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I thought this would be a decent read and im sure it is for some, but for me this was a waste of time, you never know whos POV your reading until the end of the chapter which confuses everything, its more about art than running a kingdom. not for me, thanks anyway though
it starting was good impressive but it give me headache as the story becomes boring and sady it loses it appeal ,the world is fought with swords.magic,blood, dragon but this story have only words as weapon and for me mc is not a dragon heir
Easily worst ff about HotD ff. Nothing but painting and it's terminology with a super lengthy explanation. MC has personality less interesting than a road side stone 🪨. Politics and marshal training be damned. He didn't bother to check Demon or put him six feet under or burn him with dragon fire or assassinate him ASAP. No push for reform. He and his painting no push to stop the dance. He must already court the high tower wrench of his sister, He is in every way worse than his father. His plot armour is so tick otherwise he might slip on the stairs and break his neck. Waste of time and hair (as you shall pull out hairs with frustration).
Great story telling. Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development
I couldn't read anymore, it was boring. MC only interested in art and he complains sooo much and does the most random shit. and him being reincarnated doesn't mean anything
This is a great story, well written, original. I lack words to describe and praise it, I can only say is one of the hidden gems of Webnovel.
The story is strange, like a poorly written translation, you can read it without a problem but I don't like it.
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The story is very good, I can assure you that when it comes to character interactions, world interaction, quite good OCs with their own moments, if the spelling errors in this fanfic bother you, there is no, at least that's what I see, different points of view that it interprets the characters very well, this fanfic involves music and art in a fairly decent and good evolution so far it took me two days to read it completely, which is until chapter 89 and the truth is I want to read more, it makes me very curious how As all this develops, the negative point I would give would be the battles, at least from my point of view, they did not manage to excite me very much, but they are well written and the update rate leaves a lot to be desired, but this fanfic is worth reading.
Muy buen fanfic en mi opinion y he leido muchos de los cuales pocos se destacan como partiendo por su escritura y su forma de contar y expresar la historia a mi parecer le de realismo y credibilidad no como otros fanfic que lo unico que provocan es verguenza ajena en uno, como por ejemplo chetando al mc de poderes fuera de lugar o con la tan usada basura trama de los multiversos que a mi parecer no hacen mas que ensuciar todo y creando un caos en mundos pero bueno es mi opinion y apresio este fanfic sigue asi autor pues si bien nose si seguiras con este fanfic tu forma de escribir es muy buena y tu gramatica tambien lo es.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
and a fanfic that the more you read the less interesting it becomes, this fanfic doesn't seem like it takes place in the world of the dragon's house
I don't know why this had so high ratings.. but the one reason enough to drop this fic that is MC, he is even worse than Japanese Beta, doesn't had a backbone and just keeps talking paintings. Like wt. f
This might possibly be the best GOT/HOTD fan fic on here. The author writing is top tier, always leaves you in suspense waiting for the next chapter. Great work
To start off, this fanfic has a very good writing quality; the characters interactions are very nicely done and I like the overall idea of the fanfic. To finish off the positive points, I love the small and possible hints at romance between key characters, and I am looking foward, a lot, to the resolution of it. Now, for the two negative points, the lack of chapter publishing, which is not non-understandable, everyone has a life, but it kind of cuts the immersion of the reading; the last negative point, is that as we have only seen the prologue to the story, I find the story key points lacking, there are some cool and interesting story plots already, but it isn't enough for what this fanfic might one day reach. That's all. #Team-Rhaenyra
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Slow going, no character development, mc is as incompetent and childish as Naruto, he doesn’t have a backbone, and lastly 90% of this fic is him talking about painting
suspiciously their are no comments with less that 4 star . there are always people who will dislike or even hate a fic no matter how good it is . for the records this fic isn't that good either it average u can say interesting idea , a somewhat good plot , poor execution and language lack of details .
Love this story you better not drop it. … Please don’t… so far this is one of the best house of the dragon fanfics. I can’t wait for the author develop the romance I’m hoping for Ailcent and Rhaenyra. I haven’t seen a fanfic with both of them being the romantic interests.
O autor escreve como se fosse um Tailandes e se diz pertencer a Nova Zelandia, sua escrita é ruim, seu ingles parece um Chines escrevendo, e fala sobre "Don's" ( chefes de gangues tailandeses que não possuem ao menos armas mais são considerados poderosos aos olhos asiaticos do autos) de forma recorente, no final é uma fanfic base de GOT que um Chines ou qualquer outro asiatico esta escrevendo, espere muito fetiche Asiatico de sangrar pela boca, tomas decisões totalmente questionaveis e relembrar atos de ancestrais imaginarios que o autor pensa ser parte de sua etnia decadente.
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good job so far tell your story without letting comments change it lot of novels on this sight suffer from that keep it up
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I ABSSOLUTELY ADORE THIS STORY I HAVE BUT ONE HIMBLE REQUEST AUTHOR.… NO HAREM thats all teheee This story is amazing however I would refrain from havin Alicent as endgame I think many of us adore the angst derived by Alicents betrayal with viserys and may even could be used as a tension point with viserys as he married not only his children’ best friend but someone he knows his son my be have feelings for but chooses her to avoid his responsibilities with the Velaryon Food for thought if you want any of these ideas
Harém: Rhaenyra Targaryen, Laena Velaryon..... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
I thought this would be a decent read and im sure it is for some, but for me this was a waste of time, you never know whos POV your reading until the end of the chapter which confuses everything, its more about art than running a kingdom. not for me, thanks anyway though
it starting was good impressive but it give me headache as the story becomes boring and sady it loses it appeal ,the world is fought with swords.magic,blood, dragon but this story have only words as weapon and for me mc is not a dragon heir
Easily worst ff about HotD ff. Nothing but painting and it's terminology with a super lengthy explanation. MC has personality less interesting than a road side stone 🪨. Politics and marshal training be damned. He didn't bother to check Demon or put him six feet under or burn him with dragon fire or assassinate him ASAP. No push for reform. He and his painting no push to stop the dance. He must already court the high tower wrench of his sister, He is in every way worse than his father. His plot armour is so tick otherwise he might slip on the stairs and break his neck. Waste of time and hair (as you shall pull out hairs with frustration).
Great story telling. Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development Story Development
I couldn't read anymore, it was boring. MC only interested in art and he complains sooo much and does the most random shit. and him being reincarnated doesn't mean anything
This is a great story, well written, original. I lack words to describe and praise it, I can only say is one of the hidden gems of Webnovel.
The story is strange, like a poorly written translation, you can read it without a problem but I don't like it.
Very interesting fanfic👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽👍👍🏻👍🏼👍🏾👍🏿👍🏽
The story is very good, I can assure you that when it comes to character interactions, world interaction, quite good OCs with their own moments, if the spelling errors in this fanfic bother you, there is no, at least that's what I see, different points of view that it interprets the characters very well, this fanfic involves music and art in a fairly decent and good evolution so far it took me two days to read it completely, which is until chapter 89 and the truth is I want to read more, it makes me very curious how As all this develops, the negative point I would give would be the battles, at least from my point of view, they did not manage to excite me very much, but they are well written and the update rate leaves a lot to be desired, but this fanfic is worth reading.
Muy buen fanfic en mi opinion y he leido muchos de los cuales pocos se destacan como partiendo por su escritura y su forma de contar y expresar la historia a mi parecer le de realismo y credibilidad no como otros fanfic que lo unico que provocan es verguenza ajena en uno, como por ejemplo chetando al mc de poderes fuera de lugar o con la tan usada basura trama de los multiversos que a mi parecer no hacen mas que ensuciar todo y creando un caos en mundos pero bueno es mi opinion y apresio este fanfic sigue asi autor pues si bien nose si seguiras con este fanfic tu forma de escribir es muy buena y tu gramatica tambien lo es.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
and a fanfic that the more you read the less interesting it becomes, this fanfic doesn't seem like it takes place in the world of the dragon's house
I don't know why this had so high ratings.. but the one reason enough to drop this fic that is MC, he is even worse than Japanese Beta, doesn't had a backbone and just keeps talking paintings. Like wt. f
This might possibly be the best GOT/HOTD fan fic on here. The author writing is top tier, always leaves you in suspense waiting for the next chapter. Great work
To start off, this fanfic has a very good writing quality; the characters interactions are very nicely done and I like the overall idea of the fanfic. To finish off the positive points, I love the small and possible hints at romance between key characters, and I am looking foward, a lot, to the resolution of it. Now, for the two negative points, the lack of chapter publishing, which is not non-understandable, everyone has a life, but it kind of cuts the immersion of the reading; the last negative point, is that as we have only seen the prologue to the story, I find the story key points lacking, there are some cool and interesting story plots already, but it isn't enough for what this fanfic might one day reach. That's all. #Team-Rhaenyra
Revelar Spoiler Slow going, no character development, mc is as incompetent and childish as Naruto, he doesn’t have a backbone, and lastly 90% of this fic is him talking about painting
suspiciously their are no comments with less that 4 star . there are always people who will dislike or even hate a fic no matter how good it is . for the records this fic isn't that good either it average u can say interesting idea , a somewhat good plot , poor execution and language lack of details .
Love this story you better not drop it. … Please don’t… so far this is one of the best house of the dragon fanfics. I can’t wait for the author develop the romance I’m hoping for Ailcent and Rhaenyra. I haven’t seen a fanfic with both of them being the romantic interests.
O autor escreve como se fosse um Tailandes e se diz pertencer a Nova Zelandia, sua escrita é ruim, seu ingles parece um Chines escrevendo, e fala sobre "Don's" ( chefes de gangues tailandeses que não possuem ao menos armas mais são considerados poderosos aos olhos asiaticos do autos) de forma recorente, no final é uma fanfic base de GOT que um Chines ou qualquer outro asiatico esta escrevendo, espere muito fetiche Asiatico de sangrar pela boca, tomas decisões totalmente questionaveis e relembrar atos de ancestrais imaginarios que o autor pensa ser parte de sua etnia decadente.
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good job so far tell your story without letting comments change it lot of novels on this sight suffer from that keep it up
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I ABSSOLUTELY ADORE THIS STORY I HAVE BUT ONE HIMBLE REQUEST AUTHOR.… NO HAREM thats all teheee This story is amazing however I would refrain from havin Alicent as endgame I think many of us adore the angst derived by Alicents betrayal with viserys and may even could be used as a tension point with viserys as he married not only his children’ best friend but someone he knows his son my be have feelings for but chooses her to avoid his responsibilities with the Velaryon Food for thought if you want any of these ideas
Harém: Rhaenyra Targaryen, Laena Velaryon..... HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
too vague of a plot, you are writing in puzzles