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I gotta say this is pretty good please continue [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=update][img=update] [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
It Is a wonderful blend of world building character personality and story development all in one and deserves more love due to how good it is also to bumb this up to 140 characters hgddgffdggv ftddggggtffc
most epic and unique fanfic I have read so far. the author did a pretty good job so far.
I honestly like the story it's pretty good I like how the main character how he manipulated the war. Pretty good overall
just a solid story I loved it and no romance is a big plus best is to just try and see if it's what you like if it is just enjoy it why not try?
It's a good novel as far as I remember, I forgot most of it when the author took a break, but let's see....................................................
The way you write a manipulative MC is too tier. The MC is base on a certain slime overlord but MC rarely use the devour power which is a fresh air.
it's a good story but you should change the book cover, I thought it was a Fmc novel.
After the first uchiha predation he hasnt eaten anything worthwhile. Like arent there 20 something kekkai genkais out there why is he only sticking to wind style and umbrakinesis. Thats the only problem I see other than that the story is pretty solid.
So far i like the theme of the story and the way the mc is manipulating everyone, but please do explain to us all the ability of the Mc as it's quite confusing so far the author first said the mc is a slime and has remeru abilitys and darkness manipulation and so far all I've seen is [Predator] and little bit darkness jatsu.
is this dropped already 😂😂😂 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Writing quality: 4 stars, pretty good Story development: 4 stars, good pacing. Character Design: 5 stars, Mc is calm and composed. Has rational thoughts and does not jump to random ideas. Updating stability: 4 stars, it's good. World background: 4 stars, everyone fears the [Smiling Devil] Overall, it's good and worth reading.
I like this sort of simple evil. Just for enjoyment. No annoying romance or harem. It's also relaxing to read, probably due to the main character's calmness. Keep it up man.
Great story start the dude teams up with madara just to see his face at the end of it all what a better reason to be a villain than to do what you want when you want!!!!
Revelar Spoiler
I like this story because of it having a good manipulative like character its not like other naruto fanfictions with systems and etc, this is just a manipulative mc that isnt that edgy like Shadow from the eminence in the shadow and etc its a fresh read due to most webnovel fanfictions being about systems. Hopefully this will come back. Hopefully i can see the next chapter in a year if im still into webnovel
I gotta say this is pretty good please continue [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=update][img=update] [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
It Is a wonderful blend of world building character personality and story development all in one and deserves more love due to how good it is also to bumb this up to 140 characters hgddgffdggv ftddggggtffc
most epic and unique fanfic I have read so far. the author did a pretty good job so far.
I honestly like the story it's pretty good I like how the main character how he manipulated the war. Pretty good overall
just a solid story I loved it and no romance is a big plus best is to just try and see if it's what you like if it is just enjoy it why not try?
It's a good novel as far as I remember, I forgot most of it when the author took a break, but let's see....................................................
The way you write a manipulative MC is too tier. The MC is base on a certain slime overlord but MC rarely use the devour power which is a fresh air.
it's a good story but you should change the book cover, I thought it was a Fmc novel.
After the first uchiha predation he hasnt eaten anything worthwhile. Like arent there 20 something kekkai genkais out there why is he only sticking to wind style and umbrakinesis. Thats the only problem I see other than that the story is pretty solid.
So far i like the theme of the story and the way the mc is manipulating everyone, but please do explain to us all the ability of the Mc as it's quite confusing so far the author first said the mc is a slime and has remeru abilitys and darkness manipulation and so far all I've seen is [Predator] and little bit darkness jatsu.
is this dropped already 😂😂😂 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Writing quality: 4 stars, pretty good Story development: 4 stars, good pacing. Character Design: 5 stars, Mc is calm and composed. Has rational thoughts and does not jump to random ideas. Updating stability: 4 stars, it's good. World background: 4 stars, everyone fears the [Smiling Devil] Overall, it's good and worth reading.
I like this sort of simple evil. Just for enjoyment. No annoying romance or harem. It's also relaxing to read, probably due to the main character's calmness. Keep it up man.
Great story start the dude teams up with madara just to see his face at the end of it all what a better reason to be a villain than to do what you want when you want!!!!
Revelar Spoiler
I like this story because of it having a good manipulative like character its not like other naruto fanfictions with systems and etc, this is just a manipulative mc that isnt that edgy like Shadow from the eminence in the shadow and etc its a fresh read due to most webnovel fanfictions being about systems. Hopefully this will come back. Hopefully i can see the next chapter in a year if im still into webnovel