wounds and bruises. I will just read it despite my own thoughts about him losing Kanoh.
"Path to Strength" is kinda cool, I would like to thank the author for creating such an excellent piece of work. And, also, the fact that Yuji Shinakawa always solves the problems using his fists is encouraging to love martial arts. I am also a practitioner of muai-thai, and that gives me a sense of relief seeing him as a martial artist.
I’ll be honest the start of this fic wasn’t the best it was readable but the Mc’s personality was quite questionable. However, when it got to the Kengan Annhialiation tournament arc that was when I fully started bussing 50 gallons of nut to this fic, the amount of ecstasy I felt was heavenly and I have to thank you for that Author. 😘
Lil bro deleted my last review cause he doesn’t want people to know this is basically Pokémon 💀, basically just cherry picking the good reviews and deleting the bad reviews. everyone in this fanfic follows everything the mc wants, they don’t think for themselves, characters asssasination is common here, all of them basically becomes ”OC” that follows the whim of the mc.
Basically Pokémon no one has a mind of their own basically going along with everything the mc says, complete character assasination everyone of everyone in this fanfics. nothing make sense cause everyone bends to the will of mc, no consequences have ever befall the mc.
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Just wanted to let you know that the Baki Hanma vs Kengen Ashura anime is out just Incase you consider including it in the novel, I take it you're an open minded guy....
Giving this review for 2 reasons. It’s generally a solid fic, and to counteract any bad reviews caused by people getting pissy after getting banned from the discord.
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I liked the the tournament act but as soon as the next arc started I hated it how could all the fighting he has gone through still made him not be able to kill Choi and get the kidnapped people I hated it , it would have been better if he destroyed all of them except a few with some difficulty but still beat them then find the kidnapped people do some other stuff , then start the Baki arc where the true evil lies.
not my cup of tea. The sudden scene changes of past, future, present was executed horribly. MC is basically your usual Shounen Bully destroyer 2000. The dialogues are below average, borderline annoying.
The idea is so good but the execution makes me sleepy, even the fighting parts are boring...
Yoh Author why'd you stop updating man 🥲,,,, don't do us dirty come on please 🙏🏾
Impeccable writing as always great Author please keep writing more and keep up the good work. THANK YOU VERY MUCH
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This one was actually a masterpiece at first i failed to understand the power level but as i read its actually easy to know anyway this fanfic was great it shows others characters progress on their life like osanai and shiki and a few others most fanfic i've seen focus too much on the mc and forgot most other character that was there on mc side first specially since this one was a crossover of many (anime world) im gona wait for the next update im also looking forward between the fight of ohma and yuji its also great i want to eee ohma vs baki i know baki would win but seeing how strong ohma was xxx rn im sure the author add some strength to ohma than the original the romance was great although slow so 5 star this fanfic was simply what people called "MASTERPIECE"
Truthfully I hate Tokyo Revenger, but you mister author hook me with your story even when there is Tokyo Revenger element in it .Very good 👍. I just hope this story can continue . Author you are the best.
¿Y la policía? Supuestamente el protagonista vive en el año 2005, en Japón. Sin embargo, no hay policías que detengan las peleas callejeras o intentos de asesinato, no hay cárcel o denuncias por agresión o intento de asesinato. Es un fanfic, pero esto es demasiado ilógico. Es decir, no es un fanfic anime con magia rota o un tema apocalíptico.
Before you guys say anything, keep in mind that this review is from the latest chapter (154) no spoilers ahead. Great stability, frankly, the amount of words and the fast the author updates is amazing. Clearly a loved work where that the author writes constantly. So if you're in for just entertainment give it a read.If you're here for the best grammar... well, better pass this up.First of all, it seems that author has forgotten most of his English classes, so while it's in English, and it doesn't seem like a translation, the quality is kiddish at best, childish at worst.Still, readable, better than half the novels out there.The design of the OCs is peculiar, normally I would give 5 stars just because the amount and care put into the OCs however... They are all expys. Yeeees, it's true that with how it's written it makes sense, which is the only reason it doesn't go lower. There's no originality at all. The story unfolds... bad. No seriously, it's bad. It's basically bleach but worse. Let's not talk about the horrible first 25 chapters that make no sense,just like KHR, let's ignore all this time skipping pov change foolishness for a second.Ignoring all that let's focus on the MC, he never loses. Not really, his plot armor is immense.He lost twice but for plot reasons but I didn't feel the agony or the crushing defeat, just a ' meh'... The MC is an absolute idiot, he holds back, gets nose broken and then wins. And that repeats through the whole novel.Also he awakens a system that let's him "evolve" when he's about to lose and suddenly wins. With no suspense at all. Romance side ... eh, meh, it's not bad. Slow burn. But not bad.
Sinceramente el primer fanfic que leo y le pongo 5 estrellas me encanta lo único malo es que para mi tiene pocos capítulos quiero mas !!! XD
Actualiza más seguido ......fjgjrururjfyriufufdjdjejdjdur7ufjdbdhdudhdhdjdjdjdjefjfjfyfyrueueueueueueuru2jeu3iriruru4urjfjur8438e9djfjjfir388383
this is my first review although im not that kind of guy that professional reader who always nitpick on the story ( not to be rude to the professional reader out there) your story really great even though im little bit slow at the time i hope you keep doing what you doing bro [img=recommend]
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Overall, it's pretty good, but I feel like with all the work put in the little extra effort to use a free tool. Such as Grammarly. To touch up the minor mistakes would make the reading smoother. As I said, overall, pretty good so far. Although I read all of it in about 2 days.
La historia se le nota el amor al arte,tanto el cambio mental del capítulo 30 por parte de el mc en el distrito como su actual temperamento calculador aunque no frio. Amo esta historia aunque tuvo algunas armaduras de trama en su mayoría se fundamento,amo esta historia y lo que aparenta. Merece estar como una novela.
This has been a very entertaining story. As you might expect, lots of battles, and those fights are well-written. My one complaint would be a few name-drops from crossovers that ended up being just that. I don't mind the direction things are going but when you introduce a character or hint that an anime is included... You know? I want to see it. Or it's just name-dropping. I guess I would also have preferred if the Tokyo Revengers crossover could've been less in the background. We actually got to see that world, but I honestly can't say if I remember the mc and most of the characters ever speak to each other. In this case I would say the focus on fighting was out of balance with exploring one of your crossover worlds. These are my thoughts. I'm happy to be following this now.
First of all, I agree that this FF has a start that I myself agree is mediocre, but I am happy to say that in the following chapters I can adapt well and improve the story. I urge you to give it a chance until at least the end of the Tokyo Revengers arc, as it is from there that I can work more freely without having to deal with the problems that are the strange time travel and the teenager with a psychopathic disorder.