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A very good story with twists I didn't see coming. Although that might just be because I'm not quite a pokemon fanatic. It was kind of stupid and messed up that Samuel Oaks first response was to kill Gary. Instead of just saying something like he can only use the Oak name after becoming champion, but that is the only gripe I can think of about this ff.
Revelar Spoiler 
Firstly, I Thank you dear author for your great creation. It has been a pleasant journey to say the least, and I hope you countinou making more of this in the future. With that said, I wish you a great day.
For a story about the mc being in the team rocket we never see his pov, just how his actions affect his surroundings. Which mind you is cool, just not my cup of tea, I came here for the MC not a blank slate that it’s just there as a plot hook
This novel is more like a walkthrough guide but with the Imersive quality of a good novel😁 Multive POV of NPCs on all chapters. .. The MC is like our game character that talks less (like a puppet) and follows the directions of the player (us) No interactions with pokemon just like when we play the game Some changes with characters have been made to better suite the tags 🔞 Overall I like reading it But since this is basically following the game almost 80% there is not much surprises but looking at things from the viewpoint of the NPCs is new @Author I would recommend if you can put more originality into the story (Maybe it's because I haven't reached far into the ff so I don't know if you've added any changes) Well I'll find out soon [img=recommend]
Finally! A top tier Pokémon fic, and best of all, the MC is part of an evil organization, also Author, a suggestion if your deciding what to write next and take inspiration from, how about a Disney universe? Like all the different Disney princesses are all in one universe, and the MC is a prince, something like the Villain's lair, a crossover of multiple villains, like the Step mother, Ursula, Maleficent, etc. That would be fun to read, I think you would enjoy making this!
this is good but the story is never on the pov of the mc, this is something i do not really like, mc doesnt seem to have emotions. The idea is amazing, the execution leaves to be desired, however it is still better than 90% of the webnovel standard. Doesnt seem to have harem +1, but might be wrong.
The story was so well written I had to play the room again thanks for that looking forward to future chapters . Oh yeah and don’t drop the story
I like a good team Rocket fanfic as much as anybody but I can’t say I’m a fan of this simply because of the perspective it’s told in. I’m not saying it’s a bad fanfic just that it’s not for me.
Highly recommend, it has a stable story and using the knowledge from the original game, the way it shows how the Mc interact with other is like red and not a spoilers but in the original game when oak said that the mc is similar to red means……
High recommend this book for anyone who is a fan of Pokémon. The authors take on team rocket is new making it very enjoyable to read. keep up the good work 👍
A Fan-Fic that is a 3/5 bordering on a 4/5. Has character design that is to be expected, however gives off a soulless player vibe. Story and grammar are both quite good with the only problem being the “naughty” scenes, doesn’t fit with the rest of the book in my opinion. Updating stability is quite good actually, has been updating every day for a while(mostly because they have already been written). Overall, not a bad start. Could be a good Fan-Fic later on when it finishes.
Liking it so far, keep up the good work! - I'm a fan of the Team Rocket Edition ROM, so seeing a fic of it is neat. - Also, the mystery surrounding the MC's origins is quite interesting as well, since I'm wondering just how the mystery behind him, his mannerisms, and his actions are gonna unfold in this story. - All in all, it's a good read-
Elf: When I joined Team Rocket, I also wanted to change the world. 精灵:加入火箭队的我也想要改变世界 [img=strong][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=strong][img=exp][img=coins]
A very good story with twists I didn't see coming. Although that might just be because I'm not quite a pokemon fanatic. It was kind of stupid and messed up that Samuel Oaks first response was to kill Gary. Instead of just saying something like he can only use the Oak name after becoming champion, but that is the only gripe I can think of about this ff.
Revelar Spoiler Firstly, I Thank you dear author for your great creation. It has been a pleasant journey to say the least, and I hope you countinou making more of this in the future. With that said, I wish you a great day.
For a story about the mc being in the team rocket we never see his pov, just how his actions affect his surroundings. Which mind you is cool, just not my cup of tea, I came here for the MC not a blank slate that it’s just there as a plot hook
This novel is more like a walkthrough guide but with the Imersive quality of a good novel😁 Multive POV of NPCs on all chapters. .. The MC is like our game character that talks less (like a puppet) and follows the directions of the player (us) No interactions with pokemon just like when we play the game Some changes with characters have been made to better suite the tags 🔞 Overall I like reading it But since this is basically following the game almost 80% there is not much surprises but looking at things from the viewpoint of the NPCs is new @Author I would recommend if you can put more originality into the story (Maybe it's because I haven't reached far into the ff so I don't know if you've added any changes) Well I'll find out soon [img=recommend]
Finally! A top tier Pokémon fic, and best of all, the MC is part of an evil organization, also Author, a suggestion if your deciding what to write next and take inspiration from, how about a Disney universe? Like all the different Disney princesses are all in one universe, and the MC is a prince, something like the Villain's lair, a crossover of multiple villains, like the Step mother, Ursula, Maleficent, etc. That would be fun to read, I think you would enjoy making this!
this is good but the story is never on the pov of the mc, this is something i do not really like, mc doesnt seem to have emotions. The idea is amazing, the execution leaves to be desired, however it is still better than 90% of the webnovel standard. Doesnt seem to have harem +1, but might be wrong.
The story was so well written I had to play the room again thanks for that looking forward to future chapters . Oh yeah and don’t drop the story
I like a good team Rocket fanfic as much as anybody but I can’t say I’m a fan of this simply because of the perspective it’s told in. I’m not saying it’s a bad fanfic just that it’s not for me.
Highly recommend, it has a stable story and using the knowledge from the original game, the way it shows how the Mc interact with other is like red and not a spoilers but in the original game when oak said that the mc is similar to red means……
High recommend this book for anyone who is a fan of Pokémon. The authors take on team rocket is new making it very enjoyable to read. keep up the good work 👍
A Fan-Fic that is a 3/5 bordering on a 4/5. Has character design that is to be expected, however gives off a soulless player vibe. Story and grammar are both quite good with the only problem being the “naughty” scenes, doesn’t fit with the rest of the book in my opinion. Updating stability is quite good actually, has been updating every day for a while(mostly because they have already been written). Overall, not a bad start. Could be a good Fan-Fic later on when it finishes.
Liking it so far, keep up the good work! - I'm a fan of the Team Rocket Edition ROM, so seeing a fic of it is neat. - Also, the mystery surrounding the MC's origins is quite interesting as well, since I'm wondering just how the mystery behind him, his mannerisms, and his actions are gonna unfold in this story. - All in all, it's a good read-
Elf: When I joined Team Rocket, I also wanted to change the world. 精灵:加入火箭队的我也想要改变世界 [img=strong][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=strong][img=exp][img=coins]