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I really enjoyed this story so far, i really recommend this story for reading. 👍👍👍👍❤️👌👌👌🙂
I'm addicted to this. Hey author, when will you continue this again... I'm not able to control myself 😔 Please update the chaps asap.
I think it is going to be a dark novel as author didn't give #no ntr #no Yuri, in description just let my hunch not come true in future like again being betray
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Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
ay brotha, im really liking what im seeing and i literally just spent 50$ just to unlock the rest of the chapters so theese thangs better keep coming.keep it up😊👍
I love it! Probably one of the best up start harem novels out. Fear not for the unlikeable tropes are simply a tease. Most of them for me anyway.
Amazingly written man! Would recommend it to anyone haha - the introduction alone has me haha. Very interesting to see how it plays out as I read along though! So far, I'm finding it captivating.
good story good character development i give it a 4 but it would be a 5 if there wasn't so many misspelt word
Only 22 chaps in but stuff feels rushed and there are random jumps in between words. The grammar isn’t the best but it’ getting better as the story progressess. It’s a good book but there is a lot of stuff that needs improvement. Other than that no more complaints
Story and pass not bad. Decent world build, characters can go from being all over the place or feel 1d like 0-100 which is confusing. The most annoying thing though is too much unnecessary auntie notes/interjections, just be confident that readers can understand. And reduce all the stuff at end of each chapter, really sucks when you have speech on and it drags on endlessly
I love this book. The story has a very high potential. The characters are very loving. Harem route is progressing well. Ideal fantasy world. I wish more chapters were updated weekly.
good novel, writing quality is a bit hit or miss at times, updating is super slow almost feels like I need to re read the story to know what is going on
I have only read starting 30-40 chapters but I love it. i just want to confirm if author has permanently dropped it or will it be resumed some day...
From what I've been reading, it's pretty good, my only question is that there won't be yuri in the harem, right?
1. U got a big bick 2. U read wrong that. 3. U read that wrong as well. 4. U checked 5. U smiled. . . . . Now give me like and exp thanks.
it's okay autor is sometimes lazy in the early chapter , the story is also good the problem is him hiding his background and that It turned to a premium novel
The story itself is okay, a normal novel, it isnt bad but nothing which really captured me. Reason for it, probably is that there are so many grammar mistakes and other kind of mistakes which are really annoying. And author is lazy, he sometimes use "u" instead of you, another - point is that he even wrote his mc name wrong once, sadly author doesnt care about his readers and doesnt fix anything
...........................................................................................................it is good i just hope u dont drop it.
This is the type of novel that I love the most in WebNovel; the storytelling is captivating. I just hope for an interesting development of the story and a beautiful ending. I highly recommend this.
Although I have read many reincarnation stories this one seems a bit different. It have a lot of potential but it will be great if the author just went through and fix the little mistakes in the sentences. Anyhow that doesn't mean the story is bad. It was perfectly fine and it keeps anyone engaged. Story development is OK. The loving charecter suddenly getting changed into a pervy one is little bit of irritation for me but still the book is worth a try. Keep it up author let your story influence many as possible.
The characterisation of the different people appearing in this story is what sold me on it. The worldbuilding is good and the characters are enjoyable to read about. I think there are certain aspects of this story that could be done better, like the formatting of the text in some parts. However, other than that, it is a book with a lot of promise and I hope to see the author get even better in the future. Good luck, keep it up!
This novel has the potential I must say. I can sense the passion of the author in his creation. Though it was still not in its perfect form yet and has to be improved. But don't fret! You will improve in just a whim, you won't notice it. As I observe, you need to practice the flow of narration. World-building is solid and is its core. As for the character interactions, they were cheeky and wholesome. I can see myself when I am still beginning to write haha 😂 Good luck with your journey! All the best 👍
what i enjoyed was the world creation and the events that are playing out to a certain point. The author has a nice writing style that is vey simple and clean. There is a lot of potential to the story. whever it goes, good luck author.
Welcome To The ALUCARD Family Author here: I just wanted to make a novel with magic , action , romance, ecchi with a op MC with a Successful Harem. it's just a package of all. I hope you enjoy it. I will try to upload regularly. Leave a comment It helps me understand the readers minds better. Don't forget to share. Thanks to everyone supporting me. ALUCARD
I love this book and I'm glad I didn't skip it like how I wanted to earlier Skip it. It has surpassed my expectations, I can see the author's hard work in trying to make his book great and I applaud him. I like Alex as a character, even the plot is well organized. I can't say much but I highly recommend this reincarnation story to those who love this types of book, its worth the read.
I really enjoyed this story so far, i really recommend this story for reading. 👍👍👍👍❤️👌👌👌🙂
I'm addicted to this. Hey author, when will you continue this again... I'm not able to control myself 😔 Please update the chaps asap.
I think it is going to be a dark novel as author didn't give #no ntr #no Yuri, in description just let my hunch not come true in future like again being betray
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
ay brotha, im really liking what im seeing and i literally just spent 50$ just to unlock the rest of the chapters so theese thangs better keep coming.keep it up😊👍
I love it! Probably one of the best up start harem novels out. Fear not for the unlikeable tropes are simply a tease. Most of them for me anyway.
Amazingly written man! Would recommend it to anyone haha - the introduction alone has me haha. Very interesting to see how it plays out as I read along though! So far, I'm finding it captivating.
good story good character development i give it a 4 but it would be a 5 if there wasn't so many misspelt word
Only 22 chaps in but stuff feels rushed and there are random jumps in between words. The grammar isn’t the best but it’ getting better as the story progressess. It’s a good book but there is a lot of stuff that needs improvement. Other than that no more complaints
Story and pass not bad. Decent world build, characters can go from being all over the place or feel 1d like 0-100 which is confusing. The most annoying thing though is too much unnecessary auntie notes/interjections, just be confident that readers can understand. And reduce all the stuff at end of each chapter, really sucks when you have speech on and it drags on endlessly
I love this book. The story has a very high potential. The characters are very loving. Harem route is progressing well. Ideal fantasy world. I wish more chapters were updated weekly.
good novel, writing quality is a bit hit or miss at times, updating is super slow almost feels like I need to re read the story to know what is going on
I have only read starting 30-40 chapters but I love it. i just want to confirm if author has permanently dropped it or will it be resumed some day...
From what I've been reading, it's pretty good, my only question is that there won't be yuri in the harem, right?
1. U got a big bick 2. U read wrong that. 3. U read that wrong as well. 4. U checked 5. U smiled. . . . . Now give me like and exp thanks.
it's okay autor is sometimes lazy in the early chapter , the story is also good the problem is him hiding his background and that It turned to a premium novel
The story itself is okay, a normal novel, it isnt bad but nothing which really captured me. Reason for it, probably is that there are so many grammar mistakes and other kind of mistakes which are really annoying. And author is lazy, he sometimes use "u" instead of you, another - point is that he even wrote his mc name wrong once, sadly author doesnt care about his readers and doesnt fix anything
...........................................................................................................it is good i just hope u dont drop it.
This is the type of novel that I love the most in WebNovel; the storytelling is captivating. I just hope for an interesting development of the story and a beautiful ending. I highly recommend this.
Although I have read many reincarnation stories this one seems a bit different. It have a lot of potential but it will be great if the author just went through and fix the little mistakes in the sentences. Anyhow that doesn't mean the story is bad. It was perfectly fine and it keeps anyone engaged. Story development is OK. The loving charecter suddenly getting changed into a pervy one is little bit of irritation for me but still the book is worth a try. Keep it up author let your story influence many as possible.
The characterisation of the different people appearing in this story is what sold me on it. The worldbuilding is good and the characters are enjoyable to read about. I think there are certain aspects of this story that could be done better, like the formatting of the text in some parts. However, other than that, it is a book with a lot of promise and I hope to see the author get even better in the future. Good luck, keep it up!
This novel has the potential I must say. I can sense the passion of the author in his creation. Though it was still not in its perfect form yet and has to be improved. But don't fret! You will improve in just a whim, you won't notice it. As I observe, you need to practice the flow of narration. World-building is solid and is its core. As for the character interactions, they were cheeky and wholesome. I can see myself when I am still beginning to write haha 😂 Good luck with your journey! All the best 👍
what i enjoyed was the world creation and the events that are playing out to a certain point. The author has a nice writing style that is vey simple and clean. There is a lot of potential to the story. whever it goes, good luck author.
Welcome To The ALUCARD Family Author here: I just wanted to make a novel with magic , action , romance, ecchi with a op MC with a Successful Harem. it's just a package of all. I hope you enjoy it. I will try to upload regularly. Leave a comment It helps me understand the readers minds better. Don't forget to share. Thanks to everyone supporting me. ALUCARD
I love this book and I'm glad I didn't skip it like how I wanted to earlier Skip it. It has surpassed my expectations, I can see the author's hard work in trying to make his book great and I applaud him. I like Alex as a character, even the plot is well organized. I can't say much but I highly recommend this reincarnation story to those who love this types of book, its worth the read.