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Very good story there is very few fanfic of Dxd with ancient history 😊☺️🥰. .................. Author san is mc going to have Magic Eyes of Destruction just like lord Shiva if he you can gave him the demon king academy Magic/Demonic Eyes
have 0 idea what there talking about and who any of the people are couldnt connect with any of them had to drop it less than half way
Nice, amazing, super I don't know what there is 40 words needed anyways I am done with them now
Please read this AS A STORY!!! Religious talk has always ruined things, so please people DON'T bring religious superiority here! This is hindu mythology of DXD! NOT REAL LIFE!
love your book, great read.hope you can continue it to end[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good story! But sadly i will not continue this because i didn't understand every single thing in the story or Hindu Mythology. So i will just leave a 5 star here.... Goodbye~~~
Amazing finally a fricking Hindu fanfic not Devils LETTTTS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Amazing concept 😍 🤩😍 🤩 .................................................................................................................
This is really great I like it [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
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the rating is 5,5,4,4,5 respectively. ...........................................................................................................................
Just Gonna give this a try because of the idea and the concept. Afterall very very extremely few and far between have choosen this world background for a DXD fanfic. Hope the author doesn't ruins it like other DXD fanfic. 5 star just for the idea and concept.
Great so far . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Gr8 fic, grammar is good(it's more than readable and don't why some are complaining about grammar), plot is well established since it is based on Hindu mythology mc is gonna be op, really exited for the start of dxd ploy [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Amazing fanfic every info was given properly there was no huge info dump and some which were explained y boit hindu mythology there is almost no grammatical errors
if the MC is self insert I hope he doesn't let India be colonized or he let islam and Buddhaism take root in India , I understand it in real life but not in dxd because the Hindu faction is strongest in the whole anime
nice novel one can give it a try ..................................................................................................................................................................................
The idea is very very interesting and I am excited for the action scenes as your good forte is only that. Not criticising just telling what it is and I hope you pay more attention to spelling mistakes and the update speed should be good.
Man for me it's a great novel and i really hope you will complete this fan fiction and won't drop it or haitus it. And this fan fiction has great story love the the fan fiction
Mc is not a good boy and since he grows up between Asuras he will be a little Cold and bad towards others. I don't think I need to tell you why it is a five star
good start, the story is very interesting even though the chapters are still few and i don't know the hindu mythology story(Google translate)
Andakashura is God Born Between Shiva & Parvati. Will He Hide His eyes Because If he's open his than it will bring disaster to everyone. So Will hide his eyes like Gojo.
If you're writing a fan-fic based on Hindu mythology then at least keep the basic level of respect as in the entire story, the things done were not something that anyone of that time would have done. Even if it was the Asuras, they would still follow basic rules. Overall, the things in the story can't even come close to what really happened as the timeline should be in satyuga.
Very good story there is very few fanfic of Dxd with ancient history 😊☺️🥰. .................. Author san is mc going to have Magic Eyes of Destruction just like lord Shiva if he you can gave him the demon king academy Magic/Demonic Eyes
have 0 idea what there talking about and who any of the people are couldnt connect with any of them had to drop it less than half way
Nice, amazing, super I don't know what there is 40 words needed anyways I am done with them now
Please read this AS A STORY!!! Religious talk has always ruined things, so please people DON'T bring religious superiority here! This is hindu mythology of DXD! NOT REAL LIFE!
love your book, great read.hope you can continue it to end[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good story! But sadly i will not continue this because i didn't understand every single thing in the story or Hindu Mythology. So i will just leave a 5 star here.... Goodbye~~~
Amazing finally a fricking Hindu fanfic not Devils LETTTTS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Amazing concept 😍 🤩😍 🤩 .................................................................................................................
This is really great I like it [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
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the rating is 5,5,4,4,5 respectively. ...........................................................................................................................
Just Gonna give this a try because of the idea and the concept. Afterall very very extremely few and far between have choosen this world background for a DXD fanfic. Hope the author doesn't ruins it like other DXD fanfic. 5 star just for the idea and concept.
Great so far . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Gr8 fic, grammar is good(it's more than readable and don't why some are complaining about grammar), plot is well established since it is based on Hindu mythology mc is gonna be op, really exited for the start of dxd ploy [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Amazing fanfic every info was given properly there was no huge info dump and some which were explained y boit hindu mythology there is almost no grammatical errors
if the MC is self insert I hope he doesn't let India be colonized or he let islam and Buddhaism take root in India , I understand it in real life but not in dxd because the Hindu faction is strongest in the whole anime
nice novel one can give it a try ..................................................................................................................................................................................
The idea is very very interesting and I am excited for the action scenes as your good forte is only that. Not criticising just telling what it is and I hope you pay more attention to spelling mistakes and the update speed should be good.
Man for me it's a great novel and i really hope you will complete this fan fiction and won't drop it or haitus it. And this fan fiction has great story love the the fan fiction
Mc is not a good boy and since he grows up between Asuras he will be a little Cold and bad towards others. I don't think I need to tell you why it is a five star
good start, the story is very interesting even though the chapters are still few and i don't know the hindu mythology story(Google translate)
Andakashura is God Born Between Shiva & Parvati. Will He Hide His eyes Because If he's open his than it will bring disaster to everyone. So Will hide his eyes like Gojo.
If you're writing a fan-fic based on Hindu mythology then at least keep the basic level of respect as in the entire story, the things done were not something that anyone of that time would have done. Even if it was the Asuras, they would still follow basic rules. Overall, the things in the story can't even come close to what really happened as the timeline should be in satyuga.