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I mean at first it was good...But author keeps mentioning how the mc would go to this world then this world...Like first it was one piece, then Demon slayer.... But it turns out the mc didn't go there... I mean I'm all down for it in Rosario vampire world...But then mc goes to some Game world...Like what the heck??!? there's a lot of worlds out there that has some good waifu's.... I mean No offense to the author you can write what u want Cuzz I'm only reading here....And I love it all....But just why??? I haven't read it to that part yet..so I'm probably gonna edit this if the story in that arc is good...But for now I'm still Wondering why you chose those worlds..
Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
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mostly follows the original story from what I've read but he just f's the girls, writing quality is ok.
you literally took my name, Drake Cross is a name i’ve been using since i was 15, i’m 20 now so that’s 5 years. This my reaction from reading the plot, so ignore the ratings.
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Its more of a harem system than a ''Alpha male system''. Disappointed because every girl falls for this guy in just a few hours but then again the author himself said it was wishfulfilment so there is no character development in this story everything just happens. Story was okay as a way to skim through when bored(not something I'd recommend waiting day by day for a chapter for but rather to read in bulk), but then it just turned into a Pokémon harem fic, the guy went and conquered 1000 monster girls from a few tribes and they're now his concubines and he is going to other worlds to collect more it just got repetitive so i dropped.
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Haven't read it yet but saw coc and just went 5 star yep 5 stars. Also like that there are fantasy harem additions instead of elf, half elf, or beast eared girls.
Its okayish, though the system is more like a harem system than an actual alpha system, so i at get confused as to what im reading.
it started good but it now become bad, i don't why author think its good idea to help another protagonist to get girl even having quest to do it, it kinda turn off me to read, there's no connection in story too, just wasting chapter i read some fanfic where mc become helper of protagonist all of it went bad
surpused its nkt andrew tate as a book cover lol 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
this fic is good imma say dont drop this fic ... ... ... ....................................................................................................................................................
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Love the fic keep it up ....................................................................................................................................................................................
Keep on writing this novel. One of the best work.......... [img=recommend] [img=update] [img=recommend]
Interesting mc and intro but annoying plot. The fact that events that happen to the original mcs will happen to him is annoying because all the power is useless if he is thrown around like a normal beta mc. Him talking like the original beta mc is also annoying.
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Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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I MC really Alpha Male not fake. Alpha males are the leaders in their relationships. They aren’t controlling, but they are very open about what they want, and they don’t wait for a potential mate to approach them. (Note that this doesn’t mean his partner can’t be in control of her own life. He often likes when she is.) An alpha male is considered to be an influential personality — a dominant individual who commands attention. With his confidence and magnetism, he has no trouble attracting women. His strength and leadership qualities inspire other men to follow him.
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One of the best i read . I just hope the author to continue writing this fic.
I mean at first it was good...But author keeps mentioning how the mc would go to this world then this world...Like first it was one piece, then Demon slayer.... But it turns out the mc didn't go there... I mean I'm all down for it in Rosario vampire world...But then mc goes to some Game world...Like what the heck??!? there's a lot of worlds out there that has some good waifu's.... I mean No offense to the author you can write what u want Cuzz I'm only reading here....And I love it all....But just why??? I haven't read it to that part yet..so I'm probably gonna edit this if the story in that arc is good...But for now I'm still Wondering why you chose those worlds..
Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Revelar Spoiler mostly follows the original story from what I've read but he just f's the girls, writing quality is ok.
you literally took my name, Drake Cross is a name i’ve been using since i was 15, i’m 20 now so that’s 5 years. This my reaction from reading the plot, so ignore the ratings.
I ○love this novell○I ○love this novell○I ○love this novell○I ○love this novell○I ○love this novell○I ○love this novell○I ○love this novell○I ○love this novell○I ○love this novell○
Revelar Spoiler Its more of a harem system than a ''Alpha male system''. Disappointed because every girl falls for this guy in just a few hours but then again the author himself said it was wishfulfilment so there is no character development in this story everything just happens. Story was okay as a way to skim through when bored(not something I'd recommend waiting day by day for a chapter for but rather to read in bulk), but then it just turned into a Pokémon harem fic, the guy went and conquered 1000 monster girls from a few tribes and they're now his concubines and he is going to other worlds to collect more it just got repetitive so i dropped.
More More More More More More More MoreMore More More More More More More MoreMore More More More More More More MoreMore More More More More More More MoreMore More More More More More More More🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Haven't read it yet but saw coc and just went 5 star yep 5 stars. Also like that there are fantasy harem additions instead of elf, half elf, or beast eared girls.
Its okayish, though the system is more like a harem system than an actual alpha system, so i at get confused as to what im reading.
it started good but it now become bad, i don't why author think its good idea to help another protagonist to get girl even having quest to do it, it kinda turn off me to read, there's no connection in story too, just wasting chapter i read some fanfic where mc become helper of protagonist all of it went bad
surpused its nkt andrew tate as a book cover lol 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
this fic is good imma say dont drop this fic ... ... ... ....................................................................................................................................................
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Love the fic keep it up ....................................................................................................................................................................................
Keep on writing this novel. One of the best work.......... [img=recommend] [img=update] [img=recommend]
Interesting mc and intro but annoying plot. The fact that events that happen to the original mcs will happen to him is annoying because all the power is useless if he is thrown around like a normal beta mc. Him talking like the original beta mc is also annoying.
Revelar Spoiler Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
Revelar Spoiler ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎
I MC really Alpha Male not fake. Alpha males are the leaders in their relationships. They aren’t controlling, but they are very open about what they want, and they don’t wait for a potential mate to approach them. (Note that this doesn’t mean his partner can’t be in control of her own life. He often likes when she is.) An alpha male is considered to be an influential personality — a dominant individual who commands attention. With his confidence and magnetism, he has no trouble attracting women. His strength and leadership qualities inspire other men to follow him.
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One of the best i read . I just hope the author to continue writing this fic.