Falling for his Prisoner

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Winter_E_Woodes

If you're looking for a story with characters who actually have personalities and real emotions and motivations for their actions, then this is for you. Don't get me wrong, the story is dark, kinda depressing at times, but you'll find yourself rooting for the main characters and despising others, because it's so well written and properly paced. The author allows for tension to build, without drawing every question and problem out for chapters and chapters on end. Highly recommend!

LV 13

Readerfanatic

This is a good book, the mc is really pitiful I really want to give her a hug! The ml is good and their interaction on the last chapter that’s not locked really breaks my heart. This book makes you feel emotional! The author is really good at making you go on a rollercoster of rides!

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Account_nolonger

I really loved the story, The events are scary and the male lead seems very ruthless, but it will be very interesting to read how someone so ruthless falls in love with his prisoner. Keep it up ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

LV 13

obiparadise_purity

I love everything about this book, sincerely. The way it started it was as if the villain Frederick had no emotions or whatever but turns out he has. I like the way the story unwrap itself slowly and helps you visualise what you are reading. I'm happy Andrey is been taken care of and away from those evil people. Frederick is becoming more warm and caring towards his prisoner, which I love. He will soon realize he has fallen for her. The writing quality is great, learnt a lot from you. Keep it up.

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Luv_Freek

It's so different from the usual stories we see. I also like the mysteries and suspense. No one would have expected her to be pregnant. It's a good one, keep up on updating

LV 14

Lu_Shui

The story premise is very interesting with a mafia leader falling for a prisoner who is tangled mysteriously in an unlikely circumstance. A lot of sweet moments shared between the two of them as their feelings for each other grew. Lack of mafia elements as I see it, and the plot focuses heavily on romance. Hope to unearth the mysteries surrounding the Mortcombes soon! 😁✨ Keep up with the updates, Author!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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MIMI24

The writing is smooth and immersive, just pay attention to time shifting. The pacing is somehow slow. I liked the ML character, it was written well. The FL is more docile because of her past trauma. i want to see more backstory before the ML took her. Just a thing about the world building. It mentioned the name of the country they are living, but the Ml is he an abiding man by the rules? What kind of work did he do? is he from a prominent family? How did he took his position? by inheritance? Overall good story, continue the good work. congratulation for wining the silver prize. all the best.

LV 4

Juliet_Omuadona

The story is intriguing; I kept reading chapter my chapter trying to solve the mystery around Audrey's mistreatment by her family. I also love the pace at which the friendship between the two is growing.

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SiesaSalad

Very nice! The ML's a spicy bad boy which I love, although he does get fluffed up a bit when he calls her cute nicknames which is super adorable <3. I would like to see some descriptions of the setting tho because from what I've read the story seems very character-centric and maybe some more scenery descriptions would help balance out from constant dialogue and interactions.

LV 4

RomanceFanatic028

The chapters got me hooked. I don't usually read mafia romance but i really enjoyed this. Your writing style is also very good but please give character development to Frederick because i don't like reading stories about FML's getting abused. So overall, i really liked it. Good job author. [img=recommend]

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Tharish99

Can't wait to read the next chapters.. 🥺 Hope frederick won't hurt miss Bloosworthy too much. Love your storyline and the writing style. A great effort to describe the violence in those incidents and I think you've succeeded. If you can describe the girl's inner feelings further more, it would be nice.. (just a suggestion) Good luck author 🤩🤩 love ur work 🥺❤

LV 4

Mayline

Great shot I've gladly read. This novel is twisted! Twisted! I like it~ Strong personas for a MC, I want more of this kind of humour, it's been neatly written and was enjoyable! Gotta wait some time to lay my hand on next chap'

LV 4

Moonwriting

The story is good and keeps me engaged with the book. Beautifully written and perfect character define. Fredrick and Aubrey's chemistry is quite nice........looking forward to the update..,😇

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_Rockbison_

Wow nice story l must say.... I really like mafia stories a lot but this one is a little bit inique itself as it features se story about ML killed FL's family.... Its going to be a rolarcoaster type of story l can guess... Keep going author...u have a great future ahead....

LV 12

Abigail_Okoi_Obuli

This story really draws you in at the beginning. The male lead is very ruthless, but as the story goes on we learn more about him. I'm really enjoying it and if you're wondering if this story is for you, trust me, it is.

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_Neko_Sensei_

The story is amazing. The thing I like about the story most is that It gets more interesting with every passing chapter. Besides, it has lot's funny moments. The ML seems BRUTAL but he is soft hearted towards the FL <3. In shot, I love the way story is going.（＾－＾） best of luck Author

You are clearly already a skilful writer as shown by the lack of grammatical errors and consistent and full sentence structure. Your choice of beginning was well executed with me continuously reading without even stopping for a second to think. A very chaotic way to show the male leads tyranny. Though this control was soon lost in the later beginning chapters. I felt that though this was a good way to show the character having multiple sides, he almost gave her too much freedom. I feel that this sort of personality would be rather controlling and stubborn at times, leaking into his noblesse persona. You haven’t really provided any description of the world or scenes surrounding the characters, which is a good way to control the pacing. Though also is just a suggestion and is not necessary. you’ve presented some good questions like who is the ml and who the fl is, what her family did to deserve them having to be eradicated by ml, and why is she acting the way that she is rather than being furious. overall a good story that is definitely worth reading 📖

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Hongwen_Ng

Hi PerkyPompous_Pixie, congratulations on winning Silver in the recent WPC! Please contact me for your coin code prize. My discord ID is hongwen#2938.