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I haven't finished the story yet and I'm only in the process of reading it but it's really good so far. besides a few grammar errors and maybe a bit odd on the pacing only at some points though it's an amazing novel. great job author keep up the good work and for anyone wondering what this novel is I will probably give a full detailed review once I finish all the available chapters
One of the best novels here. The plot is really well written. The only thing that I don't like too much is the way the MC makes money, most of the times that he needs it, there would be no really good explanation and poof, there is the money, even though with his abilities that are perfect for money making, we have no exploration of such chapters.
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It's good but sometimes things are too easy for the mc. I also has a few problems with his personality, sometimes he take decisions because it's safer and in the same chapter he changes his mind especially at the beginning. Also I feel he doesn't put much effort to take his revenge from those who slaughtered his village but instead lose his time with this useless prenatal marriage. The mana drain was said to be an useless ranked 1 mana art, only efficient against an opponent unable to move or sleeping, and it became a cheat like ability soon after...
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overall is good. but i like to suggest author to make the fight scene shorter. also i feel like it gets boring since werewolf appear.
I really feel like certain aspects of the story are just taking away from it. I quite liked the story until the blindness part when it stopped having a MC. after becoming blind it really feels like its 1 chapter about Vincent and 2 chapters about the world. the blindness itself was fairly forced and lasts forever with no reasonable purpose/story benefit. does he grow from being blind? not really does the story progress due to the blindness? only ending the engagement Does the blindness have a defined purpose within any reasonable timeframe? absolutely not. 100 chapters later still blind having almost the same problems as before and more than half the chapters are not about the mc. Another in a long list of 150 chapters that are pretty good and a steep drop off after that. for me as soon as he went blind the focus became the world not the MC. At least half the story from that point became about others acting around him with short bits about his activities. I dont mind the duel but having a 100+ chapter challenge that really seems to make the mc almost irrelevant killed the story for me.
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I started reading this novel and couldn’t stop. It has some of the usual tropes, but the MC isn’t full of himself. He surrounds himself with folks who are capable (maybe too capable) of handling his affairs, but overall, the story is fun to read.
He turns blind and the entire plot just stops dead. The story at this point feels like the author is just padding. Important plot points are dropped, character progression takes a nose dive. And the whole clan thing with his fiance just made no sense. I skimmed through another 40 chapters and it's just bleh. How is this rated above 3 stars?
It started out interesting and good but at this point of the novel (late 300s), the plot route is a little unstable. “Important” characters aren’t that fleshed out and deemed irrevelant as fast as they are introduced to be important. All in all though, it’s an OK read.
I'm at ch60 now, other than the Mc's mental state apparently regressing to match his body's age for some reason, it's an above average novel, way to much information in the synopsis, it feels like a spoiler
Better than nearly any other on this site. Having read more than 300 chapters I can say these: + No cringe-edge lord characteuhrs currently + Interesting plot + Interesting power and system of the mc + Story is progressing nicely + Power is balanced and follow the logic. If mc defeats someone it is because he is higher leveled than them and also has strong items. Nothing like other novels where the story continuously say that level is the strongest but mc defeats 20 lvl higher people easily or 2 realm higher ones.
Okay, so this review is at 90~ chapters and overall, this novel is pretty solid so far. The progress is smooth, cool abilities, interesting characters. Honestly, the only thing holding it back is the inconsistent characterization of the MC. One second he is smart, another he is just plain dumb, one second he is cautious, another second he randomly wants to save people. For example, and idk if this is a small spoiler or not but there have been several times he has just watched as people he could save get slaughtered but then he will randomly want to get involved when most of them are already dead as if it will weigh on his conscience. Don't get me wrong, whether he saves them or not isn't the issue, but it feels weird for him to not care at all one second, then care a lot the next. Although it doesn't ruin the story, several times I sit back and wonder what route the author wants to take the MC because there isn't a clear sign so far.
I have read up to the current arc, mostly with free pass, so do pardon me. As much as the concept of this story is good, the writing quality and ideas seems to diminish after a while. First was the sudden marriage thing but later handled cleanly. Second was the sudden lack of magic talent which was supposed to apply to the original Vicent only. It was clear his magic talent was way to superior to most mana practitioners but suddenly, he cant learn next tier mana arts. Third was the sudden blindness which makes no sense and adds little to none to the story. From that point onward, ita like the story just go along with the flow; 'whatever comes'. It became bland without any substantial goal or target. The only end time target is the celestials which also seems bland as things are added as time goes by. There is also no short term target. Vicent just do whatever fits. The romance is also all over the place. Honestly, Yulia would have been a good option along the way but later thrown off. The romance is like a switch, on and off, new and old, and so on. Update stability is really high up there but the story quality dropped really low. Also, some characters are not properly fleshed out, they are more like 'add or do as needed' instead of a 3 dimensional character design. Anyway, I am still hoping for some improvement. If these can be worked on, the story will have a massive improvement and will definently skyrocket. Don't mind my grammar and thanks for the chapters.
The start was amazing and the concept was unique and had a good thing going for it. The change in story to an unnecessary school arc and going blind for no reason other than to try and make a deeper story ruined it and did nothing but make the writer seem like he ran out of ideas. The use of the cliche aranged marriage and having that go down the drain because some unforseen consequences was also annoying and heavily dissapointing. tl;dr - Started as a 4.5/5 dropped to a 2.6/5 Sad to see it happen.
Dont mind my rating, I gave it all 5 star because I only just started and it's good, currently at chapter 20. I can't rate it bad as I dont see anything bad in it. The o my two things I am confident in rating is the writing quality and story development, both are really great. Though, story development is a bit slow now but its understandable as the foundation needs to be properly laid. That said, this book is a HIDDEN GEM!!. But no one comments about it, I guess not many people have seen this book yet. Up to where I have read, I can assure you that it's pretty much well done and intriguing. It has a lot of potential, I mean ALOT..
A very enjoyable non cliche story. One of the first things I noticed was the similarities to sekerei with the celestials. Take from that what you will. The character is both great and has issues. he’s well written and not an edgelord but I find it feels as if he hasn’t accepted this world has reality with his zero real ambition or drive. Its nice learning about the world alongside him but also jarring when he ignore things like his childhood friends and acts very disconnected from this and other things. I enjoy the other characters even small ones has they feel real and theres actual relations being build, though this is detracted from mcs lack of connection to the world.
mc's brain doesn't work. mc moves with his emotions. mc beta plays mc.hero.mc tries to die early. system is in the wrong person's hands again :D
It's so góoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
So currently I have no idea how u have yet to review already and for seemingly forgetting I'm sorry. This book is amazing! Ok I have been waiting a while for Vincent to reach the zemin clan but finally we are on the cusp on it. Though don't think from this that the novel is slow. It isn't, the fights are amazing and the character and world development is insane! I'm awed and is always waiting for the next chapter to be released. So please do not drop the book. Author its amazing and I love it!
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Awesome novel in my opinion. Well, if you like slow pacing that is. It’s not fast, but the novel itself is quite plain. Well, that’s for the best.
Good read 🔥🔥🌟⭐💥💥⭐⭐🌟🔥🌟⭐⭐💥💥⭐🌟🔥🌟⭐💥💥💥⭐🌟🔥🔥⭐⭐💥💥💥⭐🌟🌟⭐💥💥⭐🌟🌟🔥⭐💥💥💥⭐🌟🔥⭐💥💥💥⭐🌟🔥⭐⭐💥💥💥🌟⭐⭐💥💥💥🌟⭐💥💥⭐🌟🌟💥⭐🌟💥🔥💥🌟💥💥⭐⭐⭐🌟⭐💥⭐🌟💥💥⭐⭐
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Great Story! This was the first time after years of reading Webnovel stories that I bought coins and spend them on a story. Great job author, looking forward to read more!
good read. not too cliche. not a groundbreaking story but definitely a decent book here in webnovel. slow start but pace keep speeding up as the story goes. please keep wrting. goodluck....
good casual read. writing is good. a bit slow pace but understandable. keep it up. i cant get privilege but i will use my fast pass. keep writing author. :)
You can give this a try if you nothing great to read. I found some actions of MC very stupid and couldn't bring myself to read this novel any further.
interesting set up.i think i already have an idea about the celestials. please upload next chapter faster. thanks!!!!! keep it up! [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
A good book. I would suggest adding some more background details. Other than that, story development is good, character building is ok. Though, you could add a bit more emotional attachment. Writing Quality is good too.
Better than nearly any other on this site. Having read to the 90th chapter I can say these: + No cringe-edge lord characters currently + Interesting plot + Interesting power and system of the mc + Story is progressing nicely + Power is balanced and follow the logic. If mc defeats someone it is because he is higher leveled than them and also has strong items. Nothing like other novels where the story continuously say that level is the strongest but mc defeats 20 lvl higher people easily or 2 realm higher ones.
I haven't finished the story yet and I'm only in the process of reading it but it's really good so far. besides a few grammar errors and maybe a bit odd on the pacing only at some points though it's an amazing novel. great job author keep up the good work and for anyone wondering what this novel is I will probably give a full detailed review once I finish all the available chapters
One of the best novels here. The plot is really well written. The only thing that I don't like too much is the way the MC makes money, most of the times that he needs it, there would be no really good explanation and poof, there is the money, even though with his abilities that are perfect for money making, we have no exploration of such chapters.
Revelar Spoiler It's good but sometimes things are too easy for the mc. I also has a few problems with his personality, sometimes he take decisions because it's safer and in the same chapter he changes his mind especially at the beginning. Also I feel he doesn't put much effort to take his revenge from those who slaughtered his village but instead lose his time with this useless prenatal marriage. The mana drain was said to be an useless ranked 1 mana art, only efficient against an opponent unable to move or sleeping, and it became a cheat like ability soon after...
Revelar Spoiler overall is good. but i like to suggest author to make the fight scene shorter. also i feel like it gets boring since werewolf appear.
I really feel like certain aspects of the story are just taking away from it. I quite liked the story until the blindness part when it stopped having a MC. after becoming blind it really feels like its 1 chapter about Vincent and 2 chapters about the world. the blindness itself was fairly forced and lasts forever with no reasonable purpose/story benefit. does he grow from being blind? not really does the story progress due to the blindness? only ending the engagement Does the blindness have a defined purpose within any reasonable timeframe? absolutely not. 100 chapters later still blind having almost the same problems as before and more than half the chapters are not about the mc. Another in a long list of 150 chapters that are pretty good and a steep drop off after that. for me as soon as he went blind the focus became the world not the MC. At least half the story from that point became about others acting around him with short bits about his activities. I dont mind the duel but having a 100+ chapter challenge that really seems to make the mc almost irrelevant killed the story for me.
Revelar Spoiler I started reading this novel and couldn’t stop. It has some of the usual tropes, but the MC isn’t full of himself. He surrounds himself with folks who are capable (maybe too capable) of handling his affairs, but overall, the story is fun to read.
He turns blind and the entire plot just stops dead. The story at this point feels like the author is just padding. Important plot points are dropped, character progression takes a nose dive. And the whole clan thing with his fiance just made no sense. I skimmed through another 40 chapters and it's just bleh. How is this rated above 3 stars?
It started out interesting and good but at this point of the novel (late 300s), the plot route is a little unstable. “Important” characters aren’t that fleshed out and deemed irrevelant as fast as they are introduced to be important. All in all though, it’s an OK read.
I'm at ch60 now, other than the Mc's mental state apparently regressing to match his body's age for some reason, it's an above average novel, way to much information in the synopsis, it feels like a spoiler
Better than nearly any other on this site. Having read more than 300 chapters I can say these: + No cringe-edge lord characteuhrs currently + Interesting plot + Interesting power and system of the mc + Story is progressing nicely + Power is balanced and follow the logic. If mc defeats someone it is because he is higher leveled than them and also has strong items. Nothing like other novels where the story continuously say that level is the strongest but mc defeats 20 lvl higher people easily or 2 realm higher ones.
Okay, so this review is at 90~ chapters and overall, this novel is pretty solid so far. The progress is smooth, cool abilities, interesting characters. Honestly, the only thing holding it back is the inconsistent characterization of the MC. One second he is smart, another he is just plain dumb, one second he is cautious, another second he randomly wants to save people. For example, and idk if this is a small spoiler or not but there have been several times he has just watched as people he could save get slaughtered but then he will randomly want to get involved when most of them are already dead as if it will weigh on his conscience. Don't get me wrong, whether he saves them or not isn't the issue, but it feels weird for him to not care at all one second, then care a lot the next. Although it doesn't ruin the story, several times I sit back and wonder what route the author wants to take the MC because there isn't a clear sign so far.
I have read up to the current arc, mostly with free pass, so do pardon me. As much as the concept of this story is good, the writing quality and ideas seems to diminish after a while. First was the sudden marriage thing but later handled cleanly. Second was the sudden lack of magic talent which was supposed to apply to the original Vicent only. It was clear his magic talent was way to superior to most mana practitioners but suddenly, he cant learn next tier mana arts. Third was the sudden blindness which makes no sense and adds little to none to the story. From that point onward, ita like the story just go along with the flow; 'whatever comes'. It became bland without any substantial goal or target. The only end time target is the celestials which also seems bland as things are added as time goes by. There is also no short term target. Vicent just do whatever fits. The romance is also all over the place. Honestly, Yulia would have been a good option along the way but later thrown off. The romance is like a switch, on and off, new and old, and so on. Update stability is really high up there but the story quality dropped really low. Also, some characters are not properly fleshed out, they are more like 'add or do as needed' instead of a 3 dimensional character design. Anyway, I am still hoping for some improvement. If these can be worked on, the story will have a massive improvement and will definently skyrocket. Don't mind my grammar and thanks for the chapters.
The start was amazing and the concept was unique and had a good thing going for it. The change in story to an unnecessary school arc and going blind for no reason other than to try and make a deeper story ruined it and did nothing but make the writer seem like he ran out of ideas. The use of the cliche aranged marriage and having that go down the drain because some unforseen consequences was also annoying and heavily dissapointing. tl;dr - Started as a 4.5/5 dropped to a 2.6/5 Sad to see it happen.
Dont mind my rating, I gave it all 5 star because I only just started and it's good, currently at chapter 20. I can't rate it bad as I dont see anything bad in it. The o my two things I am confident in rating is the writing quality and story development, both are really great. Though, story development is a bit slow now but its understandable as the foundation needs to be properly laid. That said, this book is a HIDDEN GEM!!. But no one comments about it, I guess not many people have seen this book yet. Up to where I have read, I can assure you that it's pretty much well done and intriguing. It has a lot of potential, I mean ALOT..
A very enjoyable non cliche story. One of the first things I noticed was the similarities to sekerei with the celestials. Take from that what you will. The character is both great and has issues. he’s well written and not an edgelord but I find it feels as if he hasn’t accepted this world has reality with his zero real ambition or drive. Its nice learning about the world alongside him but also jarring when he ignore things like his childhood friends and acts very disconnected from this and other things. I enjoy the other characters even small ones has they feel real and theres actual relations being build, though this is detracted from mcs lack of connection to the world.
mc's brain doesn't work. mc moves with his emotions. mc beta plays mc.hero.mc tries to die early. system is in the wrong person's hands again :D
It's so góoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
So currently I have no idea how u have yet to review already and for seemingly forgetting I'm sorry. This book is amazing! Ok I have been waiting a while for Vincent to reach the zemin clan but finally we are on the cusp on it. Though don't think from this that the novel is slow. It isn't, the fights are amazing and the character and world development is insane! I'm awed and is always waiting for the next chapter to be released. So please do not drop the book. Author its amazing and I love it!
Revelar Spoiler Awesome novel in my opinion. Well, if you like slow pacing that is. It’s not fast, but the novel itself is quite plain. Well, that’s for the best.
Good read 🔥🔥🌟⭐💥💥⭐⭐🌟🔥🌟⭐⭐💥💥⭐🌟🔥🌟⭐💥💥💥⭐🌟🔥🔥⭐⭐💥💥💥⭐🌟🌟⭐💥💥⭐🌟🌟🔥⭐💥💥💥⭐🌟🔥⭐💥💥💥⭐🌟🔥⭐⭐💥💥💥🌟⭐⭐💥💥💥🌟⭐💥💥⭐🌟🌟💥⭐🌟💥🔥💥🌟💥💥⭐⭐⭐🌟⭐💥⭐🌟💥💥⭐⭐
Revelar Spoiler Great Story! This was the first time after years of reading Webnovel stories that I bought coins and spend them on a story. Great job author, looking forward to read more!
good read. not too cliche. not a groundbreaking story but definitely a decent book here in webnovel. slow start but pace keep speeding up as the story goes. please keep wrting. goodluck....
good casual read. writing is good. a bit slow pace but understandable. keep it up. i cant get privilege but i will use my fast pass. keep writing author. :)
You can give this a try if you nothing great to read. I found some actions of MC very stupid and couldn't bring myself to read this novel any further.
interesting set up.i think i already have an idea about the celestials. please upload next chapter faster. thanks!!!!! keep it up! [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
A good book. I would suggest adding some more background details. Other than that, story development is good, character building is ok. Though, you could add a bit more emotional attachment. Writing Quality is good too.
Better than nearly any other on this site. Having read to the 90th chapter I can say these: + No cringe-edge lord characters currently + Interesting plot + Interesting power and system of the mc + Story is progressing nicely + Power is balanced and follow the logic. If mc defeats someone it is because he is higher leveled than them and also has strong items. Nothing like other novels where the story continuously say that level is the strongest but mc defeats 20 lvl higher people easily or 2 realm higher ones.