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What is the original fanfic? ,£!(£(!?,£;!,£,’(!,&,£.£,&,!:£;&,!.£,&,£:7,&,!:£;&,!,£:&;!,£:&:!,£&,!;,&,&,!£,&;!,&,!,&,!,&;’,&,&!;,&;’,!&,!;£,’ &’;;!,&,!
the translation sucks. It's like some used Google translate and published it here. It's in broken English. The author needs a beta to correct the grammar and some translation mistake. Can't even read the first chapter without being frustrated. hope you correct it.
Its language: gibberish ıdont know in this story moria she/he or it and is it one of the reincarnate person thingy or something else soIts language: gibberish ıdont know in this story moria she/he or it and is it one of the reincarnate person thingy or something else soIts language: gibberish ıdont know in this story moria she/he or it and is it one of the reincarnate person thingy or something else soIts language: gibberish ıdont know in this story moria she/he or it and is it one of the reincarnate person thingy or something else so
i cant love this the main character gecko moria has been in the first 5 chapters called "her, maria" and a few others. if that was not bad enough there are chinese names all over the place. you might think thats not so bad. THEY CANT EVEN GET 5 LETTERS RIGHT HOW THE F*** DO THE EXPECT TO GET CHINESE NAMES RIGHT. i could have forgiven it all of it if they where consistent with the names. but the literal first chapter is so confusing i am under the impression that a woman named maria isekaied into gecko moria after losing to kaido and has been whipped by a man named whatever for 3 years even after swearing to whatever to join kaido before breaking out. i am not even sure if thats right i had to piece this together. i shouldnt play jigsaw to enjoy a story if cant type MORIA dont right names you'll confuse everybody including yourself. im no expert this should be obvious but my final score is me being generous writing 1 star: youknow why stability of updates 4 star: this is me being kind to give you a higher score story development 3 stars: i have no idea whats going on but i get a small jist of it character design 4 stars: i like gecko morias design thats it world background 4 stars: you are playing in odas sandbox you got plenty of background noise
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good novel, is this your original novel? or just translation? if traslation can you provide the raws n author. .............................
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What is the original fanfic? ,£!(£(!?,£;!,£,’(!,&,£.£,&,!:£;&,!.£,&,£:7,&,!:£;&,!,£:&;!,£:&:!,£&,!;,&,&,!£,&;!,&,!,&,!,&;’,&,&!;,&;’,!&,!;£,’ &’;;!,&,!
the translation sucks. It's like some used Google translate and published it here. It's in broken English. The author needs a beta to correct the grammar and some translation mistake. Can't even read the first chapter without being frustrated. hope you correct it.
Its language: gibberish ıdont know in this story moria she/he or it and is it one of the reincarnate person thingy or something else soIts language: gibberish ıdont know in this story moria she/he or it and is it one of the reincarnate person thingy or something else soIts language: gibberish ıdont know in this story moria she/he or it and is it one of the reincarnate person thingy or something else soIts language: gibberish ıdont know in this story moria she/he or it and is it one of the reincarnate person thingy or something else so
i cant love this the main character gecko moria has been in the first 5 chapters called "her, maria" and a few others. if that was not bad enough there are chinese names all over the place. you might think thats not so bad. THEY CANT EVEN GET 5 LETTERS RIGHT HOW THE F*** DO THE EXPECT TO GET CHINESE NAMES RIGHT. i could have forgiven it all of it if they where consistent with the names. but the literal first chapter is so confusing i am under the impression that a woman named maria isekaied into gecko moria after losing to kaido and has been whipped by a man named whatever for 3 years even after swearing to whatever to join kaido before breaking out. i am not even sure if thats right i had to piece this together. i shouldnt play jigsaw to enjoy a story if cant type MORIA dont right names you'll confuse everybody including yourself. im no expert this should be obvious but my final score is me being generous writing 1 star: youknow why stability of updates 4 star: this is me being kind to give you a higher score story development 3 stars: i have no idea whats going on but i get a small jist of it character design 4 stars: i like gecko morias design thats it world background 4 stars: you are playing in odas sandbox you got plenty of background noise
Revelar Spoiler good novel, is this your original novel? or just translation? if traslation can you provide the raws n author. .............................
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