Reviews of Maximum Comprehension: Taking Care of Swords In A Sword Pavilion by I Am Not A Chibi - Webnovel

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LostEra
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a somewhat interesting story idea that could have led to a good novel but unfortunately the implementation of the idea is riddled with writing mistakes (not talking about the translation quality, which is also average but not what I was referring to). Things are poorly explained, there are questionable reasons why characters take an action and the world building is incomplete. It feels very much as an amateur writer who had a good idea but not the writing skills to tell the story in a way that doesn't lead to the readers often asking themselves "I wonder how this works?" or "I wonder what this means?". For example the story starts with the main character declaring that he has a super comprehension without any explanation of why that is or how he knows that his comprehension is so much better than for other people. And there are plotholes like this riddled all over the story. Characters are unimaginative in the sense that you can find them in all sorts of novels and really do not feel as characters unique to this story. The best I can say about this story is the general idea that the mc gets to see the experiences of the sword when he touches a sword is pretty unique and more important well used as a plot device. Let's hope the writing quality improves but I'm not convinced it will. There are just too many bad ideas used in the story about what should happen in a Xianxia story that I cannot imagine it can improve (eg female characters being much friendlier to him than to any other character, the young masters who want to show their influence for dumb reasons, an over confident mc whose confidence gets him into trouble (sword qi), etc.)

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xEnvy
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Did I just read the whole novel/story just by reading the synopsis? I hope this wont disappoint me. -I read the the start of the synopsis and the starting sentence hook me, and after finishing the whole synopsis, I ask myself if that is the whole story? (just wanna ask the a question in the first paragraph, but since WN won't let me post it in less than one hundred-fifty(150) letters I just use the prolonging technique that most of the author(s) uses. )

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ePythagoras

Simply amazing. Its really good. Been a while since I read something of this caliber. The responsibility and determination of the characters is something else. Its really well written. Its hard to describe. I thought it was just some generic cheat novel, oh dear I was wrong. Onto the mtl. Too bad that the quality is really abysmal, every feeling is gone now. Still cant be helped.

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Shin_Dao

nice ,...................... ........................ ........,......,......... ................ .......,.............. ...............,.........

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lazyvampiredemonas

Pretty good read, not much plot but this story focuses more about exploring the world the mc is in and the abilities he has. Somewhat slowfaced but decent enough to read when bored and highly recommended.

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DaoistTBMMI8

办毕业证/买SFU毕业证【加微208319974】买SFU文凭/办sfu毕业证/制作西蒙菲沙大学文凭/SFU高仿文凭/加拿大假学历办毕业证/买SFU毕业证【加微208319974】买SFU文凭/办sfu毕业证/制作西蒙菲沙大学文凭/SFU高仿文凭/加拿大假学历国外办证专供点!专业办国外毕业证【Q薇208319974】办国外大学文凭/国外学历认证/办理各国大学.毕业证.成绩单.留信网认证.永久存档可查<在读证明,学生卡,雅思托福成绩单,国外驾照 精品制作,原版一比一文凭!精益求精! 高精端提供以下服务: 一:毕业证、成绩单等全套材料,从防伪到印刷,水印底纹到钢印烫金, 二:留信认证,留学生信息网站永久可查 联系人:Vans 微信:bwp1368 特别关注:【业务选择办理准则】 一、工作未确定,回国需先给父母、亲戚朋友看下学历认证的情况 办理一份就读学校的毕业证成绩单即可 二、回国进私企、外企、自己做生意的情况 这些单位是不查询毕业证真伪的,而且国内没有渠道去查询国外学历认证的真假,也不需要提供真实教育部认证。鉴于此,办理一份毕业证成绩单即可 三、回国进国企、银行等事业性单位或者考公务员的情况 办理一份毕业证成绩单,递交材料到教育部,办理真实教育部认证 教育部学历认证官网 1 :所有材料真实.但资料不全,无法提供完全齐整的原件 。(如:护照、成绩单、毕业证、回国证明等材料中有遗失 的。) 2:获得真实国外最终学历学位,但国外本科学历就读经历存在问题或缺陷。 (如:国外本科是教育部不承认的,或者 是联合办学项目教育部没有备案的,或者国外本科没有正常毕业的。) 3:获得真实国外最终学历学位,并取得使馆回国证明.但国内学历经历存在问题。 (如:留学时被中介欺骗提供虚假 的申请材料;国内高中有残缺;在国内的本科或 大专是民办院校、部队院校等非国民教育范畴的学校。) 4:学分转移,联合办学等情况无法认证的。此要作为个案商讨。 5:在海外没有正常毕业的,想取得真实的学历认证书。 6:个人时间紧急,需要加急办理的。 7:时间紧迫,我们可以帮助你加急拿到证书。 办理国外文凭Qbwp1368教育部学历学位认证查询 办理国外文凭国外学历学位认证Qbwp1368一整套留学证件 助您:出国留学之路●留学回国之路●创业之路●畅行无阻●前途无忧! 诚招代理:本公司诚聘当地合作代理人员,如果你有业余时间,有兴趣就请联系我们。 敬告:面对网上有些不良个人中介,真实教育部认证故意虚假报价,毕业证、成绩单却报价很高,挖坑骗留学学生做和原版差异很大的毕业证和成绩单,却不做认证,欺骗广大留学生,请多留心!办理时请电话联系,或者视频看下对方的办公环境,办理实力,选择实体公司,以防被骗! ...

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devastated_0345

an amazing idea had a few things that didn't add up but other then that it was a great story definitely recommend although you gotta read a bit to get into it but after it's amazing

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ShamelessGengar

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!

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DaoistJ1MwDX

awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome

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FellowGodDaoist

Why are all the novels available to be picked up so bad? i really don't understand why this novel is in the top 1 so suddenly, most webnovel readers don't have brainsWhy are all the novels available to be picked up so bad? i really don't understand why this novel is in the top 1 so suddenly, most webnovel readers don't have brain, probably

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Relz
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Great book so far. I hope it gets chosen to continue, it was painful reading that last few chapters though, knowing that it might not be chosen.

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Relz
LV 15 Badge

I really really want this book to pass the trial. It's such an amazing relaxing book. I dont care if people say it's dull. It's relaxed. Quite a fun read.

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Novaburn4972

Up to chapter 40, it's well written and a fairly interesting take on the "Isekai to new world with maxed learning speed," story. It has a clear "something's going on in the background that has nothing to do with me (but DEFINITELY will in the future)," gimmick and immediately robust money making for the MC so he doesn't need to worry about that.

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AlsielLkr

____________________________________________________________________________________________ .........,............,.....................too slow pace and he's already dying...maybe he should've comprehended a cultivation technique unique for himself since he's got no aptitude for cultivation other than the max lvl comprehension

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TachibanaShiro

I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST!

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TheLittleGirl

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MIGGER_FTW

I've never bothered reviewing before. I just find it a waste of time. But this novel is just too satisfying, yes satisfying. That's the proper word to describe it. After having just read a action packed novel such a read was very relaxing and I felt sad that there are only 40 chapters.

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AuroraAustralis

I don't know anything about the world or the cultivation methods, they have barely touched on those topics. For some reason the MC can beat earth grade cultivators (second highest cultivation level we know of as of chapter 40), while basically being a cripple with zero cultivation. I read all 40 chapter and while interested at first, I quickly got bored because of how the author rambles about unimportant things. After reading through these current 40 chapters, I still understand nothing, and thr main character hasn't even started cultivation. 1.75/5

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IrregularStudent

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MIGGER_FTW

Finally! A story with REAL PLOT on the trial reads! This is not those fast-paced story that have an MC that is super arrogant, this MC is real talking character with personality. Also the other characters are not just background cardboard cutout, you can actually like some of them! Good stuff! Definitely the best out of this batch,

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TheLittleGirl

Finally! A story with REAL PLOT on the trial reads! This is not those fast-paced story that have an MC that is super arrogant, this MC is real talking character with personality. Also the other characters are not just background cardboard cutout, you can actually like some of them! Good stuff! Definitely the best out of this batch,

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Silver2285

good. _______________________________________ /\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/ _______________________________________

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TachibanaShiro

Finally! A story with REAL PLOT on the trial reads! This is not those fast-paced story that have an MC that is super arrogant, this MC is real talking character with personality. Also the other characters are not just background cardboard cutout, you can actually like some of them! Good stuff! Definitely the best out of this batch,

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leoferk

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Zero_III

if only it had more chapters it would be greatest not many translation errors but still a few good story exiting good amount of action. overall 9.9/10

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Mercury34

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HunterWolf531

seems to be a very well thought out story hopefully it will continue and be a very good story. the characters are great there's a good amount funny parts so far and it's a nice spin on the typical.

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Ashton_A

Quite a dull read, I read through it brainlessly and only at the end did I realize that I barely understood anything that was going on except for small tidbits occasionally. The power systems are mentioned every few chapters in such a small amount that it means nothing, when the mc grabs a sword he learns its experiences but most of the time you cant even tell hes in one until halfway in because it just jumps right in without a warning, confusing you. Honestly, the worst part about this novel is that its so dull you cant even realize how bad it is until you reach the end and notice that you dont remember a single thing of what you read for the past 10 chapters. Im giving it 3 stars because the idea is cool and i love what the author was trying to do, even if he ultimately didnt do it well

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FSH_Fu
LV 15 Badge

no system after transfiguration, just an extra ability. seems fun so far. hope to get more chapter soon. .

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LostEra
LV 15 Badge

a somewhat interesting story idea that could have led to a good novel but unfortunately the implementation of the idea is riddled with writing mistakes (not talking about the translation quality, which is also average but not what I was referring to). Things are poorly explained, there are questionable reasons why characters take an action and the world building is incomplete. It feels very much as an amateur writer who had a good idea but not the writing skills to tell the story in a way that doesn't lead to the readers often asking themselves "I wonder how this works?" or "I wonder what this means?". For example the story starts with the main character declaring that he has a super comprehension without any explanation of why that is or how he knows that his comprehension is so much better than for other people. And there are plotholes like this riddled all over the story. Characters are unimaginative in the sense that you can find them in all sorts of novels and really do not feel as characters unique to this story. The best I can say about this story is the general idea that the mc gets to see the experiences of the sword when he touches a sword is pretty unique and more important well used as a plot device. Let's hope the writing quality improves but I'm not convinced it will. There are just too many bad ideas used in the story about what should happen in a Xianxia story that I cannot imagine it can improve (eg female characters being much friendlier to him than to any other character, the young masters who want to show their influence for dumb reasons, an over confident mc whose confidence gets him into trouble (sword qi), etc.)

2yr
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xEnvy
LV 11 Badge

Did I just read the whole novel/story just by reading the synopsis? I hope this wont disappoint me. -I read the the start of the synopsis and the starting sentence hook me, and after finishing the whole synopsis, I ask myself if that is the whole story? (just wanna ask the a question in the first paragraph, but since WN won't let me post it in less than one hundred-fifty(150) letters I just use the prolonging technique that most of the author(s) uses. )

2yr
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ePythagoras

Simply amazing. Its really good. Been a while since I read something of this caliber. The responsibility and determination of the characters is something else. Its really well written. Its hard to describe. I thought it was just some generic cheat novel, oh dear I was wrong. Onto the mtl. Too bad that the quality is really abysmal, every feeling is gone now. Still cant be helped.

2yr
Ver 0 Respostas
Shin_Dao

nice ,...................... ........................ ........,......,......... ................ .......,.............. ...............,.........

2yr
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lazyvampiredemonas

Pretty good read, not much plot but this story focuses more about exploring the world the mc is in and the abilities he has. Somewhat slowfaced but decent enough to read when bored and highly recommended.

2yr
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DaoistTBMMI8

办毕业证/买SFU毕业证【加微208319974】买SFU文凭/办sfu毕业证/制作西蒙菲沙大学文凭/SFU高仿文凭/加拿大假学历办毕业证/买SFU毕业证【加微208319974】买SFU文凭/办sfu毕业证/制作西蒙菲沙大学文凭/SFU高仿文凭/加拿大假学历国外办证专供点!专业办国外毕业证【Q薇208319974】办国外大学文凭/国外学历认证/办理各国大学.毕业证.成绩单.留信网认证.永久存档可查<在读证明,学生卡,雅思托福成绩单,国外驾照 精品制作,原版一比一文凭!精益求精! 高精端提供以下服务: 一:毕业证、成绩单等全套材料,从防伪到印刷,水印底纹到钢印烫金, 二:留信认证,留学生信息网站永久可查 联系人:Vans 微信:bwp1368 特别关注:【业务选择办理准则】 一、工作未确定,回国需先给父母、亲戚朋友看下学历认证的情况 办理一份就读学校的毕业证成绩单即可 二、回国进私企、外企、自己做生意的情况 这些单位是不查询毕业证真伪的,而且国内没有渠道去查询国外学历认证的真假,也不需要提供真实教育部认证。鉴于此,办理一份毕业证成绩单即可 三、回国进国企、银行等事业性单位或者考公务员的情况 办理一份毕业证成绩单,递交材料到教育部,办理真实教育部认证 教育部学历认证官网 1 :所有材料真实.但资料不全,无法提供完全齐整的原件 。(如:护照、成绩单、毕业证、回国证明等材料中有遗失 的。) 2:获得真实国外最终学历学位,但国外本科学历就读经历存在问题或缺陷。 (如:国外本科是教育部不承认的,或者 是联合办学项目教育部没有备案的,或者国外本科没有正常毕业的。) 3:获得真实国外最终学历学位,并取得使馆回国证明.但国内学历经历存在问题。 (如:留学时被中介欺骗提供虚假 的申请材料;国内高中有残缺;在国内的本科或 大专是民办院校、部队院校等非国民教育范畴的学校。) 4:学分转移,联合办学等情况无法认证的。此要作为个案商讨。 5:在海外没有正常毕业的,想取得真实的学历认证书。 6:个人时间紧急,需要加急办理的。 7:时间紧迫,我们可以帮助你加急拿到证书。 办理国外文凭Qbwp1368教育部学历学位认证查询 办理国外文凭国外学历学位认证Qbwp1368一整套留学证件 助您:出国留学之路●留学回国之路●创业之路●畅行无阻●前途无忧! 诚招代理:本公司诚聘当地合作代理人员,如果你有业余时间,有兴趣就请联系我们。 敬告:面对网上有些不良个人中介,真实教育部认证故意虚假报价,毕业证、成绩单却报价很高,挖坑骗留学学生做和原版差异很大的毕业证和成绩单,却不做认证,欺骗广大留学生,请多留心!办理时请电话联系,或者视频看下对方的办公环境,办理实力,选择实体公司,以防被骗! ...

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devastated_0345

an amazing idea had a few things that didn't add up but other then that it was a great story definitely recommend although you gotta read a bit to get into it but after it's amazing

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ShamelessGengar

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!

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DaoistJ1MwDX

awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome

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FellowGodDaoist

Why are all the novels available to be picked up so bad? i really don't understand why this novel is in the top 1 so suddenly, most webnovel readers don't have brainsWhy are all the novels available to be picked up so bad? i really don't understand why this novel is in the top 1 so suddenly, most webnovel readers don't have brain, probably

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Relz
LV 15 Badge

Great book so far. I hope it gets chosen to continue, it was painful reading that last few chapters though, knowing that it might not be chosen.

2yr
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Relz
LV 15 Badge

I really really want this book to pass the trial. It's such an amazing relaxing book. I dont care if people say it's dull. It's relaxed. Quite a fun read.

2yr
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Novaburn4972

Up to chapter 40, it's well written and a fairly interesting take on the "Isekai to new world with maxed learning speed," story. It has a clear "something's going on in the background that has nothing to do with me (but DEFINITELY will in the future)," gimmick and immediately robust money making for the MC so he doesn't need to worry about that.

2yr
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AlsielLkr

____________________________________________________________________________________________ .........,............,.....................too slow pace and he's already dying...maybe he should've comprehended a cultivation technique unique for himself since he's got no aptitude for cultivation other than the max lvl comprehension

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TachibanaShiro

I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST! I LIKE THIS THE BEST!

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TheLittleGirl

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

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MIGGER_FTW

I've never bothered reviewing before. I just find it a waste of time. But this novel is just too satisfying, yes satisfying. That's the proper word to describe it. After having just read a action packed novel such a read was very relaxing and I felt sad that there are only 40 chapters.

2yr
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AuroraAustralis

I don't know anything about the world or the cultivation methods, they have barely touched on those topics. For some reason the MC can beat earth grade cultivators (second highest cultivation level we know of as of chapter 40), while basically being a cripple with zero cultivation. I read all 40 chapter and while interested at first, I quickly got bored because of how the author rambles about unimportant things. After reading through these current 40 chapters, I still understand nothing, and thr main character hasn't even started cultivation. 1.75/5

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IrregularStudent

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MIGGER_FTW

Finally! A story with REAL PLOT on the trial reads! This is not those fast-paced story that have an MC that is super arrogant, this MC is real talking character with personality. Also the other characters are not just background cardboard cutout, you can actually like some of them! Good stuff! Definitely the best out of this batch,

2yr
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TheLittleGirl

Finally! A story with REAL PLOT on the trial reads! This is not those fast-paced story that have an MC that is super arrogant, this MC is real talking character with personality. Also the other characters are not just background cardboard cutout, you can actually like some of them! Good stuff! Definitely the best out of this batch,

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Silver2285

good. _______________________________________ /\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/ _______________________________________

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TachibanaShiro

Finally! A story with REAL PLOT on the trial reads! This is not those fast-paced story that have an MC that is super arrogant, this MC is real talking character with personality. Also the other characters are not just background cardboard cutout, you can actually like some of them! Good stuff! Definitely the best out of this batch,

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leoferk

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Zero_III

if only it had more chapters it would be greatest not many translation errors but still a few good story exiting good amount of action. overall 9.9/10

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Mercury34

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HunterWolf531

seems to be a very well thought out story hopefully it will continue and be a very good story. the characters are great there's a good amount funny parts so far and it's a nice spin on the typical.

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Ashton_A

Quite a dull read, I read through it brainlessly and only at the end did I realize that I barely understood anything that was going on except for small tidbits occasionally. The power systems are mentioned every few chapters in such a small amount that it means nothing, when the mc grabs a sword he learns its experiences but most of the time you cant even tell hes in one until halfway in because it just jumps right in without a warning, confusing you. Honestly, the worst part about this novel is that its so dull you cant even realize how bad it is until you reach the end and notice that you dont remember a single thing of what you read for the past 10 chapters. Im giving it 3 stars because the idea is cool and i love what the author was trying to do, even if he ultimately didnt do it well

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FSH_Fu
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no system after transfiguration, just an extra ability. seems fun so far. hope to get more chapter soon. .

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