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…. I am very disapointet there is no charakter description and why naruto world ??? DxD and naruto have no harmony in my eyes and the story doesent match with the original like vali is 13 years and has not awaken his sacread gear or that levinia is by grigori …
Oh d**n!! do you know how much I thirst for Vali SI or mc Reincarnated as Vali? I think that Vali have so much potential, greater than Issei, and will make a good and interesting story, he have a Lucifer's bloodline and a Divine Dividing. I also feel sick just seeing other make the mc as Issei or Reincarnated as Issei or have a mc that have the Boosted gear. Mc reincarnating as mc or mc having the boosted gear is very overused. Now it's time to review the story. Hmm it's good, but the grammar is not that good and the chapters are short too. If the author fix this maybe this will be a good story that many will like.
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…. I am very disapointet there is no charakter description and why naruto world ??? DxD and naruto have no harmony in my eyes and the story doesent match with the original like vali is 13 years and has not awaken his sacread gear or that levinia is by grigori …
Oh d**n!! do you know how much I thirst for Vali SI or mc Reincarnated as Vali? I think that Vali have so much potential, greater than Issei, and will make a good and interesting story, he have a Lucifer's bloodline and a Divine Dividing. I also feel sick just seeing other make the mc as Issei or Reincarnated as Issei or have a mc that have the Boosted gear. Mc reincarnating as mc or mc having the boosted gear is very overused. Now it's time to review the story. Hmm it's good, but the grammar is not that good and the chapters are short too. If the author fix this maybe this will be a good story that many will like.
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