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Best ever marvel fanfic by a chinese author man i am sick of those patriotic idiots of china
Re-reading for the 4th time. I like this because the romance is amazing but also he has regular bros like iron man and basically all the guys on the avengers
MC: SI Peter Parker Rating: 10/10 Love: MJ 2 One of the most creative fiction I've read so far. I find it very entertaining and also somewhat humorous. Has a lot of MCU but with a twist, becomes more original as it goes on.
Revelar Spoiler
I'll start by saying this isn't a 'bad' story. It's okay. The problem is that there are no stakes. It gets boring fast. It feels like there's nothing to move you. It just goes on and on and on. Peter's life becomes perfect fast. He has powers, a girlfriend, his aunt, his friends, (who all know he's spider-man btw). He's also rich and has an org behind him too. It's not a harem story (thankfully) but it feels like there's no major conflict. Nothing that has you at the edge of your seat. Feels like something you'll read to pass the time.
Revelar Spoiler
Soy nuevo lector comencé hace dos semanas y acaso de ponerme al día , está es una historia muy entretenida si hay alguna que otra falla está bien desarrollado me gusta el echo que mc hace lo que se debe hacer necesario ....espero que el autor siga subiendo cap por me ah enganchado por cierto tienes Patreon ? Por si está en los cap no le puse mente 😅
ones of my top 3 favourite novel of all time recommended keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
It's everything I wanted from a power fantasy. Getting stronger because you applied yourself and your abilities rather than some sort of random powerups. It's a bit generous with the different serums not clashing, but it can be explained with them all being based on a common foundation. Loved the approach to magic though it ended up a little shallow(no nitty gritty), but that's just how magic works in marvel so eh. Really appreciated the story sticking to the single female lead instead of forcing a harem aspect. Would like if it was less focused on the romance 24/7, just wanted more bromance really and thought it'd be fun to have a boy's club to counteract the growing girl presence domination. Overall, an amazing read all around with an insane amount of chapters already, and the end is no where in sight. I hope it doesn't suddenly rush everything by introducing some sort of omniversal threat just to shotgun blast a series finale.
This is the first Spiderman Fanfiction that I have ever read in my entire life, and I dropped reading this a long time ago when the author stopped updating this. Now, it appears again in my recommended fanfiction, and I'm happy to know that the author resumed writing this fanfic, though I hope that I find the energy and effort to re-read this novel 'cause I certainly forgot the story now. WELCOME BACK AUTHOR!!
Its was absolutely bombastic until chapter 340. After that it was like “i fell a mix of”, “he fells a blend of”… ‘he takes a shit, his face betraying an ever swapping mix of trepidation and anticipation in front of this hurdle which represents a blend of change and a sense of normalcy’ Yeah… like that
What is L + ratio? L + ratio is used as a mocking insult on social media, often in reply to a post or opinion considered particularly bad. The letter L is used as a slang term for loss (as in the opposite of win). The word ratio is used in its social media sense referring to a situation in which a post has a high proportion of replies compared to likes or reposts, which usually indicates a barrage of negative replies criticizing and often mocking the post.
Bruh... Was fun until chap 4 or 5 boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring
One of the best spider-man novel aver made I wish you keep going and don't dropped. .............................................................................................
Bad world background I say, this is MCU verse but it has MUTANTS, like what! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
the longer I read this novel the less fitting the name Avenger instead of calling yourself Prevenger[img=thinking]
I've read up to Chapter 515 and I think my review is quite informative. The writing quality is great, minimal grammatical errors, good use of dialogues and exposition, etc. The story started really great, probably 5 stars, but the later chapters only seems like there's really no conflict. If the MC is gone for days or months, nothing really happens. His family just shrugs and goes on with their day. No dilemma, no drama, no questioning, really nothing at all. The MC also just appears on every setting where most times feels like he doesn't belong there and was only really present to get power ups or showcasing his superiority to everyone else. The powers are good but I think there are too much. MC has creative use of his abilities, however, his opponents feels downplayed a lot of times in order to be defeated, sometimes with little difficulty, even though they are actually really up the food chain. Curbstomp moments are very repetitive. There's a lot of "Oh, you want to fight me? There is no fight. I will only dodge all your attacks with spidey sense and use magic to attack you without you landing even a single hit and be defeated no sweat. Now I go home with new power up I took from you." Updates seems to be consistent. A lot of chapters to read so that's a plus. Also, No Harem, so that's RESPECT to the author. TLDR: Good story, mid execution, all over the place, OP MC. Overall, average but highly readable and enjoyable. Recommends this to anyone.
I've read the book until 640 and I mostly like it but you keep telling me how to feel. you use the narrative to evoke the reader's emotions well in the scene, but straight afterwards you explicitly tell us what emotions should have been invoked. we are all humans with an understanding of human emotions. stop writing for Aliens!
All that I read until now this is been my most confident boosting for me and it make me think things through clearly something. it's really hard to find this kind of works. if anyone has any suggestions please reply to this. And mr/mrs. author thankyou. i hope you have a blessed life. ☺️ நன்றி நண்பா.
Hola hermano, gran novela, sigue con el buen trabajo, hice esta portada sobre la novela jaja, aunque no tiene el mismo traje con capucha pero siento que quedó bien, ojalá te guste, también hice una sobre la novela "I'm star-lord" que la subire como reseña a esa novela, ojalá también te guste[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]
I am confused so is he gonna date mj I am new to this I wanna know before I read it are they gonna become a couple
I enjoyed this story quite a bit until around chapter 340. After that, it became AI generated mess.
Its too cliche, no originality and didn't even have an ounce of creativity. Mc has no personality and he's unbelievebly arrogant and overconfident. The fact that the author made this MC in the early loses every bit of my interest. MC has this idea of god complex proly portray the author attitude. Like hell, trash.
Una genial novela, tiene una buena gramática y un desarrollo de la historia fluida con un buen progreso en su fuerza sin debilitarlo deliberante y lo más importante es bien entretenida 👌🏻 realmente la recomiendo 😉
I must say, this book is quite good. some parts I didn't like, but when you ignore The ones you don't like, it is nothing but amazing. All in all, solid book 9.5 out of 10
A melhor ff que já li até hoje! Nunca fui muito fã do homem aranha, mas esse MC é brabo.💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀
Please update more author, I know you are focusing on your other fanfic but with the arc of peter going to the naruto universe I just cant seem to wait any longer and read more, I know you have patreon for advance reading but I dont have any money as I'm still a kid, please reconsider the update schedule author-san. Thank you. Overall this is my favorte webnovel
so far amazing im a little biase as this is one of my fav authors and i love spieman but i seriously think that everyone should ayt least guve it a try anyway this book is amazing lol
Best ever marvel fanfic by a chinese author man i am sick of those patriotic idiots of china
Re-reading for the 4th time. I like this because the romance is amazing but also he has regular bros like iron man and basically all the guys on the avengers
MC: SI Peter Parker Rating: 10/10 Love: MJ 2 One of the most creative fiction I've read so far. I find it very entertaining and also somewhat humorous. Has a lot of MCU but with a twist, becomes more original as it goes on.
Revelar Spoiler I'll start by saying this isn't a 'bad' story. It's okay. The problem is that there are no stakes. It gets boring fast. It feels like there's nothing to move you. It just goes on and on and on. Peter's life becomes perfect fast. He has powers, a girlfriend, his aunt, his friends, (who all know he's spider-man btw). He's also rich and has an org behind him too. It's not a harem story (thankfully) but it feels like there's no major conflict. Nothing that has you at the edge of your seat. Feels like something you'll read to pass the time.
Revelar Spoiler Soy nuevo lector comencé hace dos semanas y acaso de ponerme al día , está es una historia muy entretenida si hay alguna que otra falla está bien desarrollado me gusta el echo que mc hace lo que se debe hacer necesario ....espero que el autor siga subiendo cap por me ah enganchado por cierto tienes Patreon ? Por si está en los cap no le puse mente 😅
ones of my top 3 favourite novel of all time recommended keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
It's everything I wanted from a power fantasy. Getting stronger because you applied yourself and your abilities rather than some sort of random powerups. It's a bit generous with the different serums not clashing, but it can be explained with them all being based on a common foundation. Loved the approach to magic though it ended up a little shallow(no nitty gritty), but that's just how magic works in marvel so eh. Really appreciated the story sticking to the single female lead instead of forcing a harem aspect. Would like if it was less focused on the romance 24/7, just wanted more bromance really and thought it'd be fun to have a boy's club to counteract the growing girl presence domination. Overall, an amazing read all around with an insane amount of chapters already, and the end is no where in sight. I hope it doesn't suddenly rush everything by introducing some sort of omniversal threat just to shotgun blast a series finale.
This is the first Spiderman Fanfiction that I have ever read in my entire life, and I dropped reading this a long time ago when the author stopped updating this. Now, it appears again in my recommended fanfiction, and I'm happy to know that the author resumed writing this fanfic, though I hope that I find the energy and effort to re-read this novel 'cause I certainly forgot the story now. WELCOME BACK AUTHOR!!
Its was absolutely bombastic until chapter 340. After that it was like “i fell a mix of”, “he fells a blend of”… ‘he takes a shit, his face betraying an ever swapping mix of trepidation and anticipation in front of this hurdle which represents a blend of change and a sense of normalcy’ Yeah… like that
What is L + ratio? L + ratio is used as a mocking insult on social media, often in reply to a post or opinion considered particularly bad. The letter L is used as a slang term for loss (as in the opposite of win). The word ratio is used in its social media sense referring to a situation in which a post has a high proportion of replies compared to likes or reposts, which usually indicates a barrage of negative replies criticizing and often mocking the post.
Bruh... Was fun until chap 4 or 5 boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring
One of the best spider-man novel aver made I wish you keep going and don't dropped. .............................................................................................
Bad world background I say, this is MCU verse but it has MUTANTS, like what! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
the longer I read this novel the less fitting the name Avenger instead of calling yourself Prevenger[img=thinking]
I've read up to Chapter 515 and I think my review is quite informative. The writing quality is great, minimal grammatical errors, good use of dialogues and exposition, etc. The story started really great, probably 5 stars, but the later chapters only seems like there's really no conflict. If the MC is gone for days or months, nothing really happens. His family just shrugs and goes on with their day. No dilemma, no drama, no questioning, really nothing at all. The MC also just appears on every setting where most times feels like he doesn't belong there and was only really present to get power ups or showcasing his superiority to everyone else. The powers are good but I think there are too much. MC has creative use of his abilities, however, his opponents feels downplayed a lot of times in order to be defeated, sometimes with little difficulty, even though they are actually really up the food chain. Curbstomp moments are very repetitive. There's a lot of "Oh, you want to fight me? There is no fight. I will only dodge all your attacks with spidey sense and use magic to attack you without you landing even a single hit and be defeated no sweat. Now I go home with new power up I took from you." Updates seems to be consistent. A lot of chapters to read so that's a plus. Also, No Harem, so that's RESPECT to the author. TLDR: Good story, mid execution, all over the place, OP MC. Overall, average but highly readable and enjoyable. Recommends this to anyone.
I've read the book until 640 and I mostly like it but you keep telling me how to feel. you use the narrative to evoke the reader's emotions well in the scene, but straight afterwards you explicitly tell us what emotions should have been invoked. we are all humans with an understanding of human emotions. stop writing for Aliens!
All that I read until now this is been my most confident boosting for me and it make me think things through clearly something. it's really hard to find this kind of works. if anyone has any suggestions please reply to this. And mr/mrs. author thankyou. i hope you have a blessed life. ☺️ நன்றி நண்பா.
Hola hermano, gran novela, sigue con el buen trabajo, hice esta portada sobre la novela jaja, aunque no tiene el mismo traje con capucha pero siento que quedó bien, ojalá te guste, también hice una sobre la novela "I'm star-lord" que la subire como reseña a esa novela, ojalá también te guste[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]
I am confused so is he gonna date mj I am new to this I wanna know before I read it are they gonna become a couple
I enjoyed this story quite a bit until around chapter 340. After that, it became AI generated mess.
Its too cliche, no originality and didn't even have an ounce of creativity. Mc has no personality and he's unbelievebly arrogant and overconfident. The fact that the author made this MC in the early loses every bit of my interest. MC has this idea of god complex proly portray the author attitude. Like hell, trash.
Una genial novela, tiene una buena gramática y un desarrollo de la historia fluida con un buen progreso en su fuerza sin debilitarlo deliberante y lo más importante es bien entretenida 👌🏻 realmente la recomiendo 😉
I must say, this book is quite good. some parts I didn't like, but when you ignore The ones you don't like, it is nothing but amazing. All in all, solid book 9.5 out of 10
A melhor ff que já li até hoje! Nunca fui muito fã do homem aranha, mas esse MC é brabo.💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀
Please update more author, I know you are focusing on your other fanfic but with the arc of peter going to the naruto universe I just cant seem to wait any longer and read more, I know you have patreon for advance reading but I dont have any money as I'm still a kid, please reconsider the update schedule author-san. Thank you. Overall this is my favorte webnovel
so far amazing im a little biase as this is one of my fav authors and i love spieman but i seriously think that everyone should ayt least guve it a try anyway this book is amazing lol