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4.75

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Sigheti

A popular premise, but well-executed. There’s a few flaws I wanted to point out, in the hope to help you progress. Your grammar is passable, although I would personally refrain from using the passive voice as much as you do. It makes sentences clunky, vague and awkward. So if you can change the subject of the sentence in order to rewrite it in active voice without this changing your meaning, I advise you to do so. There is an absence of rhythm in your writing. I’m aware it isn’t easy to write with rhythm, and personally, I struggle with it as well, but try to bring some more rhythm to your paragraphs. The dialogue is clear, but sometimes it comes across a a bit forced. Overall, I believe your work holds a lot of potential. I wish you luck!

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Dark_Maniac24

Reading this book makes me remember my favorite anime, Attack on Titian. Nice one author, you developed your well, I really hope to see more and it would nice if it's better than AOT. I'm rooting for you.

2yr
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Jeri_
LV 15 Badge

I like that MC have a proper goal, so the story will be followed well. 👏🏻 The plot is intriguing and different, kind of systemic vampires story. 👋 Some paragraps were too long, but you can easily edit that any time. 🦋🙆🏼‍♀️ This novel is really tempting for fantasy/vampire fans.😌 Names were chosen well, mc looks enjoyable and trustworthy. This book is reliable for good plot, well done. 👏🏻

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Novelistilia

Wow, the story is captivating from the start! It feels like you are really inside his world. Kudos to the author. You nailed it! Can't wait for Luke to achieve his goals. 🤩🔥

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Denzel_Silver

I have always been a fan of Vampires. And the way you blended it with the setting of one of my favorite anime, AOT, this book, to me, is simply splendid. Keep up the good work!

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Amzy_Bella

wow, five stars for you author. you did an amazing work here. this novel is not to be missed by any. I don't know but I like Vampire novels and this one also got me .

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Dadevilslastcry

This story is what I am looking for, while I'm reading this story, I felt like it reminds me of Owari no Seraph but I know it's far from it.

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Anya_231

The story start with dark plot and i really enjoyed how the author create the post apocalypse and how the author make the plot of this story not boring. every chapter i read i really can't hold myself

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Surbhi_mithil

Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover. The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author. I enjoy your work. recommended:),

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Sage_Tranquil

What an interesting prologue ! Hmm, some readers who like to read apocalyptic and gore theme, will definitely like this story too. I bet your story will be able to attract many apocalyptic fans. Good work, author !

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RiyaSarkar24

This book is purely for Gore book lovers. I personally like like reading apocalypse themed books. Humans hunting vampires is definitely an interesting plot and author have justified by his writing skills.

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moved_44

This is very nice book and I must say the Author really did a great job! The first chapters captured my attention and the book cover is eye-catching.

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qurat_ul_ain4

Synopsis and title is good to start with. Story development and character design were upto the mark.. I just want to give a piece of advice as well, just try to separate dialogues from the narrative paragraphs and do work on your grammar a bit. Do your best to stay in past tense. Overall, It was such a good read! I am rooting for you, Author. Do wonders!

2yr
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Melsdar
LV 10 Badge

Vampire story which I think is very interesting. The length of the story in one chapter makes me very satisfied reading the story. I really want to know about the future of the story. the spirit of the writer

2yr
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Moonwriting

It's a beautiful story to start a read. well written and keep you captured. It engages your mind and touches your soul. The storyline unique and well define of characters. Good job author

2yr
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Muche_Godwin

I really like this novel. The story progression is awesome. And the characters are really unique. Keep up the good work author. I hope to see more chapters uploaded

2yr
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_Rockbison_

Nice plot l must say .... Author hasn't upload more but still l can say that l is a very interesting story that everyone should try reading... All the best author and plzzz do upload a lot and so that l can read more 🤭🤭

2yr
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RosemilOduor

The author has a good storyline and I'm glad to be have read this piece. It's off with a good start and I can't wait to read more chapters. Are you looking for fantasy novels? Be sure to check this out, you won't be disappointed.

2yr
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AuthorTeemah

Oh am really enjoying this book of yours the characters are great,t the plot and the writing style is good keep it up author,I have add to my library for update

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Lercher

Vampire, yeah I really enjoyed every story who have a vampire in it. But this story is different, i don't know why but this story feel really special

2yr
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Elruna

I really enjoyed how the author make this story, how the author shape the world of this story and how the author create nice pace on the plot.

2yr
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KaiEnvan

This book is amazing and I've already added it to my library. I greatly recommend this book to everyone. Author you are doing great. Keep it up.

2yr
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Alven3

It started off great with a good concept, so I hope that it doesn’t get dropped........................................................................

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Spr12
LV 10

Easily addictive once the author finds himself after the 1st few chapters. This is a masterpiece I would love to see this animated it’s a joy to read and I want more.

2yr
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Safire245

what a great fantasy story, i really enjoyed the first paragraph and the pace its so great i can believe i read such a great story, please always continue your work

2yr
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PERWEEN
LV 11 Badge

Such a great fantasy fiction I found this week. The author done a really great job at describing the situations and background of the characters. I'm hooked and wishing for more updates!

2yr
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Sigheti

A popular premise, but well-executed. There’s a few flaws I wanted to point out, in the hope to help you progress. Your grammar is passable, although I would personally refrain from using the passive voice as much as you do. It makes sentences clunky, vague and awkward. So if you can change the subject of the sentence in order to rewrite it in active voice without this changing your meaning, I advise you to do so. There is an absence of rhythm in your writing. I’m aware it isn’t easy to write with rhythm, and personally, I struggle with it as well, but try to bring some more rhythm to your paragraphs. The dialogue is clear, but sometimes it comes across a a bit forced. Overall, I believe your work holds a lot of potential. I wish you luck!

2yr
Ver 2 Respostas
Dark_Maniac24

Reading this book makes me remember my favorite anime, Attack on Titian. Nice one author, you developed your well, I really hope to see more and it would nice if it's better than AOT. I'm rooting for you.

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Jeri_
LV 15 Badge

I like that MC have a proper goal, so the story will be followed well. 👏🏻 The plot is intriguing and different, kind of systemic vampires story. 👋 Some paragraps were too long, but you can easily edit that any time. 🦋🙆🏼‍♀️ This novel is really tempting for fantasy/vampire fans.😌 Names were chosen well, mc looks enjoyable and trustworthy. This book is reliable for good plot, well done. 👏🏻

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Novelistilia

Wow, the story is captivating from the start! It feels like you are really inside his world. Kudos to the author. You nailed it! Can't wait for Luke to achieve his goals. 🤩🔥

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Denzel_Silver

I have always been a fan of Vampires. And the way you blended it with the setting of one of my favorite anime, AOT, this book, to me, is simply splendid. Keep up the good work!

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Amzy_Bella

wow, five stars for you author. you did an amazing work here. this novel is not to be missed by any. I don't know but I like Vampire novels and this one also got me .

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Dadevilslastcry

This story is what I am looking for, while I'm reading this story, I felt like it reminds me of Owari no Seraph but I know it's far from it.

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Anya_231

The story start with dark plot and i really enjoyed how the author create the post apocalypse and how the author make the plot of this story not boring. every chapter i read i really can't hold myself

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Surbhi_mithil

Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover. The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author. I enjoy your work. recommended:),

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Sage_Tranquil

What an interesting prologue ! Hmm, some readers who like to read apocalyptic and gore theme, will definitely like this story too. I bet your story will be able to attract many apocalyptic fans. Good work, author !

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
RiyaSarkar24

This book is purely for Gore book lovers. I personally like like reading apocalypse themed books. Humans hunting vampires is definitely an interesting plot and author have justified by his writing skills.

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
moved_44

This is very nice book and I must say the Author really did a great job! The first chapters captured my attention and the book cover is eye-catching.

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
qurat_ul_ain4

Synopsis and title is good to start with. Story development and character design were upto the mark.. I just want to give a piece of advice as well, just try to separate dialogues from the narrative paragraphs and do work on your grammar a bit. Do your best to stay in past tense. Overall, It was such a good read! I am rooting for you, Author. Do wonders!

2yr
Ver 1 Respostas
Melsdar
LV 10 Badge

Vampire story which I think is very interesting. The length of the story in one chapter makes me very satisfied reading the story. I really want to know about the future of the story. the spirit of the writer

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Moonwriting

It's a beautiful story to start a read. well written and keep you captured. It engages your mind and touches your soul. The storyline unique and well define of characters. Good job author

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Muche_Godwin

I really like this novel. The story progression is awesome. And the characters are really unique. Keep up the good work author. I hope to see more chapters uploaded

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
_Rockbison_

Nice plot l must say .... Author hasn't upload more but still l can say that l is a very interesting story that everyone should try reading... All the best author and plzzz do upload a lot and so that l can read more 🤭🤭

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
RosemilOduor

The author has a good storyline and I'm glad to be have read this piece. It's off with a good start and I can't wait to read more chapters. Are you looking for fantasy novels? Be sure to check this out, you won't be disappointed.

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
AuthorTeemah

Oh am really enjoying this book of yours the characters are great,t the plot and the writing style is good keep it up author,I have add to my library for update

img
2yr
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Lercher

Vampire, yeah I really enjoyed every story who have a vampire in it. But this story is different, i don't know why but this story feel really special

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Elruna

I really enjoyed how the author make this story, how the author shape the world of this story and how the author create nice pace on the plot.

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
KaiEnvan

This book is amazing and I've already added it to my library. I greatly recommend this book to everyone. Author you are doing great. Keep it up.

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Alven3

It started off great with a good concept, so I hope that it doesn’t get dropped........................................................................

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Spr12
LV 10

Easily addictive once the author finds himself after the 1st few chapters. This is a masterpiece I would love to see this animated it’s a joy to read and I want more.

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Safire245

what a great fantasy story, i really enjoyed the first paragraph and the pace its so great i can believe i read such a great story, please always continue your work

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
PERWEEN
LV 11 Badge

Such a great fantasy fiction I found this week. The author done a really great job at describing the situations and background of the characters. I'm hooked and wishing for more updates!

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas