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A divine MC, which of course completely changes the original story. Very well written with a good depth in the story. The harem and its love stories are very well constructed and are not the classic "catch them all". A bitter sweet ending. Can only recommend it.
He wishes to gain complete freedom, yet at the first chapter he is forced to protect a woman....
One of the few completed stories with a bittersweet ending but I would never change this for anything thank you author for this story and may you write more of such stories
There is nothing interesting in this book. Characters are bland, main character has no goal and is powerful enough to do everything he wants anyway.
wonderful story. I really enjoyed this fanfic. I'm not much for writing reviews because others usually do a really good job at really explaining the wonders of the story. So this is my go at a review. Op MC, so it kinda jumps between GOT plot line and background development, such as the butterfly effect. we all know how difficult it is to imagine specific character actions and habits and sticking to it, especially when it comes to fans who really break down the characters' habits and behavior. Then they start writing hate comments complaining how the characters were not written properly. If you dislike character acting out of character, read something else. It's not like you're the one spending hours writing and editing this story. moving on..... It does have some spice and harem, which I know is not to everyone preferences. Again, if you dislike it, dont read it. I would like to believe this was written to really show the MC love and devotion to his wives. If any readers make it to the ending.....make sure you have a box of tissues ready. I was not prepared for the waterworks. This is a fair warning to all who happen upon this story.
I Loved the story reading something so similar but intierly different and immorality a blessing or a curse i cried at the ending but that was an appropriate ending for the story Loved it 🥲
Its a great story really but I had to stop reading it when the mc didn’t revive his mother
Character was too OP for ASOIAF world. And it was a mood killar, the reason his harem died. It seemed forced. It will surely happen if you make MC OP immortal in a mortal medieval world, soon you'll lack writing material, and you'll do something forceful like what you did.
good stuff ............................................................................................ 🤝🏻🤝🏻🤝🏻
Thank you for this amazing story I would have never expected to hit my emotions so strongly.
it's a great story with awesome grammar and lovable characters reading it to its conclusion brought me immense joy and I recommend to at least try it.
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I think only two stories have made me cry, The beginning after the end and this one. It was excellent, 10/10. I used to like or not bother pokemon harem... but this story has made me appreciate that truly cared for characters are spectacular. Each one of the fmc contributes and leaves an important mark in the minds of the readers. It is the first time that immortality does not leave me indifferent and it is in fact important, you can feel the passing of the years and the growth. The MC may be all powerful, but not omnipotent and you truly understand the price for the true love. It is the first harem novel with a true romance that you feel in all the chapters, I can only applaud the author.
I really want to read this but I have not yet watch the entire series only the first 6 episodes of season 1, just read the reviews got me hooked as they said It's the best one
This is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. The way you built all the relationships and how you portrayed emotions was just absolutely beautiful. I, as someone who is pretty disconnected from his emotions, can't thank you enough for this masterpiece!I was feeling the warmth at some parts and was in tears at others. Truly, I can't recommend this story enough
This story had its bumps in the road but honestly speaking I haven't read a story in a long time that swayed my emotions so much that I was ugly crying in the end. you did an excellent job thank you for sharing this. but man it hurt my feels so much. honestly I can't string words how much this story was for me, again thank you author.
Revelar Spoiler
Words can not describe how I felt after reading this. Bravo sir, bravo.. just take the 5 stars you deserve them.
Hello I'm looking to give someone an idea for a Marvel story, based on the mcu here is the speech, an Afro Frenchman comes back to life after being dead, he died because he had nothing to do with this rotten world anymore , war in Ukraine, racism, corrupt politics, corrupt stars (Pierre Palmade)... in his new world, he discovers that he has superman's powers and that he is in Marvel. After several days of reflection he decides to kill the president of North Korea, China, the United States and most of the countries of Africa (including the black panther tchakka) once that is done, from wakanda who can transfer his lyrics all over the world it makes a statement. ********************* My name is Kal El I am the last of my race the Kryptonians, and I am not human. I have lived in your world for several years, learning your customs, your failures and your successes and I must say that the humans have disappointed me deeply. You don't have to know what to do to save your planet, you limit yourself to greed and self-sufficiency, it's enough, I'm going to take charge of a country, France, and a continent, Africa in 5 years I will show the results of my efforts. Also know that I am going to the desert island sgsgtsgfr and will stay there for the next 24 hours. You are free to send a nuclear bomb on me, or whatever is stronger, I have already determined that no power in this world can harm me, I do not intend to save this world if it does not want to not be saved but I made a gesture for those who have the good will by killing the most corrupt presidents of this world, I leave you the continuation. ********************* More than Marvel, it's about country management, a system will arrive once its video is sent to the world.
If you make a sequel it should be him finding the marvel or DC world because in those worlds he could actually have women who could live as long as him and he could build a family with so he won’t be alone
Depois de ler isso até o final eu me senti obrigado a deixar uma crítica boa para encorajar mais pessoas a ler, ler isso foi como uma jornada com um final amargo mas realista, você conseguiu escrever uma linda e emocionante história, autor. Parabéns.
There are reverse NTR and stuf..,what can I say.An absolute being among man with goal.His father and mother killed themselves, obvious reason;no goal.It seems he going in the same direction,than found fleshly pleasure is the way.
This is the recuring problem for MC that have to much power. It feels hollow.. With no direction anymore. Especially in the world where scheming are the main way the world operate. Plus the power level of every single being in that said world is almost equal. You can kill normal human with an arrow, and you can kill dragon with bigger arrow. When MC hold that much power, it felt useless to have the cannon knowledge. And because of that most of the Author trying so hard to still follow canon time line, even though clearly MC have the capacity just to flip the board how much it wanted. Only Grandpa Universe, I think... That succeed to make good story out of MC that power level in top of the world that he goes in. And I think what that novel captured good are in the way nurturing the society.
A divine MC, which of course completely changes the original story. Very well written with a good depth in the story. The harem and its love stories are very well constructed and are not the classic "catch them all". A bitter sweet ending. Can only recommend it.
He wishes to gain complete freedom, yet at the first chapter he is forced to protect a woman....
One of the few completed stories with a bittersweet ending but I would never change this for anything thank you author for this story and may you write more of such stories
There is nothing interesting in this book. Characters are bland, main character has no goal and is powerful enough to do everything he wants anyway.
wonderful story. I really enjoyed this fanfic. I'm not much for writing reviews because others usually do a really good job at really explaining the wonders of the story. So this is my go at a review. Op MC, so it kinda jumps between GOT plot line and background development, such as the butterfly effect. we all know how difficult it is to imagine specific character actions and habits and sticking to it, especially when it comes to fans who really break down the characters' habits and behavior. Then they start writing hate comments complaining how the characters were not written properly. If you dislike character acting out of character, read something else. It's not like you're the one spending hours writing and editing this story. moving on..... It does have some spice and harem, which I know is not to everyone preferences. Again, if you dislike it, dont read it. I would like to believe this was written to really show the MC love and devotion to his wives. If any readers make it to the ending.....make sure you have a box of tissues ready. I was not prepared for the waterworks. This is a fair warning to all who happen upon this story.
I Loved the story reading something so similar but intierly different and immorality a blessing or a curse i cried at the ending but that was an appropriate ending for the story Loved it 🥲
Its a great story really but I had to stop reading it when the mc didn’t revive his mother
Character was too OP for ASOIAF world. And it was a mood killar, the reason his harem died. It seemed forced. It will surely happen if you make MC OP immortal in a mortal medieval world, soon you'll lack writing material, and you'll do something forceful like what you did.
good stuff ............................................................................................ 🤝🏻🤝🏻🤝🏻
Thank you for this amazing story I would have never expected to hit my emotions so strongly.
it's a great story with awesome grammar and lovable characters reading it to its conclusion brought me immense joy and I recommend to at least try it.
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I think only two stories have made me cry, The beginning after the end and this one. It was excellent, 10/10. I used to like or not bother pokemon harem... but this story has made me appreciate that truly cared for characters are spectacular. Each one of the fmc contributes and leaves an important mark in the minds of the readers. It is the first time that immortality does not leave me indifferent and it is in fact important, you can feel the passing of the years and the growth. The MC may be all powerful, but not omnipotent and you truly understand the price for the true love. It is the first harem novel with a true romance that you feel in all the chapters, I can only applaud the author.
I really want to read this but I have not yet watch the entire series only the first 6 episodes of season 1, just read the reviews got me hooked as they said It's the best one
This is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. The way you built all the relationships and how you portrayed emotions was just absolutely beautiful. I, as someone who is pretty disconnected from his emotions, can't thank you enough for this masterpiece!I was feeling the warmth at some parts and was in tears at others. Truly, I can't recommend this story enough
This story had its bumps in the road but honestly speaking I haven't read a story in a long time that swayed my emotions so much that I was ugly crying in the end. you did an excellent job thank you for sharing this. but man it hurt my feels so much. honestly I can't string words how much this story was for me, again thank you author.
Revelar Spoiler Words can not describe how I felt after reading this. Bravo sir, bravo.. just take the 5 stars you deserve them.
Hello I'm looking to give someone an idea for a Marvel story, based on the mcu here is the speech, an Afro Frenchman comes back to life after being dead, he died because he had nothing to do with this rotten world anymore , war in Ukraine, racism, corrupt politics, corrupt stars (Pierre Palmade)... in his new world, he discovers that he has superman's powers and that he is in Marvel. After several days of reflection he decides to kill the president of North Korea, China, the United States and most of the countries of Africa (including the black panther tchakka) once that is done, from wakanda who can transfer his lyrics all over the world it makes a statement. ********************* My name is Kal El I am the last of my race the Kryptonians, and I am not human. I have lived in your world for several years, learning your customs, your failures and your successes and I must say that the humans have disappointed me deeply. You don't have to know what to do to save your planet, you limit yourself to greed and self-sufficiency, it's enough, I'm going to take charge of a country, France, and a continent, Africa in 5 years I will show the results of my efforts. Also know that I am going to the desert island sgsgtsgfr and will stay there for the next 24 hours. You are free to send a nuclear bomb on me, or whatever is stronger, I have already determined that no power in this world can harm me, I do not intend to save this world if it does not want to not be saved but I made a gesture for those who have the good will by killing the most corrupt presidents of this world, I leave you the continuation. ********************* More than Marvel, it's about country management, a system will arrive once its video is sent to the world.
If you make a sequel it should be him finding the marvel or DC world because in those worlds he could actually have women who could live as long as him and he could build a family with so he won’t be alone
Depois de ler isso até o final eu me senti obrigado a deixar uma crítica boa para encorajar mais pessoas a ler, ler isso foi como uma jornada com um final amargo mas realista, você conseguiu escrever uma linda e emocionante história, autor. Parabéns.
There are reverse NTR and stuf..,what can I say.An absolute being among man with goal.His father and mother killed themselves, obvious reason;no goal.It seems he going in the same direction,than found fleshly pleasure is the way.
This is the recuring problem for MC that have to much power. It feels hollow.. With no direction anymore. Especially in the world where scheming are the main way the world operate. Plus the power level of every single being in that said world is almost equal. You can kill normal human with an arrow, and you can kill dragon with bigger arrow. When MC hold that much power, it felt useless to have the cannon knowledge. And because of that most of the Author trying so hard to still follow canon time line, even though clearly MC have the capacity just to flip the board how much it wanted. Only Grandpa Universe, I think... That succeed to make good story out of MC that power level in top of the world that he goes in. And I think what that novel captured good are in the way nurturing the society.
It wasn't really a happy ending . I cried .