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This novel had been in my saved list for 9 months before that's how interesting it was and still is. Author San if u are still alive can you continue on this novel please Thank you
good story thought giving him powers where no one else has powers is just kinda boring since nothing to challenge him also did anyone notice author is giving the same response to everyone who has Criticised his system like it's literally copy and paste even if the review isn't talking about the same thing
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I really like the way the author developed the mc's character development and I love the idea of the continental. the story's pace is going also well so far, so far I love this novel. please also bring "JW" to the story.
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10/10 love the novel so far.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤please continue.
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I really like the story my only issue is that the chapters are updated so slow🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Muito bom esse texto que você fez eu gostei muito do seu esforço e da sua própria atenção em relação ao tempo aí quando acho que meus pensamentos estavam focalizada em ler
Hi! This is my first review. Coming from a person who has not watched Peaky Blinders and my history of consuming various media, I wanted to give my honest opinion. With the way the story has been, I guess I'm lovin' it. There hasn't been a major issue with writing quality, so I have been basically able to zoom through the read. I personally don't care about daily uploads so go at your own pace! The character development is there, but I know that you might pull some flashbacks (or not) for his bond with Viktor and his "family" after WW1 and maybe try to improve with the Shelby's considering what you have in store. I was kind of brushed off seeing how Viktor left Amy abruptly, but I was thinking that you were giving the feeling of a rushed decision from the perspective of Amy. Then again I somewhat realized you did that intentionally for some reason, like with joining the Shelby's. Some things that can be worked upon are world background. Because I have not looked at Peaky Blinders, I know we aren't into major plot lines, however I think this could get some spotlight, with the stuff behind it. And perhaps recurring themes in post-WW1 vibes in USA to Britain. Although I suppose this must have been a harsh read, I am waiting for more no matter how maddening you drive the story. In a nutshell, have fun!
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Revelar Spoiler Muito bom uma das melhores Fanfics que já li no site cada capítulo emocionante culto mais leu mas eu quero ler sem parar por um instante você sabe muito bem como deixar nós na expectativa de querer ler próximo capítulo
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very very promising story but very poorly executed. My impression after reading this novel is "Gangster Wannabe", It's very rigid and there's not an element of tension there should be. The author of this story may have a head full of ideas, but he is a writer who is not able to put his ideas into a good story.
the story has a good idea and an interesting main character but he has a system and what spoiled the story in my opinion this happens because his system is very OP honestly the MC is in a world where magic and powers don't exist if his system was weaker and didn't give supernatural abilities to the MC the story would be much better since with the MC system and the only person in the world with powers that makes the story very boring
honestly the story has a good idea and a very interesting MC but in my opinion the only thing that spoiled the story was the system i really don't like stories with speechless system that This makes MC ridiculously OP since he is in a normal world with no magic or super powers
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
The main story is good. The idea of the main character and his surroundings sounds good. But the biggest turn-off for me was the system. It does not suit the era and the story at all. Especially one that sounds more like a human than an ai. Because of the system, I had to skip when mc interacts with the system because all of the sudden, the tone and vibe of the story change from a dark world to a sunny and full of light one. If you want to include a system to that kind of world, take a read at the Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?). The author of this novel implanted a system that suits the current world/theme of the story. It is not interactive, it is not focused. It just exists there and you forget about it unless the mc uses it directly. I'm being harsh here because the story has a lot of potential. If done right, it should explode. Especially since I can't find peaky blinders fanfiction that is, well, stories and not full-on romances that don't make sense.
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Автор, а ты есть на русскоязычных сайтах для фанфов?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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This novel had been in my saved list for 9 months before that's how interesting it was and still is. Author San if u are still alive can you continue on this novel please Thank you
good story thought giving him powers where no one else has powers is just kinda boring since nothing to challenge him also did anyone notice author is giving the same response to everyone who has Criticised his system like it's literally copy and paste even if the review isn't talking about the same thing
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*not based on the fanfic* some guy clearly left a review 3 times with alt accounts, so I counter him. ************************************
Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia Buena historia[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really like the way the author developed the mc's character development and I love the idea of the continental. the story's pace is going also well so far, so far I love this novel. please also bring "JW" to the story.
Revelar Spoiler 10/10 love the novel so far.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤please continue.
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I really like the story my only issue is that the chapters are updated so slow🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Muito bom esse texto que você fez eu gostei muito do seu esforço e da sua própria atenção em relação ao tempo aí quando acho que meus pensamentos estavam focalizada em ler
Hi! This is my first review. Coming from a person who has not watched Peaky Blinders and my history of consuming various media, I wanted to give my honest opinion. With the way the story has been, I guess I'm lovin' it. There hasn't been a major issue with writing quality, so I have been basically able to zoom through the read. I personally don't care about daily uploads so go at your own pace! The character development is there, but I know that you might pull some flashbacks (or not) for his bond with Viktor and his "family" after WW1 and maybe try to improve with the Shelby's considering what you have in store. I was kind of brushed off seeing how Viktor left Amy abruptly, but I was thinking that you were giving the feeling of a rushed decision from the perspective of Amy. Then again I somewhat realized you did that intentionally for some reason, like with joining the Shelby's. Some things that can be worked upon are world background. Because I have not looked at Peaky Blinders, I know we aren't into major plot lines, however I think this could get some spotlight, with the stuff behind it. And perhaps recurring themes in post-WW1 vibes in USA to Britain. Although I suppose this must have been a harsh read, I am waiting for more no matter how maddening you drive the story. In a nutshell, have fun!
Revelar Spoiler Thank you ❤️ Thank you ❤️ Thank you ❤️ Than you ❤️ Thank you ❤️ nice 🥰 nice 🥰 nice 🥰 nice 🥰 nice 🥰 nice 🥰 nice 🥰 nice 🥰 nice 🥰 nice 🥰 nice 🥰 nice 🥰 nice 🥰 nice 🥰
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Revelar Spoiler Muito bom uma das melhores Fanfics que já li no site cada capítulo emocionante culto mais leu mas eu quero ler sem parar por um instante você sabe muito bem como deixar nós na expectativa de querer ler próximo capítulo
Cara tá uma coisa maravilhosa essa fic continue e sempre terá minhas 2 pedras do poder diariamente bro.<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
very very promising story but very poorly executed. My impression after reading this novel is "Gangster Wannabe", It's very rigid and there's not an element of tension there should be. The author of this story may have a head full of ideas, but he is a writer who is not able to put his ideas into a good story.
the story has a good idea and an interesting main character but he has a system and what spoiled the story in my opinion this happens because his system is very OP honestly the MC is in a world where magic and powers don't exist if his system was weaker and didn't give supernatural abilities to the MC the story would be much better since with the MC system and the only person in the world with powers that makes the story very boring
honestly the story has a good idea and a very interesting MC but in my opinion the only thing that spoiled the story was the system i really don't like stories with speechless system that This makes MC ridiculously OP since he is in a normal world with no magic or super powers
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
The main story is good. The idea of the main character and his surroundings sounds good. But the biggest turn-off for me was the system. It does not suit the era and the story at all. Especially one that sounds more like a human than an ai. Because of the system, I had to skip when mc interacts with the system because all of the sudden, the tone and vibe of the story change from a dark world to a sunny and full of light one. If you want to include a system to that kind of world, take a read at the Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?). The author of this novel implanted a system that suits the current world/theme of the story. It is not interactive, it is not focused. It just exists there and you forget about it unless the mc uses it directly. I'm being harsh here because the story has a lot of potential. If done right, it should explode. Especially since I can't find peaky blinders fanfiction that is, well, stories and not full-on romances that don't make sense.
good work, I feel this work will be very long ＼(ﾟｰﾟ＼)ヘ(￣ω￣ヘ)＼(ﾟｰﾟ＼)ヘ(￣ω￣ヘ)＼(ﾟｰﾟ＼)＼(ﾟｰﾟ＼)ヘ(￣ω￣ヘ)＼(ﾟｰﾟ＼)＼(ﾟｰﾟ＼)ヾ( ͝° ͜ʖ͡°)ノ♪└|∵|┐♪⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾₍₍◞( •௰• )◟₎₎(＾3＾♪♪～(´ε｀ )♪～(´ε｀ )₍₍◞( •௰• )◟₎₎⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾(｢`･ω･)｢ヽ(*ﾟｰﾟ*)ﾉ
Автор, а ты есть на русскоязычных сайтах для фанфов?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Eu quero mais mais mais por favor 😢 Essa foi a primeira vez que eu li uma Fanfic desse estilo manda esse último Capítulo me deixou cheio de emoção para ler ainda mais muito bom muito bom muito bom
Muito bom e só vai fixar melhor com o tempo [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] ----------------‐--------------------------------------^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^》》》》》》》》》》》》》》》》》♤¤♡◇♧♡♡♡♧
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