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I am starting to fall in love with the story. I even purchased coins for unlocking the chapters.
story is nice very interesting.hoping for next chapter of zarah and nicolas
💙🤍🩵💙🤍🩵💙🩵🤍💙🩵🤍💙🩵🤍💙 The beginning grabs you so hard that it makes it difficult to let go, and all you want is to gobble it up. I adored it, and I know you will, too. 💙🩵🤍💙🩵🤍💙🤍💙🩵🤍💙🩵🤍💙🩵
Initially, it wasn't so appealing but now I wait for my fast passes for unlocking the chapters. One of my fav stories so far.
this is one of the best novel I have read. every chapter was extremely exciting... Good job Auther... hatsoff to the story line....
first of all Declan and Yasmin love story called me single in many ways❤️❤️💯☹️. it's one of the best stories I've ever read and I'm sad it ended cause I wanted it to continue so l can read it for ever and ever the story was just splendid l loved how that narrator was able to bring out the character of a person , bring new characters as well as reviewing the secrets and the background stories and the behind the scenes . Not forgetting not being swayed by the comments to making the story the way they wanted it to be just to please the reader. You remained true to your creation .The story evoked many emotions in me l never new l could feel . it wasn't too fictional but just right❤️💯❤️
Beautifully written story.... Really enjoyed it very much, all the very best to the author for up coming work🧡
sis the last chapter you post today is so good and nice I love it you know please don't end the novel now weddings are left to attend I have to see Yasmin baby derrek story is still left to see please don't end the novel wrote more I'll support you bye love ya
Love this book. Early on sometimes it felt like the characters weren't growing or moving forward at all, but they do get past that if you just don't give up! usually I'm starting to feel burnt out or tired of a book if it goes past 300 chapters, but this one actually just pulls you in deeper the farther it goes! There are very few grammar and writing mistakes,(less than 1 every 3 chapters) and you can generally pretty easily tell what was meant when there are mistakes. The flow of writing is good, not getting hung up on over explaining things. The characters do grow, change, and mature over time. Enemies get what is coming eventually , not making you wait until the very end to see some payback! I will update when the book is actually finished, but after over 400 chapters, still loving it!
this book is a great masterpiece of work very entertaining, I love your book can't wait to get back to reading the rest of the chapter. [img=coins]
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I gave 5 stars for this not because I spent too much.. but this novel will make you feel its worth it. Enticing, Addicting , with the FL and ML character that have some misunderstandings,which is part of the plot that will keep you hooked up and ask for more.The story development is good that will keep you think whats next but still keep you looking forward for sweet, funny and happy moments.There are some dramas but that what make it beautiful ❤❤
A common story line but well written. A good length but does not drag as some longer stories sometimes do. Good writing stile. Editing ha bee done thoroughly. A good professional; effort
wow!!! finally 1 million view congratulations ms.author you did it.!!!! you know what I know that my most favourite novel will get this many views thanks you posting new chapters everyday we all love you💓
The synopsis was well written in a way how synopsis should be. Though simple, the themes presented are relatable as they are what our current world is facing. Greed, deception and many other human sins and vulnerabilities. Within all those, there are people who hold on to the righteous values. It is the clashes of these values that require the lead characters to work and fight for what their hearts desire. Well narrated that prompts readers to reflect on life (should one choose to do so).
I really this story just changes means mind blowing this is very first time I read a ceo went to jail it's really really really good highly recommend and appreciated
most attractive story I've ever gone through i still can't digest how a cold person can also be so sweet and warm and a girl can be this sweet when comes to family hope author will keep us Happy
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I liked this novel from the very beginning bc it started off with a shocker. It was in its own way the typical beginning, but the twist was that the husband returned home to his bride drunk, slept with her, but they didn't make drunken love and he regret it and make her feel small the next morning. Yet the author switch and allowed the two to spend the night together and wake up and still have the awkward feelings and still be able to face one another with out the guilt, but still have the sexual tension between the couple. Each still desiring the other, left wondering what the others would feel or taste like once touched. The reader can sense there's going to be excitement between these two individuals bc one, he's an arrogant, powerful alpha male used to having things done his way and two, she a young, strong-willed, honest woman that believes in putting things out there and keeping it real. I'm looking forward to reading more of the author's words to see if my theory is correct about the characters that have been created as the leads.
I am starting to fall in love with the story. I even purchased coins for unlocking the chapters.
story is nice very interesting.hoping for next chapter of zarah and nicolas
💙🤍🩵💙🤍🩵💙🩵🤍💙🩵🤍💙🩵🤍💙 The beginning grabs you so hard that it makes it difficult to let go, and all you want is to gobble it up. I adored it, and I know you will, too. 💙🩵🤍💙🩵🤍💙🤍💙🩵🤍💙🩵🤍💙🩵
Initially, it wasn't so appealing but now I wait for my fast passes for unlocking the chapters. One of my fav stories so far.
this is one of the best novel I have read. every chapter was extremely exciting... Good job Auther... hatsoff to the story line....
first of all Declan and Yasmin love story called me single in many ways❤️❤️💯☹️. it's one of the best stories I've ever read and I'm sad it ended cause I wanted it to continue so l can read it for ever and ever the story was just splendid l loved how that narrator was able to bring out the character of a person , bring new characters as well as reviewing the secrets and the background stories and the behind the scenes . Not forgetting not being swayed by the comments to making the story the way they wanted it to be just to please the reader. You remained true to your creation .The story evoked many emotions in me l never new l could feel . it wasn't too fictional but just right❤️💯❤️
Beautifully written story.... Really enjoyed it very much, all the very best to the author for up coming work🧡
sis the last chapter you post today is so good and nice I love it you know please don't end the novel now weddings are left to attend I have to see Yasmin baby derrek story is still left to see please don't end the novel wrote more I'll support you bye love ya
Love this book. Early on sometimes it felt like the characters weren't growing or moving forward at all, but they do get past that if you just don't give up! usually I'm starting to feel burnt out or tired of a book if it goes past 300 chapters, but this one actually just pulls you in deeper the farther it goes! There are very few grammar and writing mistakes,(less than 1 every 3 chapters) and you can generally pretty easily tell what was meant when there are mistakes. The flow of writing is good, not getting hung up on over explaining things. The characters do grow, change, and mature over time. Enemies get what is coming eventually , not making you wait until the very end to see some payback! I will update when the book is actually finished, but after over 400 chapters, still loving it!
this book is a great masterpiece of work very entertaining, I love your book can't wait to get back to reading the rest of the chapter. [img=coins]
Revelar Spoiler I gave 5 stars for this not because I spent too much.. but this novel will make you feel its worth it. Enticing, Addicting , with the FL and ML character that have some misunderstandings,which is part of the plot that will keep you hooked up and ask for more.The story development is good that will keep you think whats next but still keep you looking forward for sweet, funny and happy moments.There are some dramas but that what make it beautiful ❤❤
A common story line but well written. A good length but does not drag as some longer stories sometimes do. Good writing stile. Editing ha bee done thoroughly. A good professional; effort
wow!!! finally 1 million view congratulations ms.author you did it.!!!! you know what I know that my most favourite novel will get this many views thanks you posting new chapters everyday we all love you💓
The synopsis was well written in a way how synopsis should be. Though simple, the themes presented are relatable as they are what our current world is facing. Greed, deception and many other human sins and vulnerabilities. Within all those, there are people who hold on to the righteous values. It is the clashes of these values that require the lead characters to work and fight for what their hearts desire. Well narrated that prompts readers to reflect on life (should one choose to do so).
I really this story just changes means mind blowing this is very first time I read a ceo went to jail it's really really really good highly recommend and appreciated
most attractive story I've ever gone through i still can't digest how a cold person can also be so sweet and warm and a girl can be this sweet when comes to family hope author will keep us Happy
Revelar Spoiler I liked this novel from the very beginning bc it started off with a shocker. It was in its own way the typical beginning, but the twist was that the husband returned home to his bride drunk, slept with her, but they didn't make drunken love and he regret it and make her feel small the next morning. Yet the author switch and allowed the two to spend the night together and wake up and still have the awkward feelings and still be able to face one another with out the guilt, but still have the sexual tension between the couple. Each still desiring the other, left wondering what the others would feel or taste like once touched. The reader can sense there's going to be excitement between these two individuals bc one, he's an arrogant, powerful alpha male used to having things done his way and two, she a young, strong-willed, honest woman that believes in putting things out there and keeping it real. I'm looking forward to reading more of the author's words to see if my theory is correct about the characters that have been created as the leads.
I liked the story. Author, keep it up❤️❤️
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