I am the patriarch of Naruto

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xlvlx

Interesting and has potential. I hope he gets kaguya in his harem and revive mikoto and kushina to join his harem too. Keep up the good work and pls update more!

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mikedanger

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

LV 4

DAOIST_SUPREME

I liked 😁

LV 4

mastermanking

I liked it but the recent chapter showed the main guy doesn't care about his wife's feelings if he can simple make her and his new wife kiss and get along after her son died I am giving it up but that's just my taste I still believe the writing is great and the story has alot of promise but the simple lack of respect for the wife's feelings turned me off of it hope everyone who reads this has a good day

LV 5

jeanpierregerardo

I don't know how the story will progress, if he just waits for his sons to come out quickly and take care of everything (if there is no progress in the protagonist's strength, the story would be boring).

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Daoisttt

Best work (pioneer's word!) Best work (pioneer's word!) Best work (pioneer's word!) Best work (pioneer's word!) Best work (pioneer's word!) Best work (pioneer's word!)

LV 4

noliferslol

I think that the concept of a system that will make it fundamentally impossible for the MC to become OP in traditional terms is interesting considering that theres so many wish fulfillment stories where the MC has a system and gets to be instantly OP through some convenient system assigned Saitama workout quest. Though I would prefer MC's patriarch charm to be nerfed since it makes any romance forced.

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AdolfH

Good..............................Good..............................Good "Reverend Insanity"......."Reverend insanity"........"reverend Insanity"..........."reverend insanity"

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TruthHurtsX1000

Its a rap3 book pretty much. Guy cant even name his kids other than numbers as well. Its honestly just a fulfillment ff with mind rap3 and rap3 because that what it is. People trying saying its not but it is...was hoping more for a clan building that made sense and took some effort...

LV 4

Will_Caruso

Thanks for the chapter! Still not sure about not naming his kids. Makes him sound like a tool!!! [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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KillerofGods

I like it and hope you don't drop. 😀

LV 2

Vandalism

Liking the story so far, just hoping for faster updates. I'm not one for posting reviews all that often. the system is unique, haven't come across another story that has it so far.

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

Author, can you stop sabotaging Mc? It's annoying and spoils the story. If you're having trouble coming up with a way to make Mc strong, you can use the ability to copy the powers and abilities of the women he impregnates. And in order not to OP Mc (so quickly), Mc will have to train and gain experience to perfectly control the copied powers.

LV 1

kuchufli_tuyo

The idea was fine at first but I realized that the mc is going to be weak and will have to be protected by his children, from what I understand, patriarchs or leaders in general are strong, intelligent or have some special ability. The system is one of the worst I've seen, I saw many comments that said it's realistic and when someone wanted the mc to be stronger and they asked me what's realistic about a baby being born in 2 weeks, I left it in chapter 22 I didn't want to keep wasting time (Google translator).

LV 1

Zenos_Maxima2611

how do i say it? mc is trash and weak where he is just an ordinary guy with a "stallion" system. Mc's child growth is too absurd for me, only a few 1 or 2 weeks already 20 years old. the writing text sounds like a chinese novel, ugh it makes my head hurt with PTSD this chinese nuanced text.

LV 2

executionner

Good but slow story Good but slow story Good but slow story Good but slow story Good but slow story Good but slow story Good but slow story Good but slow story

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Josefs012

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Za_Warudo_3385

A história é boa, mas existe um problema, tem muitos capítulos +18, para mim já se tornou um filler, e também faz 11 dias que o autor não posta novos capítulos, eu tenho medo que ele abandone...

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100Ismymiddlename

good....................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

DungeonLife

This whole story is very interesting. The MC's wives have somewhat of a personality. The MC is quite smart after a few mistakes. This is for me a new take on Naruto being more realistic and dark.