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I stayed in chapter 60, I didn't like it mainly because the mc for me is much weaker than the rest of the group, he has telekinesis which is a skill that can be too powerful but it seems that the mc didn't want to improve it reaching no occupy it in the entire training arc of 5 years, it has the benefits of the administrator but it seems that the system forgot because even ciri gets more points from the system, everyone in the group is given many powerful abilities except the mc, from my point of view from sight even guts is stronger than the mc, the missions are very easy and boring etc, it seems to me that the author wanted to nerf the mc a lot, but I liked the story it just bothered me a little that the author nerfed everything from the mc to The luck that the system gives you, that's all, thank you author for entertaining me and I hope I have not offended you with my review. (Google traductor) ._.
I love this fanfic a lot! it checks almost every aspect I like to see in a fanfic, too bad it's in hiatus. i regret not finding this earlier. five stars!
Go to ONE PIECE AND GO GET The Baku Baku no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to eat anything. The eaten items can then be merged into and manifested from the user's body or be combined to create something else. It was eaten by Wapol AND THE The Gasha Gasha no Mi The Gasha Gasha no Mi is a non-canon Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to telekinetically disassemble objects and reassemble them into whatever they please, making them an Assimilation Human (合体人間 Gattai Ningen?, FUNimation: "Combinable Human"). It was eaten by Douglas
Me está encantado como se desarrolla la historia es espectacular la estoy disfrutando demasiado aparte la veo muy original por usar la película de crónicas que la verdad condo la ve me encanto pero el final me dejo un sabor agridulce,enfin espero que la termine y mucha gente te apoyé.
It started out as a good story, but then it got so many tricks that it ended up being a very cliche gary stu. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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I love it, just wish the author updated more but I'll accept what I can get. If only the chapters were longer and I had more to read. Author please don't stop writing because there aren't many chat group novels that I like.
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I just saw Chronicle and immediately knew it was a banger gonna binge read this now............................................................
Love the story! Possibly the story i look forward to the most on this app at the moment. I love the ever expanding world and the TV shows incorporated. definitely loved the how I met your mother cross over and hope for more. but this story gots basically everything I want. slice of life, adventure, magic, awesome characters from different stories. character growth, changing destinies. Definitely a fan and think everyone should give it a chance.
Law and order svu is a confimed world added to his main world so automatically you get five stars …………………………………….,?!&@&)(;—,,,)&@))(:/?)$!();?)),(!
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please let the next one be pirates of the Caribbean..........................................................................................
I need more please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
It has potential, I like the progression of the story so far, I will be supporting in future chapters, I hope the quality of the chapters continues to rise and not decline, and of course don't leave this story halfway
Haven't read it yet, but it's a Chronicle fanfic so an automatic 5 stars from me. I'll probably change it if it's bad tho, hopefully it's not.
I have high expectations for this story, and being rare Chronicle fic is a plus. However, I disagree with MC's decision. 1) He has the choice to save or kill Andrew's dad and decided the killing is a better option. I get that he's a bad person, but I think trying to get him therapy 1st might be a better option than just outright killing him. 2) This is what makes me drop. MC somehow decided to tell others that they are fictional characters. This is a red flag to many readers, I include. Have seen a lot of readers drop stories just for this alone. This is a warning to others who wanna read this story. If you're fine with the things I mention, you might enjoy this, but if not well at least I'm warning you.
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nice novel ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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This is good 👍 👏 👌 🙌 😄 😌 👍 👏 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Muito bom até agora, só espero que o autor continue com a história e não pare, ótimos capítulos e bem escritos, a história está interesante até agora espero que continue assim
I haven't read yet but seeing that was chronicle I had to click on it and just review five instantly on everything because I've only seen one chronicle fanfic and it was dropped after two chapters so hopefully don't end up like that but if you do I just hope one day you realize that you made some mistake and dropping this fanfic but if you don't then love yah
So far so good,The Doctor is in! loving the fic so far, hope the author-san can go the distance [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Finally a chronicle fanfic I thought I was the only one who knows that movie they didn't give it enough Justice. I especially did not like the ending where he died but I can't wait to see where you go with it so I'm giving you my support all the way 👍
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I stayed in chapter 60, I didn't like it mainly because the mc for me is much weaker than the rest of the group, he has telekinesis which is a skill that can be too powerful but it seems that the mc didn't want to improve it reaching no occupy it in the entire training arc of 5 years, it has the benefits of the administrator but it seems that the system forgot because even ciri gets more points from the system, everyone in the group is given many powerful abilities except the mc, from my point of view from sight even guts is stronger than the mc, the missions are very easy and boring etc, it seems to me that the author wanted to nerf the mc a lot, but I liked the story it just bothered me a little that the author nerfed everything from the mc to The luck that the system gives you, that's all, thank you author for entertaining me and I hope I have not offended you with my review. (Google traductor) ._.
I love this fanfic a lot! it checks almost every aspect I like to see in a fanfic, too bad it's in hiatus. i regret not finding this earlier. five stars!
Go to ONE PIECE AND GO GET The Baku Baku no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to eat anything. The eaten items can then be merged into and manifested from the user's body or be combined to create something else. It was eaten by Wapol AND THE The Gasha Gasha no Mi The Gasha Gasha no Mi is a non-canon Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to telekinetically disassemble objects and reassemble them into whatever they please, making them an Assimilation Human (合体人間 Gattai Ningen?, FUNimation: "Combinable Human"). It was eaten by Douglas
Me está encantado como se desarrolla la historia es espectacular la estoy disfrutando demasiado aparte la veo muy original por usar la película de crónicas que la verdad condo la ve me encanto pero el final me dejo un sabor agridulce,enfin espero que la termine y mucha gente te apoyé.
It started out as a good story, but then it got so many tricks that it ended up being a very cliche gary stu. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más más
I love it, just wish the author updated more but I'll accept what I can get. If only the chapters were longer and I had more to read. Author please don't stop writing because there aren't many chat group novels that I like.
с каждой главой интерес падает в геометрическом прогрессии аоаоаоааоаоаоалаоаоаоаоаоаооаоааоаоаооаоаоаоаоаоааооаоаоаоаоааооаоаоаоаоаоаоаоаоаоааоаоаооаоаоаоаоаоаоаоа
I just saw Chronicle and immediately knew it was a banger gonna binge read this now............................................................
Love the story! Possibly the story i look forward to the most on this app at the moment. I love the ever expanding world and the TV shows incorporated. definitely loved the how I met your mother cross over and hope for more. but this story gots basically everything I want. slice of life, adventure, magic, awesome characters from different stories. character growth, changing destinies. Definitely a fan and think everyone should give it a chance.
Law and order svu is a confimed world added to his main world so automatically you get five stars …………………………………….,?!&@&)(;—,,,)&@))(:/?)$!();?)),(!
Revelar Spoiler please let the next one be pirates of the Caribbean..........................................................................................
I need more please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
It has potential, I like the progression of the story so far, I will be supporting in future chapters, I hope the quality of the chapters continues to rise and not decline, and of course don't leave this story halfway
Haven't read it yet, but it's a Chronicle fanfic so an automatic 5 stars from me. I'll probably change it if it's bad tho, hopefully it's not.
I have high expectations for this story, and being rare Chronicle fic is a plus. However, I disagree with MC's decision. 1) He has the choice to save or kill Andrew's dad and decided the killing is a better option. I get that he's a bad person, but I think trying to get him therapy 1st might be a better option than just outright killing him. 2) This is what makes me drop. MC somehow decided to tell others that they are fictional characters. This is a red flag to many readers, I include. Have seen a lot of readers drop stories just for this alone. This is a warning to others who wanna read this story. If you're fine with the things I mention, you might enjoy this, but if not well at least I'm warning you.
Revelar Spoiler nice novel ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Very gooooood _-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_--_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_-_-_--_-_-_-_--_-_-_
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Cool fic ......................................................................................................................................................
This is good 👍 👏 👌 🙌 😄 😌 👍 👏 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Muito bom até agora, só espero que o autor continue com a história e não pare, ótimos capítulos e bem escritos, a história está interesante até agora espero que continue assim
I haven't read yet but seeing that was chronicle I had to click on it and just review five instantly on everything because I've only seen one chronicle fanfic and it was dropped after two chapters so hopefully don't end up like that but if you do I just hope one day you realize that you made some mistake and dropping this fanfic but if you don't then love yah
So far so good,The Doctor is in! loving the fic so far, hope the author-san can go the distance [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Finally a chronicle fanfic I thought I was the only one who knows that movie they didn't give it enough Justice. I especially did not like the ending where he died but I can't wait to see where you go with it so I'm giving you my support all the way 👍
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