3Opiniões
- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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I like it but there is a lot of repetition which can be annoying, as I eagerly want to read what happens next instead of reading the same chapter again from the other character viewpoint
I impressed by this book. I exactly want this type of novel. I am going to recommend this novel to my best friend. Ok author i send u best of luck for ur next chapters. 💖💖
I happened to find out this book because of such an interesting title, but I'll be frank here since it disappointed me a little. Writing quality definitely needs to be upgraded since I feel the sentences end so abruptly that it really breaks my flow of reading. There are a few grammatical mistakes and some unnecessary brackets around texts. I wish if character's emotions, actions and their surroundings could be described more elaborately since I can feel a huge amount of potential sparking in this story. I would appreciate if author could read some other books to get some idea and directions. With all that, I wish the author all the best for his/her/their upcoming chapters☺️
I like it but there is a lot of repetition which can be annoying, as I eagerly want to read what happens next instead of reading the same chapter again from the other character viewpoint
I impressed by this book. I exactly want this type of novel. I am going to recommend this novel to my best friend. Ok author i send u best of luck for ur next chapters. 💖💖
I happened to find out this book because of such an interesting title, but I'll be frank here since it disappointed me a little. Writing quality definitely needs to be upgraded since I feel the sentences end so abruptly that it really breaks my flow of reading. There are a few grammatical mistakes and some unnecessary brackets around texts. I wish if character's emotions, actions and their surroundings could be described more elaborately since I can feel a huge amount of potential sparking in this story. I would appreciate if author could read some other books to get some idea and directions. With all that, I wish the author all the best for his/her/their upcoming chapters☺️