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Dream=World Peace=Trash. I don't honestly get why he wants world peace? His initial desire for family and his dream don't seem to be in sync whatsoever. Everything seems so easy and the weird thing is that I didn't see wish fulfilment in the tags. The MC has met 0 to no bad situations. Don't call the Uchiha Massacre a bad situation as that was meant to happen. Aside from that, everything just goes his way. What's the point. This is why I've always had a strong dislike for every ff that has the original MC as the FF MC. It just doesn't make any sense. If he were a Self insert, it would have been better, but this?...
very weak plot, basically that's it, does he want mangekyo? got it, he wants hashirama cells? got it, does he want to revive his parents? look, reincarnation of the impure world, got it! at the end you can turn off your brain and read, but i stopped when his dream was mentioned, these world peace plots are too ridiculous for my taste.
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a sasuke si who actually acts like a normal person instead of a pycho edgelord. perfection.
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MC is a fool who wants to make world peace. I personally don’t like this. Where you think peace is possible but it makes the next generation pitiful. Life without sadness and hardship isn't life.
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Good story Update more regularly! .............................................................................................................................
💖💖💖...Great novel...love mc.... would really appreciate it if u updated it regularly tho...💖💖💖
I don't know why people like Itachi so much. Sasuke cannot be only child in uchiha clan it means he killed rest of them, even toddlers. I will give 5 stars because author called him what he was..........a psychopath.
I like the story development so far[img=recommend] So far so good.......... Author is very irregular with the updates though.................................
Don’t drop its got potential, keep it up ————————adhdidjdndjdjdjdjfjfjgffhfhfhhhfhfhdhdjdjdkdkdkrjrjfjfjfjfjfjfjgjfjjfjfhejdjdjjfjdjdjdjdjd
Why tf is there a Bald Eagle on Sasuke's shoulder?---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
not that good ff but still enjoyable - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - what are you looking for👀
The best story I've ever read Keep working on it to be the best story for Sasuke Uchiha He tried to develop side characters such as Tsunade and Kushina as a harem
Revelar Spoiler Dream=World Peace=Trash. I don't honestly get why he wants world peace? His initial desire for family and his dream don't seem to be in sync whatsoever. Everything seems so easy and the weird thing is that I didn't see wish fulfilment in the tags. The MC has met 0 to no bad situations. Don't call the Uchiha Massacre a bad situation as that was meant to happen. Aside from that, everything just goes his way. What's the point. This is why I've always had a strong dislike for every ff that has the original MC as the FF MC. It just doesn't make any sense. If he were a Self insert, it would have been better, but this?...
very weak plot, basically that's it, does he want mangekyo? got it, he wants hashirama cells? got it, does he want to revive his parents? look, reincarnation of the impure world, got it! at the end you can turn off your brain and read, but i stopped when his dream was mentioned, these world peace plots are too ridiculous for my taste.
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a sasuke si who actually acts like a normal person instead of a pycho edgelord. perfection.
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
MC is a fool who wants to make world peace. I personally don’t like this. Where you think peace is possible but it makes the next generation pitiful. Life without sadness and hardship isn't life.
Revelar Spoiler Good story Update more regularly! .............................................................................................................................
💖💖💖...Great novel...love mc.... would really appreciate it if u updated it regularly tho...💖💖💖
I don't know why people like Itachi so much. Sasuke cannot be only child in uchiha clan it means he killed rest of them, even toddlers. I will give 5 stars because author called him what he was..........a psychopath.
I like the story development so far[img=recommend] So far so good.......... Author is very irregular with the updates though.................................
Don’t drop its got potential, keep it up ————————adhdidjdndjdjdjdjfjfjgffhfhfhhhfhfhdhdjdjdkdkdkrjrjfjfjfjfjfjfjgjfjjfjfhejdjdjjfjdjdjdjdjd
Why tf is there a Bald Eagle on Sasuke's shoulder?---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
not that good ff but still enjoyable - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - what are you looking for👀
The best story I've ever read Keep working on it to be the best story for Sasuke Uchiha He tried to develop side characters such as Tsunade and Kushina as a harem
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