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I drop this story after chapter 16, MC becomes so low that he reveal all his ability 🤮🤮
Ya salió la nueva película Boku no hero You te nex academia deku vs dark allmight recomendados que la vean autor también vas agregar la historia esa película??????????????????
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well today's Power stones are finished so I will write a Review Everything thing is good power level is not enough I mean he has so many quirks yet he is not that much powerful then his classmates only slightly better so what the advantage of Gamer . Don't make him but please get him ahead at least 20 or 30 more than his classmates
Good story and I do want to say please make him strong . I mean at least 30 levels ahead of his classmates
Un consejo sería bueno que mientras el mc pelea que piensa los demás mientras la pelea transcurre y también que el mc este al borde de la muerte como actuaría toga se volvería una Yandere si algo le pasa al igual que los demás que pensarían al verlo tan herido pero aún Haci sigue peleando ????????
I love this story so far and i hope you do the movies as well like two heroes heroes rising and world hero mission
There is so much dialogue but not enough detail. The is a lot of grammar errors and the mc reveals he has a system to nezu
So far I’m really enjoying the fic Only thing that is kinda annoying is the fact the mc is so strong already the group chat shit And the inaccuracy’s in the story compared to cannon then again not every story is perfect this is well made in my opinion Keep cooking author 🫡
Revelar Spoiler
El comienzo era bueno pero después el protagonista en vez de crear su propia imagen y ser original decide ser una copia que no funciona de los POWER RANGERS lo cual afecta la trama de forma negativa y le quita toda seriedad... (*Con todo respeto le pido al escritor que corrija este error los más pronto posible, si esto no se soluciona el protagonista simplemente se volverá la sombra de la serie de los POWER RANGERS aparte también que hay que aclarar que esto le quita lo más importante y es que jamás podrá crear su propia imagen como héroe ya que como e dicho es una copia que arruina los momentos serios. Solo imagínate está situación LA BATALLA FINAL allá for one vs el protagonista, los dos pelean muchos héroes caen y después el protagonista lo derrota y hace una pose con una explosión detrás de él, si eso sucede con cada villano arruinada todo*).
I'll try yo continúe read this, but put in the sinopsis that you're going to replace the Mc and that the protagonist of this novel Is edgy as hell...
ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
You know that when u find a FF that fits your taste, then suddenly you read the author name, which multiples this happiness by few time, this is what I'm feeling right now. Another epic after RWBY and Fairy tail. [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=gift][img=Your move]
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The plot and idea behind the fic is good so instead of speaking about everything I like, I’ll speak about what I don’t. Some scenes are copied from other fics, I recently read BNHA:Singularity and from there I recognized these same scenes: MC compliments frog girl and gravity girl too much and they get shy and avoid him Mina tells Jiro to spy on the boys convo due to being worried about MC Frog and gravity girl apologise to him after ignoring him Kaminari jests after the girls ignore him. The story will probably stray away from BNHA singularity in the future, but I hope that it doesn’t have many more scenes that are so similar.
Ah shit here we go again! Another yes yes yes time to read another 200 chapters
1. Some dialogues are outright stolen from other works and just don't work on this work. Example: Nezu and All Might suprise when they hear that mc's quirk name is All in One. He literally just told them about All for One and One for All, it just don't work here. At least think why are you stealing. 2. Other characters POV's are somehow incredibly dull and artificial. And considering that you put them very often that's a problem. 3. Fix your description. A lot of words with zero meaning.
The story is good but my god is so hard to read because of all the grammatical errors and mistakes. It isn't unreadable by any means, pretty well written than some of the other garbage on this app but it takes alot of effort since the author uses commas and other punctuations very wrong and the sentence formation isn't great. Also, the author can't decide whether he wants a heroic and caring mc or a manipulative mc, many times it feels like the mc is bipolar when sometimes he is manipulative and other times he feels the need to be a hero or be heroic. Most of the stuff I write here isn't anything major, just a little bit of me being nitpicky. All in all a pretty good story.👍👍
Really good just like your past fanfictions but please please keep this going dont drop it .................................................................
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
what rubish intro is this? you wrote so much to talk about your novel but you said nothing. learn to make half decent synopsis and replace this insult
WRITE A FUDGING SYNOPSIS! PLEASE! Is not that hard, instead of a bunch of nonsense just tell me what the story is about.
Author, please. NEJIRE, MOMO, TOGA, MELISSA, OUR ALIEN QUEEN MINA ASHIDO, MIRKO, KAINA AKA LADY NAGANT. AND SAVE ERI FOR THE LOVE OF RIKUDOU.
I drop this story after chapter 16, MC becomes so low that he reveal all his ability 🤮🤮
Ya salió la nueva película Boku no hero You te nex academia deku vs dark allmight recomendados que la vean autor también vas agregar la historia esa película??????????????????
EPICCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC
well today's Power stones are finished so I will write a Review Everything thing is good power level is not enough I mean he has so many quirks yet he is not that much powerful then his classmates only slightly better so what the advantage of Gamer . Don't make him but please get him ahead at least 20 or 30 more than his classmates
Good story and I do want to say please make him strong . I mean at least 30 levels ahead of his classmates
Un consejo sería bueno que mientras el mc pelea que piensa los demás mientras la pelea transcurre y también que el mc este al borde de la muerte como actuaría toga se volvería una Yandere si algo le pasa al igual que los demás que pensarían al verlo tan herido pero aún Haci sigue peleando ????????
I love this story so far and i hope you do the movies as well like two heroes heroes rising and world hero mission
There is so much dialogue but not enough detail. The is a lot of grammar errors and the mc reveals he has a system to nezu
So far I’m really enjoying the fic Only thing that is kinda annoying is the fact the mc is so strong already the group chat shit And the inaccuracy’s in the story compared to cannon then again not every story is perfect this is well made in my opinion Keep cooking author 🫡
Revelar Spoiler El comienzo era bueno pero después el protagonista en vez de crear su propia imagen y ser original decide ser una copia que no funciona de los POWER RANGERS lo cual afecta la trama de forma negativa y le quita toda seriedad... (*Con todo respeto le pido al escritor que corrija este error los más pronto posible, si esto no se soluciona el protagonista simplemente se volverá la sombra de la serie de los POWER RANGERS aparte también que hay que aclarar que esto le quita lo más importante y es que jamás podrá crear su propia imagen como héroe ya que como e dicho es una copia que arruina los momentos serios. Solo imagínate está situación LA BATALLA FINAL allá for one vs el protagonista, los dos pelean muchos héroes caen y después el protagonista lo derrota y hace una pose con una explosión detrás de él, si eso sucede con cada villano arruinada todo*).
I'll try yo continúe read this, but put in the sinopsis that you're going to replace the Mc and that the protagonist of this novel Is edgy as hell...
ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
You know that when u find a FF that fits your taste, then suddenly you read the author name, which multiples this happiness by few time, this is what I'm feeling right now. Another epic after RWBY and Fairy tail. [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=gift][img=Your move]
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
The plot and idea behind the fic is good so instead of speaking about everything I like, I’ll speak about what I don’t. Some scenes are copied from other fics, I recently read BNHA:Singularity and from there I recognized these same scenes: MC compliments frog girl and gravity girl too much and they get shy and avoid him Mina tells Jiro to spy on the boys convo due to being worried about MC Frog and gravity girl apologise to him after ignoring him Kaminari jests after the girls ignore him. The story will probably stray away from BNHA singularity in the future, but I hope that it doesn’t have many more scenes that are so similar.
Ah shit here we go again! Another yes yes yes time to read another 200 chapters
1. Some dialogues are outright stolen from other works and just don't work on this work. Example: Nezu and All Might suprise when they hear that mc's quirk name is All in One. He literally just told them about All for One and One for All, it just don't work here. At least think why are you stealing. 2. Other characters POV's are somehow incredibly dull and artificial. And considering that you put them very often that's a problem. 3. Fix your description. A lot of words with zero meaning.
The story is good but my god is so hard to read because of all the grammatical errors and mistakes. It isn't unreadable by any means, pretty well written than some of the other garbage on this app but it takes alot of effort since the author uses commas and other punctuations very wrong and the sentence formation isn't great. Also, the author can't decide whether he wants a heroic and caring mc or a manipulative mc, many times it feels like the mc is bipolar when sometimes he is manipulative and other times he feels the need to be a hero or be heroic. Most of the stuff I write here isn't anything major, just a little bit of me being nitpicky. All in all a pretty good story.👍👍
Really good just like your past fanfictions but please please keep this going dont drop it .................................................................
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
what rubish intro is this? you wrote so much to talk about your novel but you said nothing. learn to make half decent synopsis and replace this insult
WRITE A FUDGING SYNOPSIS! PLEASE! Is not that hard, instead of a bunch of nonsense just tell me what the story is about.
Author, please. NEJIRE, MOMO, TOGA, MELISSA, OUR ALIEN QUEEN MINA ASHIDO, MIRKO, KAINA AKA LADY NAGANT. AND SAVE ERI FOR THE LOVE OF RIKUDOU.
the writing is to convenient not my cup of tea really