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An updated overview of the story: Re: LBA is based in a futuristic-modern world where humans can surpass their biological limits. There is advanced technological innovation, the birth of superhumans, and many more. What to expect: 1. The story is LitRPG, so a decent portion of the story will revolve around that factor. 2. High amounts of action, life-like dialogue and reactions, and intimate relationships, whether romantic or platonic. 3. The story will focus on the MC's growth above all but also incorporate his allies. Once they are introduced, they will experience growth alongside Kieran. 4. A Weak-to-Strong novel. But the growth more so relates to the MC's power in relation to his enemies. The notion of him being weak from the beginning is wrong. On the contrary, others view him as overpowered. 5. Earth and Xenith (the game's world) will expand in several directions. 6. Evolution, Kingdom-Building, Rise to Fame, and Production (Alchemy, Forging, etc.) all become a focus throughout the story when the plot calls for it. I have omitted a few other key factors, but those are for you all to learn about after you've begun your reading journey. Enjoy~
!**HONEST REVIEW: Someone who has read 287 Chapters**! If you're still on the fence about this novel, please read my review. *Quick TLDR*: This novel follows Kieran who, like many other MC's from VR/LitRPG novels, has transmigrated and reborn into a younger version of himself. Let me first tell you that this novel is definitely unique and follows the class of Berserkers but it is moulded in a way where the future of not just Berserkers but all classes to be balanced [but I wont say more than this for it will be spoilers so you'll have to read to know :P]. However, the best thing about this novel that makes it stand alone from many other novels is not something crazy but something extremely fundamentals that most novels are missing these days- Common Sense and Writing Quality. **PROS** - Maths - Hey, I know what you're thinking. "What the ***k maths?* Yes and I'll tell you why. How many of you have read novels where the MC has obtained an item that increases his/her stats by 15%? Many of them right? But here's the difference. The maths in this novel makes sense and it is tracked throughout the novel. So many other novels have the protagonist receive items with amazing buffs but then they totally eclipse the Status Window from readers from that point onwards. That is because other authors (1) can't do the maths or (2) they just calculate it wrong. The other great thing about maths in this novel is that it is not shoved down my oesophagus like other novels to prove that the author can do maths. It's just there and whenever you check, it makes sense. - Quests - Big Pro of this novel is the depth and quality of the quests. This is attributed to Kieran being involved in higher level quests which demand more time, more meticulous preparation and it is logical as some of these quests can not be done alone. Some novels advertise world-level quests as being capable of being solo'd. Sounds great when reading but fails to emulate a realistic setting. This novel doesn't do that. Kieran is completing a ******-level quest (omitted for spoiler purposes) where the quest is going to hugely impact the game on a grand scale and the party requirement is not [1]. Why? Because what type of game lets one single player dictate the rise and fall of new arcs? Even now, I think a whole party completely such quests is too little but the ApexPen (author) has managed to convince me otherwise with the level of complexity and stages of each quests. - World Background - This another one of my favourites for this novel. And before I go on, when I say world-background I don't mean kingdom-building. They, to me are two separate things. The world inside Zenith Online is huge, astronomical but that's the good thing. There is so much mystery and NPC's have such incredible backgrounds you might even mistake them for characters. Even when players log off, you have assess to what the NPC's perceive about such a phenomenon from their perspective. Furthermore, there has been alluding to readers that the world we are in might not be all it seems and that there is more depth, more gravity to everything that happens. - Writing + Vocabulary + Grammar - This is probably ApexPen's biggest strength. The writing style, vocabulary and grammar are so well done, impeccable to be honest and it is vivid. I love love books where authors either have an amazing editor or the way they write is so seamless. It really helps a novel with its' flow and tempo. Nothing else to say but chef's kiss. - Butterfly effect - A short pro but an important one. Everything Kieran has an effect and he notices too which is so fascinating as it shows his awareness of his actions. **CONS** - Slow Kingdom Building - I find that this is a concern for a lot of readers, however, following the words of a famous saying, "You can't build a great building on a weak foundation. You must have a solid foundation if you're going to have a strong superstructure." However, in saying that I do agree that the kingdom building is slow. Albeit, understanding the reasons why, I do hope the author can intertwine bits and pieces and aspects of it into the novel soon to stimulate and help readers envision the big picture of what our world of Zenith Online will look like. - Lack of a standout villian/s - The main con with this is that currently, there is no real stand out villain. Perhaps that is due to the author wanting to create a strong background for Kieran before we meet our first villain. But, in hindsight, there is no young masters who idiotically run to their demise either. Enemies with thoughts? Wow shocking right xD? - Internal dilemma about item allocation to teammates - This is more of a personal one but I wish to see more of Kieran thinking about the items he gets. For example, (this example does not happen in the story so not spoilers!) If Kieran fights a boss and it drops a mythic grade lightning staff, I hope there is more internal thoughts about allocation and whether or not he should give this to someone he's friends with or someone with greater potential. Even something along the lines of "oh if I manage to recruit this exceptional mage from my memories in the past, I can lure him/her with this item or make it a conditional offer to further persuade them to join me." I know Kieran is on the path of the great, but it is also because of that, that I hope for him to become an even more complex but intelligent MC who's vision is grand and can achieve great feats not just alone, but with a team of strong and capable people. They don't need to be at his level, he's literally the MC but as long as they can be unparalleled amongst elites and pro players and hold their own. That would be amazing and this includes Sera too! Hope she can fight despite her class (no spoilers :P, you gotta read to know what class she is hehe) *Note to author*: if you ever read this, look man, you're truly doing a great job. Writing a book that satisfies everyone is hard, it really is. The novel is amazing so far and to be honest, any novel that doesn't lack common sense these days is already a great book in my opinion as it is a tell-tale sign of a great author. Don't burn yourself out and hope you understand that many people love this novel. Stay healthy and I always continue to look forward to reading more x. Thanks guys, hope you found it helpful <3
This was by far one of the best stories on this app, unfortunately author dropped it
This has to be the best damn novel i‘ve ever read. I remember like two years ago I reviewed 300 chapters and said it was damn near ’Cultivation Online’ depth. now that i’m back and with more chapters, this novel has completely surpassed any other of the same genre and this latest Arc hasn’t even felt like an mmorpg genre and has just excelled in Action, Mystery, and discovery. Excellent job, I hope you’re still writing more chapters with the same “flame” you have now.
Why did you give up and leave us hanging? I regret starting this and getting invested in the story. Don’t read it, you’ll just be disappointed. Besides, by this point his previous life might as well have been in a different story. He used a skill on his deathbed but right now he’s still figuring out using his physical abilities in the real world. But anyway, why bother talking anymore, when the author cares less about the story than the readers
This story is basically is a grown man with 8th grade syndrome tried explaining his delusions to normies. That's literally the best way I can describe it. It's normal up until late 300s. The first 300 chapters made more sense than the last hundred or so.
Did the author die O.o??? Why hasn’t no new chapters come out? I like this book.
Dear author, I think you are done with the breaks. Please don't let us wait for too long for your master piece... Enough is enough 😤🥹 So give us our chaps and let us in on our boys adventure in both game and outer world
Hello author, i think we would all like to know, did you drop the novel ?? If not please put an update in the comments because it has been 3 months without an update..... i love your work btw :)
Apex, did you drop this novel? it seems there hasn't been an update for a month now.
There’s a lot about this book that I really enjoy but it’s also very hard to truly love. The good: - World building - Side characters have depth - Combat The not-so-good: - Increasing number of mysteries with very few questions answered - 600+ chapters and I feel like the MC doesn’t know much more about himself than at the start - The pacing (how is the MC still level 50?) at this rate I’ll be old by the time the main cast catches up to the real threats in game. Or the pacing is going to get all wonky. Other: - Feels like the MC should have been able to do more with his past memories. The fact that those memories are fragmented isn’t my favorite. But maybe it’ll matter more in the future.
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harem? yanderes? ..........................................................................................................................................
It is a good novel. It has good writing quality without much grammatical errors. However, world background need to be improved.( what disease does the MC have? Why was he ill in the first place? Is the game real? Would the strength that he accumulated in the game be applicable in real life as well? How did he go back in time? what about the family of MC? Why was he back stabbed? ......) We as readers are kept in the dark regarding these crucial information. A lot of these questions need to be answered atleast partially so that readers can empathise with the character that the author is trying to portray. All we see in the first 150 chapters is MC trying to do some quests and attaining a unique class. It feels as if we are reading the walkthrough of a game . Try to give more information regarding the MC so that we as readers can relate to the MC
hands down one of the best novels i've read and i've only read 2 others with the same premise as this the 2 other being azimuth the elden throne and vrmmorpg dragomancer reborn i've very picky with the novel's i read if the first 100 chapters can't get my attention i won't even bother continueing to read it story is good nothing revolutionary but it doesn't have to be to enjoy a good novel grammar is good and character development is also good even side characters aren't just there for show though it aint perfect nothing is perfect i've always kept that in mind that author's are humans and they will make mistakes but that shouldn't top us from enjoying this novel overall this is about 8.5/10
slow story very very slow 530 chs and only barely 1 month passed in the game if so... how many chs will have this novel 10k? the novel will only give questions if i have to say the story is OK! but too slow and too many questions and 0 answers full 4 star
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Good book, wish I had found it after it’s completion. Thanks for your work, take your time with it and pls make it as long as possible hehe
Great story that keeps me interested. Not much filler type of content and MC is smart
Great story overall as Ch. 435 My only concern is lack of communication from the author. Seems like he only responds on Discord but as he hasn't dropped a link in a while its hard to verify. Which is fine, readers don't really need daily comments from Authors. Where it becomes a problem is when they go from twice a day releases to one every couple months for a year straight without notice while maintaining the same privilege pricing. A little research reveals he has been updating every Ch from the beginning for the last year. Which is great for new readers, but without any word from the Author there is no way to know if any major plot points were changed and if its worth it to reread the story. It appears to be back to a Ch a day but its to soon to tell. Please respond and clarify Author 🙏
Welcome Back @ApexPen. I'm glad this novel is continuing again. So many good novels have stopped updating in the past months that it has been depressing. Please keep writing as it always feels sad to see an unfinished story. [img=update]I'll give a [Short review] as I don't usually write reviews before the 1000ch mark because that's where most stories go downhill in quality. [img=angry]The story is great so far. Still within the game-world genre that's become quite common now but the story has an edge in still being robust and not going out of hand like many other similar stories have. The characters are really good with many relevant characters that stay around to accompany the MC on his journey. The story is still young with 400 chapters so far so it's hard to judge if the side characters will still be treated with the same care later on but I sure hope so. [img=recommend]The world is nothing groundbreaking at face value as it shares many common aspects with similar stories in the same genre but there is still uniqueness and special characteristics to the world in this story. It feels fresh and there are always things to discover and be curious about. [img=thinking]The story stopped for a few months without any announcement or explanation which was sad. To be honest, I don't really care if an author wants to take a break. In fact I welcome it. Authors are human beings after all and we all get burnt out from repetitive actions. People working in the creative field are even more prone to burn out as they always need to produce content that satisfies many readers and if the quality drops even a little, not only will their product take permanent damage, but the negative reviews from their very followers/fans won't be merciful at all. So taking a break and coming back with a fresh mindset is always welcome in my book. My target is to have a great story to entertain me in the end. However, I'd really like it if the author would issue a statement about the break giving an approximate period or a goal for the break to end. Maybe elaborate a little on the reason. That would make the loyal readers more content, and will give us a goal to look forward to when the break is over. Still I'm happy the author is back and regardless of the reason for the haitus, I hope all is well. Looking forward to more chapters.[img=proud]
I'm glad that you are writing again Apexpen really enjoy this novel. Pacing is great and the MC is smart and plans well. So great story. Granted I just normally enjoy reading novels.
love this story and the unique take on a beserker path. the chapter release is slow but for quality content like this, WORTH IT!
I loved this novel so much! The characters were amazing. The plot was amazing. The world building was amazing. But it just stopped all of a sudden no announcement, nothing. I wish it would comeback!
A very promising book that unfortunately suffered from a lack of care from the author : update stability so far under the ground that it touched Earth core … Consider yourself lucky if you got 1 chapter a month. Conclusion : not worth it until Author can keep a regular schedule
I have followed this work since it first came out. And to this day I have not been disappointed. MC plans well, but is far from omnipotent. The pace of the story doesn't feel rushed at all. I'm glad author goes back and revises all the small spelling and grammar issues I point out. The only thing I'm sad about is the fact that I'm too poor to buy coins and have to wait for updates. 😭 If nothing else, keep on author!
An updated overview of the story: Re: LBA is based in a futuristic-modern world where humans can surpass their biological limits. There is advanced technological innovation, the birth of superhumans, and many more. What to expect: 1. The story is LitRPG, so a decent portion of the story will revolve around that factor. 2. High amounts of action, life-like dialogue and reactions, and intimate relationships, whether romantic or platonic. 3. The story will focus on the MC's growth above all but also incorporate his allies. Once they are introduced, they will experience growth alongside Kieran. 4. A Weak-to-Strong novel. But the growth more so relates to the MC's power in relation to his enemies. The notion of him being weak from the beginning is wrong. On the contrary, others view him as overpowered. 5. Earth and Xenith (the game's world) will expand in several directions. 6. Evolution, Kingdom-Building, Rise to Fame, and Production (Alchemy, Forging, etc.) all become a focus throughout the story when the plot calls for it. I have omitted a few other key factors, but those are for you all to learn about after you've begun your reading journey. Enjoy~
!**HONEST REVIEW: Someone who has read 287 Chapters**! If you're still on the fence about this novel, please read my review. *Quick TLDR*: This novel follows Kieran who, like many other MC's from VR/LitRPG novels, has transmigrated and reborn into a younger version of himself. Let me first tell you that this novel is definitely unique and follows the class of Berserkers but it is moulded in a way where the future of not just Berserkers but all classes to be balanced [but I wont say more than this for it will be spoilers so you'll have to read to know :P]. However, the best thing about this novel that makes it stand alone from many other novels is not something crazy but something extremely fundamentals that most novels are missing these days- Common Sense and Writing Quality. **PROS** - Maths - Hey, I know what you're thinking. "What the ***k maths?* Yes and I'll tell you why. How many of you have read novels where the MC has obtained an item that increases his/her stats by 15%? Many of them right? But here's the difference. The maths in this novel makes sense and it is tracked throughout the novel. So many other novels have the protagonist receive items with amazing buffs but then they totally eclipse the Status Window from readers from that point onwards. That is because other authors (1) can't do the maths or (2) they just calculate it wrong. The other great thing about maths in this novel is that it is not shoved down my oesophagus like other novels to prove that the author can do maths. It's just there and whenever you check, it makes sense. - Quests - Big Pro of this novel is the depth and quality of the quests. This is attributed to Kieran being involved in higher level quests which demand more time, more meticulous preparation and it is logical as some of these quests can not be done alone. Some novels advertise world-level quests as being capable of being solo'd. Sounds great when reading but fails to emulate a realistic setting. This novel doesn't do that. Kieran is completing a ******-level quest (omitted for spoiler purposes) where the quest is going to hugely impact the game on a grand scale and the party requirement is not [1]. Why? Because what type of game lets one single player dictate the rise and fall of new arcs? Even now, I think a whole party completely such quests is too little but the ApexPen (author) has managed to convince me otherwise with the level of complexity and stages of each quests. - World Background - This another one of my favourites for this novel. And before I go on, when I say world-background I don't mean kingdom-building. They, to me are two separate things. The world inside Zenith Online is huge, astronomical but that's the good thing. There is so much mystery and NPC's have such incredible backgrounds you might even mistake them for characters. Even when players log off, you have assess to what the NPC's perceive about such a phenomenon from their perspective. Furthermore, there has been alluding to readers that the world we are in might not be all it seems and that there is more depth, more gravity to everything that happens. - Writing + Vocabulary + Grammar - This is probably ApexPen's biggest strength. The writing style, vocabulary and grammar are so well done, impeccable to be honest and it is vivid. I love love books where authors either have an amazing editor or the way they write is so seamless. It really helps a novel with its' flow and tempo. Nothing else to say but chef's kiss. - Butterfly effect - A short pro but an important one. Everything Kieran has an effect and he notices too which is so fascinating as it shows his awareness of his actions. **CONS** - Slow Kingdom Building - I find that this is a concern for a lot of readers, however, following the words of a famous saying, "You can't build a great building on a weak foundation. You must have a solid foundation if you're going to have a strong superstructure." However, in saying that I do agree that the kingdom building is slow. Albeit, understanding the reasons why, I do hope the author can intertwine bits and pieces and aspects of it into the novel soon to stimulate and help readers envision the big picture of what our world of Zenith Online will look like. - Lack of a standout villian/s - The main con with this is that currently, there is no real stand out villain. Perhaps that is due to the author wanting to create a strong background for Kieran before we meet our first villain. But, in hindsight, there is no young masters who idiotically run to their demise either. Enemies with thoughts? Wow shocking right xD? - Internal dilemma about item allocation to teammates - This is more of a personal one but I wish to see more of Kieran thinking about the items he gets. For example, (this example does not happen in the story so not spoilers!) If Kieran fights a boss and it drops a mythic grade lightning staff, I hope there is more internal thoughts about allocation and whether or not he should give this to someone he's friends with or someone with greater potential. Even something along the lines of "oh if I manage to recruit this exceptional mage from my memories in the past, I can lure him/her with this item or make it a conditional offer to further persuade them to join me." I know Kieran is on the path of the great, but it is also because of that, that I hope for him to become an even more complex but intelligent MC who's vision is grand and can achieve great feats not just alone, but with a team of strong and capable people. They don't need to be at his level, he's literally the MC but as long as they can be unparalleled amongst elites and pro players and hold their own. That would be amazing and this includes Sera too! Hope she can fight despite her class (no spoilers :P, you gotta read to know what class she is hehe) *Note to author*: if you ever read this, look man, you're truly doing a great job. Writing a book that satisfies everyone is hard, it really is. The novel is amazing so far and to be honest, any novel that doesn't lack common sense these days is already a great book in my opinion as it is a tell-tale sign of a great author. Don't burn yourself out and hope you understand that many people love this novel. Stay healthy and I always continue to look forward to reading more x. Thanks guys, hope you found it helpful <3
This was by far one of the best stories on this app, unfortunately author dropped it
This has to be the best damn novel i‘ve ever read. I remember like two years ago I reviewed 300 chapters and said it was damn near ’Cultivation Online’ depth. now that i’m back and with more chapters, this novel has completely surpassed any other of the same genre and this latest Arc hasn’t even felt like an mmorpg genre and has just excelled in Action, Mystery, and discovery. Excellent job, I hope you’re still writing more chapters with the same “flame” you have now.
Why did you give up and leave us hanging? I regret starting this and getting invested in the story. Don’t read it, you’ll just be disappointed. Besides, by this point his previous life might as well have been in a different story. He used a skill on his deathbed but right now he’s still figuring out using his physical abilities in the real world. But anyway, why bother talking anymore, when the author cares less about the story than the readers
This story is basically is a grown man with 8th grade syndrome tried explaining his delusions to normies. That's literally the best way I can describe it. It's normal up until late 300s. The first 300 chapters made more sense than the last hundred or so.
Did the author die O.o??? Why hasn’t no new chapters come out? I like this book.
Dear author, I think you are done with the breaks. Please don't let us wait for too long for your master piece... Enough is enough 😤🥹 So give us our chaps and let us in on our boys adventure in both game and outer world
Hello author, i think we would all like to know, did you drop the novel ?? If not please put an update in the comments because it has been 3 months without an update..... i love your work btw :)
Apex, did you drop this novel? it seems there hasn't been an update for a month now.
There’s a lot about this book that I really enjoy but it’s also very hard to truly love. The good: - World building - Side characters have depth - Combat The not-so-good: - Increasing number of mysteries with very few questions answered - 600+ chapters and I feel like the MC doesn’t know much more about himself than at the start - The pacing (how is the MC still level 50?) at this rate I’ll be old by the time the main cast catches up to the real threats in game. Or the pacing is going to get all wonky. Other: - Feels like the MC should have been able to do more with his past memories. The fact that those memories are fragmented isn’t my favorite. But maybe it’ll matter more in the future.
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It is a good novel. It has good writing quality without much grammatical errors. However, world background need to be improved.( what disease does the MC have? Why was he ill in the first place? Is the game real? Would the strength that he accumulated in the game be applicable in real life as well? How did he go back in time? what about the family of MC? Why was he back stabbed? ......) We as readers are kept in the dark regarding these crucial information. A lot of these questions need to be answered atleast partially so that readers can empathise with the character that the author is trying to portray. All we see in the first 150 chapters is MC trying to do some quests and attaining a unique class. It feels as if we are reading the walkthrough of a game . Try to give more information regarding the MC so that we as readers can relate to the MC
hands down one of the best novels i've read and i've only read 2 others with the same premise as this the 2 other being azimuth the elden throne and vrmmorpg dragomancer reborn i've very picky with the novel's i read if the first 100 chapters can't get my attention i won't even bother continueing to read it story is good nothing revolutionary but it doesn't have to be to enjoy a good novel grammar is good and character development is also good even side characters aren't just there for show though it aint perfect nothing is perfect i've always kept that in mind that author's are humans and they will make mistakes but that shouldn't top us from enjoying this novel overall this is about 8.5/10
slow story very very slow 530 chs and only barely 1 month passed in the game if so... how many chs will have this novel 10k? the novel will only give questions if i have to say the story is OK! but too slow and too many questions and 0 answers full 4 star
Revelar Spoiler Good book, wish I had found it after it’s completion. Thanks for your work, take your time with it and pls make it as long as possible hehe
Great story that keeps me interested. Not much filler type of content and MC is smart
Great story overall as Ch. 435 My only concern is lack of communication from the author. Seems like he only responds on Discord but as he hasn't dropped a link in a while its hard to verify. Which is fine, readers don't really need daily comments from Authors. Where it becomes a problem is when they go from twice a day releases to one every couple months for a year straight without notice while maintaining the same privilege pricing. A little research reveals he has been updating every Ch from the beginning for the last year. Which is great for new readers, but without any word from the Author there is no way to know if any major plot points were changed and if its worth it to reread the story. It appears to be back to a Ch a day but its to soon to tell. Please respond and clarify Author 🙏
Welcome Back @ApexPen. I'm glad this novel is continuing again. So many good novels have stopped updating in the past months that it has been depressing. Please keep writing as it always feels sad to see an unfinished story. [img=update]I'll give a [Short review] as I don't usually write reviews before the 1000ch mark because that's where most stories go downhill in quality. [img=angry]The story is great so far. Still within the game-world genre that's become quite common now but the story has an edge in still being robust and not going out of hand like many other similar stories have. The characters are really good with many relevant characters that stay around to accompany the MC on his journey. The story is still young with 400 chapters so far so it's hard to judge if the side characters will still be treated with the same care later on but I sure hope so. [img=recommend]The world is nothing groundbreaking at face value as it shares many common aspects with similar stories in the same genre but there is still uniqueness and special characteristics to the world in this story. It feels fresh and there are always things to discover and be curious about. [img=thinking]The story stopped for a few months without any announcement or explanation which was sad. To be honest, I don't really care if an author wants to take a break. In fact I welcome it. Authors are human beings after all and we all get burnt out from repetitive actions. People working in the creative field are even more prone to burn out as they always need to produce content that satisfies many readers and if the quality drops even a little, not only will their product take permanent damage, but the negative reviews from their very followers/fans won't be merciful at all. So taking a break and coming back with a fresh mindset is always welcome in my book. My target is to have a great story to entertain me in the end. However, I'd really like it if the author would issue a statement about the break giving an approximate period or a goal for the break to end. Maybe elaborate a little on the reason. That would make the loyal readers more content, and will give us a goal to look forward to when the break is over. Still I'm happy the author is back and regardless of the reason for the haitus, I hope all is well. Looking forward to more chapters.[img=proud]
I'm glad that you are writing again Apexpen really enjoy this novel. Pacing is great and the MC is smart and plans well. So great story. Granted I just normally enjoy reading novels.
love this story and the unique take on a beserker path. the chapter release is slow but for quality content like this, WORTH IT!
I loved this novel so much! The characters were amazing. The plot was amazing. The world building was amazing. But it just stopped all of a sudden no announcement, nothing. I wish it would comeback!
A very promising book that unfortunately suffered from a lack of care from the author : update stability so far under the ground that it touched Earth core … Consider yourself lucky if you got 1 chapter a month. Conclusion : not worth it until Author can keep a regular schedule
I have followed this work since it first came out. And to this day I have not been disappointed. MC plans well, but is far from omnipotent. The pace of the story doesn't feel rushed at all. I'm glad author goes back and revises all the small spelling and grammar issues I point out. The only thing I'm sad about is the fact that I'm too poor to buy coins and have to wait for updates. 😭 If nothing else, keep on author!