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Over all story is quite ENJOYABLE even if sometimes characters behave in a way that doesn't make sense, knowing their background. What’s ANNOYING is author always trying to increase word count by repeating 3 paragraphs from previous chapter, sometimes there are even repeated paragraphs in the same chapter. ALSO THERE IS LIKE 1 ERROR CHAPTER FOR EVERY 7 CHAPTERS.
This is a good story but what turned me away from it is a plot twist that to me feels too abrupt and does not feel right in my opinion as it feels a little forced to me.
bad initial chapters but after a while the story gets interesting, 33 chapters is not enough to say more...................................................
HAVENT READ YET WILL HE TURN OTTHERS INTO BAMPIRES AND BUILD A KINGDOM OR NO? HAVENT READ YET WILL HE TURN OTTHERS INTO BAMPIRES AND BUILD A KINGDOM OR NO?
this is for the author!! r u going to continue this book?? I would like to see how it ends but I would hope that u dont just end it and keep it going for awhile then end it!! I would like to see the book fully written!!
Over all story is quite ENJOYABLE even if sometimes characters behave in a way that doesn't make sense, knowing their background. What’s ANNOYING is author always trying to increase word count by repeating 3 paragraphs from previous chapter, sometimes there are even repeated paragraphs in the same chapter. ALSO THERE IS LIKE 1 ERROR CHAPTER FOR EVERY 7 CHAPTERS.
This is a good story but what turned me away from it is a plot twist that to me feels too abrupt and does not feel right in my opinion as it feels a little forced to me.
bad initial chapters but after a while the story gets interesting, 33 chapters is not enough to say more...................................................
HAVENT READ YET WILL HE TURN OTTHERS INTO BAMPIRES AND BUILD A KINGDOM OR NO? HAVENT READ YET WILL HE TURN OTTHERS INTO BAMPIRES AND BUILD A KINGDOM OR NO?
this is for the author!! r u going to continue this book?? I would like to see how it ends but I would hope that u dont just end it and keep it going for awhile then end it!! I would like to see the book fully written!!