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I like the idea and what I think the plot is. But the writing is just not what I expected, so I think it would be better to read this story with an open mind
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"This is some Xianxia ꜱʜɪᴛ.............................................................................................................................. I don't hate it."
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Writing quality is 2.5/5 The story is a idea verygood. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=fp]
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I like the idea and what I think the plot is. But the writing is just not what I expected, so I think it would be better to read this story with an open mind
Author, do you use google docs? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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"This is some Xianxia ꜱʜɪᴛ.............................................................................................................................. I don't hate it."
This looks good so far. interesting concept. excited to read more. This looks good so far. interesting concept. excited to read more.This looks good so far. interesting concept. excited to read more.
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