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Loved the premise. Strong start. The prologue is dark and foreboding. Excited for what is to come. Five stars for now. Will make a follow up review after more chapters arrive...
Just find this novel randomly and I can say that the story is interesting and love how the author put a lot of effort writing this novel and I can say that it has a lot of potential
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Splendid writing skills. Quite immersive, I thought I was the one the creature was talking to. Also, how he stated the system status is marvelous! Keep it up!
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This author could write the art of describing a monster and sell millions of copies. Perfect english and narrative skills. I'll update the review once it has more chapters.
As the first review, I must say that the novel can be great and the writing quality is there. I think if the paragraphs were a bit shorter sometimes it would probably gain traction very fast!
Well let me be honest.........I don't read these virtual MMO games stories anymore........but what kept me to your story isn't that its your writing style dude...........Its legit good..........Even if you make a mess in the story later on I promise your writing quality will save you for sure......keep writing stories and i will actively follow them.......
Loved the premise. Strong start. The prologue is dark and foreboding. Excited for what is to come. Five stars for now. Will make a follow up review after more chapters arrive...
Just find this novel randomly and I can say that the story is interesting and love how the author put a lot of effort writing this novel and I can say that it has a lot of potential
great greatgreat greatgreat greatgreat greatgreat greatgreat greatgreat greatgreat greatgreat greatgreat greatgreat greatgreat greatgreat greatgreat great
Splendid writing skills. Quite immersive, I thought I was the one the creature was talking to. Also, how he stated the system status is marvelous! Keep it up!
Revelar Spoiler This author could write the art of describing a monster and sell millions of copies. Perfect english and narrative skills. I'll update the review once it has more chapters.
As the first review, I must say that the novel can be great and the writing quality is there. I think if the paragraphs were a bit shorter sometimes it would probably gain traction very fast!
Well let me be honest.........I don't read these virtual MMO games stories anymore........but what kept me to your story isn't that its your writing style dude...........Its legit good..........Even if you make a mess in the story later on I promise your writing quality will save you for sure......keep writing stories and i will actively follow them.......