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yo this is a super goed story, i am not going to lie the writing quality is not the best but its good enough, but i never read anything like this, I LOVE IT!!!!, but don't over do it, make your own plans and tempo, dont over work youself.
Wooaahhh.. It'd a really really great story!! It's a new type story, i never read story about guild in every fanfiction i already read before.. It's really interesting!!! There is too many wrong word/grammar, but I still understand it (just please fix it) 😁😁👍 You're doing a really great job author san.. Can't wait to see next chapter 😍😍👍👍👍
Terrible quality, worst editing i have ever seen. Some mistranslations are so bad i have never seen them even while reading MTL
This is quickly turning into my new favorite fanfic, Only suggestion i would make is that the author eventually finds an editor to come back through and fix any small mistakes such as names getting mixed up and what not.
I must say its a very good and one of a kind fanfic novel I have read till now. the story development is good, the unique way of the system. love it. hope that author will not drop it in between.
Great idea a very different angle from other stories which showcases the authors originality and great story telling. The story is very interesting and has great potential. The story is in its on lane
very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The amount of bot reviews on this novel are insane. From chapter one, the writing is horrible. Random changes in names, grammar that doesn’t make sense, it’s bad. Don’t know how this is rated highly.
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Writer here. Thank you for friends who have come to read this story. For those who like it, welcome and for those who don't like it, no problem. I just want to write down the ideas that are in my head. Besides, this fanfiction has poor translation. So I hope you guys can endure it. And also for anyone who wants to rewrite fanfiction, just send your email. I'll send you the original later. Currently there are 20 chapters.
c'est fade parfois trop lent d'auètre fois trop rapide fsuiofuiqsfshuifhuifqihusihufsuihqfshuiqsfihufqshuifqhuiqsfuihfqshuifqshqfuisfqsihuqsfhuijqsfhujiqsfqsfsfq
It's an interesting story. I look forward to more chapter. All in all it's a new fanfic with an interesting concept and I believe it has a lot of potential
very good, some mistakes in the writing, but it's readable, the idea of the story is very good, I hope you don't use Japanese words like "Shirohige, Akagami etc..." breaks the flow it's very strange, well just a suggestion , a hug I wish you to continue writing it has a lot of potential ^^ (google translator)
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very good. keep it up . . . . . . . . . . . . ............................................................................................love your novel... pls continue writing this one till the end.
A little bit work on the grammar and please continue the good work and please do not be like other fanfic that they drop mid way of the story thank you.
Yo!!! This ff has an interesting concept which I rarely see in some other sites, as for the "a bit too chatty" I've seen in some paragraph comments, believe me I've seen worse to the point where they are asking the mc's name then mc tells pretty much his whole family's history, and the fact that they only met a couple of hours, anyways for the grammar I think it's fine I guess, readable, I have grown an immunity to those from the MTL that I've read, suggestion Mr. Author, you can use "grammarly" it can improve the grammar and it's free so you won't have to worry on subscriptions. Overall I think this one is good, I'm not that focus too much on such details, I just enjoy the story HAHAHAHAAH.
I quite like this story, I had never seen something like this in a one piece fanfic, I would appreciate it if you didn't leave it as it is a very good fanfic.
Muy buena historia, nada paresida al manga original pero muy interesante y innovador. Si se pudiera actualizar todos los días mejor.........
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the concept is quite good but the writing quality is bad...repeated words and grammar aside, his and her are mixed, wrong words used for a lot of things, and sudden Japanese word used in between breaks the flow. characters are also described in a young master's way... It's a good time to pass if you can gloss over these detail while reading.
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yo this is a super goed story, i am not going to lie the writing quality is not the best but its good enough, but i never read anything like this, I LOVE IT!!!!, but don't over do it, make your own plans and tempo, dont over work youself.
Wooaahhh.. It'd a really really great story!! It's a new type story, i never read story about guild in every fanfiction i already read before.. It's really interesting!!! There is too many wrong word/grammar, but I still understand it (just please fix it) 😁😁👍 You're doing a really great job author san.. Can't wait to see next chapter 😍😍👍👍👍
Terrible quality, worst editing i have ever seen. Some mistranslations are so bad i have never seen them even while reading MTL
This is quickly turning into my new favorite fanfic, Only suggestion i would make is that the author eventually finds an editor to come back through and fix any small mistakes such as names getting mixed up and what not.
I must say its a very good and one of a kind fanfic novel I have read till now. the story development is good, the unique way of the system. love it. hope that author will not drop it in between.
Great idea a very different angle from other stories which showcases the authors originality and great story telling. The story is very interesting and has great potential. The story is in its on lane
very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
better than a lot of fanfiction now a days with a new concept and story 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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The amount of bot reviews on this novel are insane. From chapter one, the writing is horrible. Random changes in names, grammar that doesn’t make sense, it’s bad. Don’t know how this is rated highly.
Just found this ff today ,it was good btw [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Writer here. Thank you for friends who have come to read this story. For those who like it, welcome and for those who don't like it, no problem. I just want to write down the ideas that are in my head. Besides, this fanfiction has poor translation. So I hope you guys can endure it. And also for anyone who wants to rewrite fanfiction, just send your email. I'll send you the original later. Currently there are 20 chapters.
c'est fade parfois trop lent d'auètre fois trop rapide fsuiofuiqsfshuifhuifqihusihufsuihqfshuiqsfihufqshuifqhuiqsfuihfqshuifqshqfuisfqsihuqsfhuijqsfhujiqsfqsfsfq
It's an interesting story. I look forward to more chapter. All in all it's a new fanfic with an interesting concept and I believe it has a lot of potential
very good, some mistakes in the writing, but it's readable, the idea of the story is very good, I hope you don't use Japanese words like "Shirohige, Akagami etc..." breaks the flow it's very strange, well just a suggestion , a hug I wish you to continue writing it has a lot of potential ^^ (google translator)
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very good. keep it up . . . . . . . . . . . . ............................................................................................love your novel... pls continue writing this one till the end.
A little bit work on the grammar and please continue the good work and please do not be like other fanfic that they drop mid way of the story thank you.
Yo!!! This ff has an interesting concept which I rarely see in some other sites, as for the "a bit too chatty" I've seen in some paragraph comments, believe me I've seen worse to the point where they are asking the mc's name then mc tells pretty much his whole family's history, and the fact that they only met a couple of hours, anyways for the grammar I think it's fine I guess, readable, I have grown an immunity to those from the MTL that I've read, suggestion Mr. Author, you can use "grammarly" it can improve the grammar and it's free so you won't have to worry on subscriptions. Overall I think this one is good, I'm not that focus too much on such details, I just enjoy the story HAHAHAHAAH.
I quite like this story, I had never seen something like this in a one piece fanfic, I would appreciate it if you didn't leave it as it is a very good fanfic.
Muy buena historia, nada paresida al manga original pero muy interesante y innovador. Si se pudiera actualizar todos los días mejor.........
Revelar Spoiler the concept is quite good but the writing quality is bad...repeated words and grammar aside, his and her are mixed, wrong words used for a lot of things, and sudden Japanese word used in between breaks the flow. characters are also described in a young master's way... It's a good time to pass if you can gloss over these detail while reading.
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