Am I Lewd Enough??

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PunishmeCommander

please like this comment need exp expexpexp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp pppp p p p p p pp pp p p p p p p btw nice novel vddldldldldl llflc

LV 4

FBI_LOLI

This author need a private lesson with Master Bonkai. Wijdnsnwjsjdndnwiwidjdnekwodjcndjwisidjdjwkwikddkdkdjwkwkskwkskskwjdkdjnkwdkfiekdjss

LV 3

ImolaZero

for the people who like this hot garbage please for the sake of everyone who knows you or will know you in the future please kill your selves.

LV 7

Blue_Torch

MC is a piece of meat, there is no nothing good about mc as a male, i am okay if mc is a trap, but maybe have strong strength or big PP, but no, author just choose the setting mc is weak, have illness, and small PP.

LV 11

kamehgahskiida

The f did I just read? lol he's not a femboy but a Female in Man's Name!! the FL all got D and MC he got PP. G•re and R@p€ included. Don't be tainted and stop while you still have chance. I thought it's promising and he is just like that at beginning and he'll take revenge like other MC but NOOooo he is m@soch!stic who would love to be F'ed under some FL with big D. Author has interesting imagination and concept (it's good if characters are normal lol) but atleast he/ she should just make it more acceptable.

LV 11

Tipota

This novel is the best I need more like it! Do xp xp xp xp like yes Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp X x Xp Xp P Xp P Xp Xp Xp

No you are not lewd enough you need practice more about being lewd. Practice more you have big potential (small potential) Okay thanks for reading this pointless review

LV 13

Tristan_8396

I tried, it was disturbing and disgusting normal people dont read at all please (for your mental safety, i really want to puke)

LV 1

Hanimated

Just started it and you can tell that its gonna be amazing, the wording used is perfect and the world description is so good. The writing in this novel is actually some of the best i've ever seen, even compared to some 5star novels. Thank you author for writing this amazing novel and please keep it up

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Librarian_Heroen

More! Please more! I loved you story! It is what I was searching for! A trap mc with a good story and background. I don't know if the mc will be h****, but I want to read more. Thank you for all!

LV 5

shyfix291

nice one author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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galactica

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Chocky_Milk_Lover

I'm ashamed I kinda liked this, but I can see how it's not everyone's cup of tea.

LV 3

GURU

this novel is one of it's kind except that,"his hips for her pleasure" but they're both from the same author. so, idk i guess it could be said that the author is the only one who can make such masterpieces. but my main puropose coming here to comment was so i could plead to the author to make one more short story like the "his hips for her pleasure" which is set in an omegaverse with a pretty omega boy and protective alpha female lead where our MC can charm anyone regardless of their gender, so please author... if you have time please think about it.

LV 15

avid_reader3321

great read lovable characters would love it if u could make images of the characters even a.i generated or something like that p.s is there an actove discord link?

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Hanimated

VERY GOOD [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Futadomboy234

👍👍.

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Anubismark

just... why... like, if this is a kink thing, fine, I get it... but why...

Перевод не лучший, мир пока не раскрыт так подробно, но ещё не конец истории, так что жду усиления персонажей и пополнения в команде Уиллоу.